The Much Awaited Untying - An OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Requested by shanaya123.

So, I actually quickly wrote this up.
No, it's not a prediction. I was actually requested to write an OS continued off from the dori untying in which Madhu doesn't run away or RK doesn't tie it back up. So, this is just a request being completed! Not a prediction like it usually is!

Anyways, enjoy!



The Much Awaited Untying

 

I felt a chill run down my spine as I felt him untying my dori. My heartbeat sped up as I felt him coming closer. His tight grip on my dori loosened with every step he took towards me. I closed my eyes as his breath brushed against my ear.

 

"Did you forget that you owe me something?" he whispered passionately into my ear.

 

I froze, as I understood his intentions.

I quickly turned and pushed myself into his chest. I wrapped my arms around him tightly as I kept my eyes closed and breathed heavily into his chest.

I heard a slight chuckle from him as I felt his hand running up my bare back.

 

That's when I realized why he had chosen that sari.

 

I felt his hand unclip the back of my blouse and I gasped.

I stared up at him.

 

"RK'" I spoke quietly as I tried to stop the blush from reaching my cheeks.

 

He smirked. His breathtaking smirk...

 

"Biwi, I know what I want..."

"There's people waiting downstairs..."

"And I'm willing to keep them waiting.''

"But your promise?"

"Biwi, promises are meant to be broken," he shot me a sly smile and then picked me up in his arms.

 

I didn't argue. I hadn't made the promise...he had...and in all honesty, I didn't know if I had it in me to wait any longer.

 

I snuggled my face into his shoulder as he carried me into our room.

 

He gently laid me down in bed and then slid into bed beside me.

I turned over onto my stomach as he began to run his hand up and around my waist.

 

That's when I felt a sensation I had never felt before. So amazing, so unique'so'perfect'

 

His lips touched my back and ran up. I gasped at the first touch his lips made to my bare skin. As his lips ran up, my pulse increased.

I quickly turned under him and pulled him down for another hug.

 

"Bi..."

"Shh..." I whispered as I let my chest rise against his with every breath.

 

Not even a minute passed when suddenly his lips were on my neck.

 

I closed my eyes and then felt his soft lips against mine. My first kiss. I followed his movements and felt a smile cross his lips under the kiss. I moaned and heard an automatic groan escape his lips.

He slowly pulled away and looked at me as I smiled and blushed.

He gently placed my hair behind my ear and then stroked my cheek. I lowered my eyes.

 

He laid down and I placed my arm around him as I laid my head on his chest.

He gently wrapped his arm around my waist and kissed my forehead as I looked up at him.

 

"I wish there weren't people waiting downstairs..." he spoke with slight irritation.

 

I giggled.

 

"I thought you said you didn't mind keeping them waiting?"

"Oh biwi, if you don't mind either then..."

"No! I mind!" I sat up and put my arms behind my back to clip my blouse back on.

 

That's when I felt his hands on top of mine.

 

"Let me help you with that..." he spoke passionately again.

 

I felt him clip my blouse back on and as he brushed his hand against my back, he reached my dori.

I closed my eyes and felt butterflies fluttering in my stomach.

As he tired my dori, he purposely brushed his hand against my bare back.

Within a minute, I felt my dori fall against my back.

 

But he wasn't done.

 

He gave my bare back a final kiss and then I quickly jumped off the bed.

I turned to stare at him as I breathed heavily. I smiled as he smiled back at me.

 

"I love seeing the effect I have on you biwi..."

 

And with that, I lowered my eyelids, smiled, and ran out of the room as my cheeks began to glow a rosy colour.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee. ..how I hope we got to c such a passionate scene in show of course excluding kiss or say lip lock..


lovely OS dearEdited by bhanu_rekhag - 11 years ago
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Wow!! This is awesome! 😊
Superb Pritt :)
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Originally posted by: --Udhay--

Wow!! This is awesome! 😊
Superb Pritt :)


Thanks Udhay! 😳
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amazing os, was very well done!
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing os, was very well done!


Aww thank you!! 
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Thud...I am dead Pritt... 
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Originally posted by: Ananya05

Thud...I am dead Pritt... 
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No dying 😛! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazing ⭐️
I just wish they show some kisses within their liberty 😳 😆
Coming to your Os it was fab 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

That was amazing ⭐️

I just wish they show some kisses within their liberty 😳 😆
Coming to your Os it was fab 👏 👏 👏


Aww thanks Priya!! 😳
I wish for that too! 😆 
Thank you!!