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Posted: 13 years ago
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heya guys... was happy today so i wrote this os.! its my first try hope its gud and you all like it...!!!😊

so in this its basically that all members of the gang go to Goa for indiafest...

all of them reach goa and go to the beach(place where the competitions are held).
since taani and rey are gs and ags they go for registration.
the gang is particpating in dance and taani is in the desi diva competiton.
taani is busy filling the form and rey is staring at her.
taani: finally registration is done rey and turns to see rey staring at her.
taani starts blushing .😳
rey: you look soo beautiful while you blush taani.
taani blushes even more.
announcement: all the particpents are requested to go to ther respective rooms for the competition.
taani: rey chalo i have to go and get ready.(turns to leave)
rey: (catches her hand)ek minute ruko naa. and comes close to her .
taani lost in rey's eyes.
he comes close to her ear and says : all the best and kisses her cheek.
taani : r...rey ..chalo lets go..koi ajayega...
rey: no...kiss me then we will go.
taani: no...let's go...!
rey: i will not move from here until u kiss me.
taani: first u win this comp then i will surly kiss u..
all the best...bye.(and leaves)
rey(to himself ):ok..!so bet and all haan...i will surly win this bet ..
taani's comp gets over she wins the comp and becomes the desi dive..
she goes to see rey's dance..
rey dance awsum as usual..
after the dance is over rey wins the comp.. rey sees taani and comes towards her.
suddenly all the girls in the place surround rey..
taani is like super jealous ..!
rey sees this and starts enjoying all the attention..
taani : see he is enjoying the company of other girls and i am waitinng for him here.
she starts walking towards hin and pushes the other girls aside.
she hugs him and kisses him.
taani and rey look look hawa hawa
all the d3 boys except swayam raises there hands "chemistry"..!
swayam comes towards taarey in all angry mood ..
taani : i am soory bahi...hey krishna ji pls pls help me...
swayam comes and hugs taani and says i am happy for u...
rey congrulates taani for winning the comp..
all the competitions are over..
all are going back to mumbai..
in bus all are sleeping except taarey,
they are sitting together
taani: i am so happy today...bahi also accepted our relationship...we both won the competitions ..
rey:ya...even i am happy ...! This is a new beginning...
taani: ya finally taarey are together...
THUS THEY CONTINUED BLISSFULLY INTO THERE HAPPY LIVES..!
the end..
how is it guys?? is it good??? pls forgive my mistakes it is my first attempt...do comment...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yipeee.. . . . me 1stšŸ˜‰
di loved it
its so so good di...šŸ‘
Edited by tarey_forever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super se b upar written by u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome outstanding super excellent os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it ws short bt yet beautiful.tani's jellofying avtar ws wel written.i wish to c tat in real.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok. Nice first attempt at romance. Keep writing;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its such a short but lovely os its your first try na and its beautiful

write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it was amazing, love bold Taani pushing all the girls away and go and hug and kiss her prince charming so cute. U did a superb job plz continue to write more Taarey stories.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You did a really good job as it was your first attempt! Keep writing more on TR!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nice loved it😊

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