OS| The Very First Time - Page 6

This is so beautiful. Loved the os. I always wanted to know what would have happened if he had confessed his feelings towards Khushi during the wedding.

god that was beautiful. stunning. gorgeous. read it with a constant smile on my face, imagining how things would have turned out if this were true,

That was really gud!I am sure this would have happened your way if Shyam had not come in their way!Sigh!

That was beautiful!

awesome OS! You write so well. This was very enjoyable to read. I also always wondered what would have happened if Shyam didn't exist. Your story helps us imagine what could have been, if all that misunderstanding didn't happen. Awesome job!

This was beautiful!

Omg...this has now become my dream scene...i wish writers like u were in the cv team, the above scene was just perfect.,,loved it to core..keep up ure withdrawal symptoms then we readers will get more master pices like this...,..,

Aaahh how I wish this is what happened instead of all the Shyam drama! I looove this Arnav So beautifully written as always Sona, one of your best yet!

now this is what would have happened had it not been for the whole terrace scene am sure
and you did it beautifully
his hesitation in accepting his feelings for her were overcome when he realised that he cant do without her at all
and the confession of love was just what we had hoped for
wow now thats what am talking about

Sweet and so evocative of those heady days of Payash wedding...when the love was unfurling like a flower bud unfurling its petals.