FF Mind Games #4: New thread now up! - Page 99

Originally posted by: FictionsFan

O.M.to the effing G. U Updated. !!!!!!
EEERRRPPP...!!!!!
Gulp gulp , ok deep breath in, long breath out...
AAAH.. !!!!

IT WAS AMAAA...ZZZ..INNNGGG..!!!!
THIS IS MADENING..AAAH.. THIS TORTURE Z SOO SWEET.. ITS SUCH A CREUL PLEASUREEE. LEAVES ME ASKING FOR MORE EVERYTIME...!!

.OH, like everytime.. U NAILED IT!! it was breathtaking.. loveee yooouuu tinaaa..!!!! Thankyou thankyou thankyou...
Upload, shameless soon too..
HAPPY NEW YEAR..!!! :D:D:D

Originally posted by: LoveBS

Firstly sorry for the late comment !!! Exams are going on !!
The update was simply beautiful and full of passion and love !!!
What an apt title !!!!!
Loved how arnav made buaji apologize to khushi !!!!! An how he consoled her !!!!!!
Aww it's so sweet how nani and Anjali love khushi !!!!
Khushi being jealous was soo adorable !! And to make it all right she decides to ask him to sleep with her tonight !!!
Poor Arnav !!!!! With nani getting all emotional and even Akash and then khushi springing something like sleeping with him!! Can understand him !!! 😆
Loved how she knew he would come behind her and how she didn't listen to him and stayed insistent on him coming at night !!!!
The way she teased him with images if their times together was sooo like khushi !!!!!!
Loved how she got ready keeping him in mind !!!!
And when Arnav comes!!!!
The kisses described the love they had for each other !!!!
Damn !!!! Buaji had to come !!!! Aww khushi teasing him, but Arnav also knows how to payback !!!! 😳
Aww he was going back but Stayed so that he could make her happy !!!! Btw I love the song !!!!!!
Khushi's promise to herself !!!!! Can't wait to see how she manages to make him stay and sleep in his arms !!!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!!
Superb chapter once again and thnx for making it long !!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: DropofDew

Good lord that was so hot! 😆

I loved it! So beautifully written!

Urgh! I wih I could thrash Buaji! Can I please go into your story and hit her? With a huge baton or something? I just want to hit her! Lol

And haha Khushi is back to her games so god help Arnav! Bechara he just can't resist her. I think once I get back from holiday I'm going to read this fic all over again from the beginning because it's just so good! I love the connection that you've created between these two, the humour, the love, the intensity and the games that they play! Love it love it love it!

Bechara Aakash, Buaji won't let him meet Payal either - see this is why I want to hit the woman! 😆

This was an amazing chapter! I felt like I was there watching this all happen! 👏

And Veer Grr 😡! Yeh can I hit him too? Though I can't wait till Arnav gets his hands on him! Now can't wait to see if Khushi manages to keep him there or not... And then what that could lead to :S.

But I shall wait patiently because I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter of Shameless too!

Great work! xxx

Originally posted by: Ruki.F

Wishing U Merry Christmas and Happy New Year