Ishq ki Highway || MegHan SS //Updt CH-4 @ Pg-9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HELLO N HII TO ALL NBTians 🤗


This is my first fiction writing in NBT Forum ... Hope i m going to welcomed happily by u all ... 😳

Anyway lets start ...


CHARACTERS :----

MOHAN BHATNAGAR , MEGHA BHATNAGAR , NAVIKA , RIMJHIM , JIJIBUA , ANUPAMA and some others...

I m going to keep the characters as per show like Mohan as Boss , Navila as a journalist under Mohan ...so no CS...only 6 main character names i have mentioned...


The story is based on one day journey of this characters with the whole team of Aawaz India as they all are going on a office picnic with their family. Mohan with his daughter RJ and Navika with her mom Megha and Jijibua as their family...And Anupama is all alone as she has no family member in Indore...

One think i forgot to mention is they are going to a Picnic Spot which is 1:30 hours journey from Indore and they have a plan to return within 9:00 pm that day...


So the journey begins and uske sath sath dher saara fun , dhamal , mauj , masti , kuch takrar , kuch inkaar , and most important Pyaar...



This SS would have been 3/4 parts... First part will be update soon... 😉 😊 😊



Till then Bye Bye Doston... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~INDEX~~


CHAPTER : 1 @ pg 1

CHAPTER : 2 @ pg 5

CHAPTER : 3 @ pg 8

CHAPTER : 4 @ pg 9
Edited by Megher_Palok - 12 years ago
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5:00 am in Vyas House

"Nanhi jaldi utho, kal tak to tum iss picnic ke liye pagal ho rehi thi, aur aaj uth hi nahi reho ho!" with this words Megha pulls down her blanket.

Now Nanhi gets up with a jerk and Megha says her its not 5:00am but its only 5:30 am beta with a smirk. "Kya mummy aap ko mujhe phele jagana chahiye tha na" and Navika rushes to washroom ordering Megha to make Jijibua ready quickly.

In the hall Megha and Jiji waiting for Nanhi. She comes and Megha ask her " Nanhi we are going to your office picnic and still we dont know what your boss name is". *Nanhi with her head down and biting her lips* Answers Megha "Name me kya rakha hai aap to khud jake unse mil reheho naa,ab chalo nahi to hum sach me late ho jayenge" *with a sigh of realief* as Megha accepts her words.

On the other hand Papu and his Jaan are all set for leaving suddenly Jaan asks "Papu aaj to aap ne bola hi nahi main kaisa lag raha hun ?". "Kyun aaj kya tujhe dekhne ladkewale aarehe hai ! pehle to kavi aise tipical ladkiyaan jaisi sawal nahi ki tune" Mohan replies all smiling. "Papu ye jaruri to nahi ke sirf mujhe hi koi dekhne aa sakte hain, apko bhi dekhne koi aa sakti hain naa, to uss time mujhe bhi to achcha dikhna chahiye naa" this time Rims answer makes Mohan more confuse and he asks Kya? ."Kuch nahi Papu jaldi chalo" Rim shouts and they drives off to office.

At the office Anu walking here and there because all her emploies has come except her new Editor in Chief and her star reporter.


"Mam what happen you are looking streesed"Navika asks. "I was waiting for you and Mo.." Sir ab tak nahi aaye" Navika inturrupts Anu. Btw she is my mom and my Jijibua... Navika introduced her family to Anu and suggests Anu to go to the bus as Sir will come on that way...


Megha and Jijibua sitting in the bus with Anu and Navika is waiting for Mohan outside the bus.She sees that Mohans car coming and smiles. Mohan parks the car and coming to bus following Navika with Rim and her little bag when Rim tells him that she want Mohan to keep the bag on bus roof.


"Kya" Mohan gets angry "Main ye bag rakhne bus ke chat pe chadu...abbe itna chota sa to bag hai...bus ki cabinat me fit aa jayega..chalo ab"Mohan steps forward and notice that Rim is not with him. He turns back to see Rim who is still standing there with folding her hands and stoping her breath. "Nahi jaan saans mat rokna" Mohan comes to her and tells her that he is going to keep the bag on the bus roof and Rim should go into the bus with this didi pointing his fingers to Navika. Rim agrees and she goes and Mohan goes to the backside to climb up.


Navika steps up in the bus along with Rim.Anu is surprissed and ask Rim that where is your Papa...Which Rim answer that he got ready for picnic but at the last moment he had a phone call and leaves urgently and send her here with driver..Anu is quite shocked and going to ask anything else but Navika inturrupts again and tells her that its being too late now and Rim agrees with her and announces that Papu has ordered to come back before 9:00 pm...so if they still continue the argue they will probably late at night. Anu is in a dilemma situation but finally she gives order to driver to move the bus without Mohan...


(Second part will be update soon)...Till then Bye Bye Doston... 😊
Edited by Megher_Palok - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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peu :

i guess that's your name, the concept looks nice, pm me when you update. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: polly_03

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">peu :</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">i guess that's your name, the concept looks nice, pm me when you update.😃</font>


Yes Polly my name is Peu 😳

N thanx for d comment...will pm u for sure... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting 4 d SS eagerly.😊all the best.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Egarly waiting for ur SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First update done guys... 😳

Do read and comments... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz plz pm me also in this post
i liked this 1 update of yours so much
n 2nd part update soon
eagerly waiting for the 2nd part

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww...awesome... Very interesting...
Waiting for nxt part.. Plzz PM me also...

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