Virman FF: The Story Of Us *Important note*

Posted: 13 years ago
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The Story Of Us <3



Hey guys!!! This is my first FF here and it's basically on Virman. Well I won't be able to update regularly this month as my exams are starting in a few days. So yeah hope you guys like it :)

Character Sketch

Maanvi Choudhry: A 22 year old girl who has a heart of gold but is mischievous. Falls into trouble every now and then and the only person to save her is her Jeevika di. She loves her di very much and thinks that her di's the best in the whole wide world. She's a problem maker but nobody can make it out by looking at her because she looks just like an angel. Lives in New York with her di as their Mom and Dad died in an accident. A professional pianist and singer who's a die hard fan of Taylor Swift (even I am!) and is trying her luck in the music industry. She doesn't really believe in love. She thinks that all love ever does is break, burn and end but that's not the case with her di!!



Jeevika Choudhry: 24 year old who's a famous fashion designer popularly known as J.C. Loves her sis Maanvi a lot and can do anything for her. She has been taking care of her sister since their parents died. Maanvi's a problem maker and she's the problem solver. This princess here is still looking for her prince charming. She believes in love unlike Maanvi. She's serious in her work and is a bit shy. As she's famous, she has a lot of money. She spends most of her money into useful things like clothes. Yes clothes!! She buys branded clothes which are not out dated. Staying fashionable is one of the things she cares about other than Maanvi!!


Virat Vadhera: 23 year old handsome hunk who loves music. He's a famous singer and guitarist. Girls go crazy for him except Miss Maanvi Choudhry who only likes his songs but hates him like anything. He doesn't believe in love either after being cheated by his 'lady love' Maya. Loves his brother the most and belongs to a typical Indian family. Lives with his family in New York and doesn't care much about his life. He wants things to happen his way.


Viren Vadhera: 25 year old who's a famous attorney in New York. Loves his little bro the most and is still looking for his dream girl. Leads a very busy life and rarely gets time to spend with his family. He has a sweet tooth so he instantly finishes up dessert after dinner. He too believes in love like Jeevika. There's only one thing he hates and that's marshmallows. Yep got it right marsmallows!!



And so the story begins...

Every step that I take leads me to trouble and then my problem solver comes and solves the problem with just a blink of an eye. Isn't my di simply amazing? She's kinda busy but she still takes care of me. I wish I had a job too. Well my wish is going to be completed soon. I'm going to the V.V studios where I'm going to pursue my music career. I wish Virat Vadhera wasn't my boss. He's nothing but a spoilt rich brat. Never seen him though. Just heard him sing and heard one of his interviews in the radio and since that time I've come to a conclusion that he's arrogant, selfish and spoilt!! Hell!!
"Di, I'm going just wish me luck" I shouted
"Maanvi best of luck!! I'm sure you'll do great" Di replied coming in front of me. She gave me a warm smile which immediately made me confident.
"Bye!!" I said kissing her on the cheek
"Bye" She replied

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"Hmm 25th Avenue V.V studios here I come!!" I said with a cheerful grin.
I parked my Porsche and got out of my car. My phone started ringing and I picked it up. It was di. I wasn't concentrating and then I bumped into someone. My file fell down and all the important papers flew out of it. I ended the call and looked at a man who was looked about 23 or 24. To tell you the truth, the guy was handsome. I was just staring at his chocolate brown eyes but then he broke my chain of thoughts.
"Excuse me mister whom I don't know can't you look where you're going?" I said in anger
"Was it me or you?" he replied calmly
"You!! Apologize right now. Oh you don't know who I am and what I can do." I said
"Miss I'm not apologizing at all. Well I don't know who you are or what you can do but every body knows who I am except you. Well that rhymes" He said still keeping calm. I had heard this voice but I couldn't make out where.
"Just shut up!! At least you can pick up my papers. If you won't then just go to hell" I shouted getting irritated
"Very well. You can pick it up yourself" He smirked and then went away from there. My jaw dropped. Nobody ever talked to me like that in my whole freakin' life. I thoughts drifted away as I saw the studio. I went inside and went to the reception counter. The receptionist told me to wait till my turn came. I was sitting on the chair and then I went inside when they called my name. The people who were to judge my singing where sitting on the chairs. I couldn't see them properly because of the dark. I asked if I could play the piano too and they agreed. I thought of singing a song by taylor swift.

There I was again tonight, forcing laughter, faking smiles
Same old, tired place lonely place
Walls of insincerity, shifting eyes and vacancy
Vanished when I saw your face

All I can say is it was enchanting to meet you

Your eyes whispered, "Have we met?" across the room, your silhouette
Starts to make its way to me
The playful conversation starts, counter all your quick remarks
Like passing notes in secrecy

And it was enchanting to meet you
All I can say is I was enchanted to meet you

This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you

The lingering question kept me up, 2 a.m., who do you love?
I wonder 'til I'm wide awake
Now I'm pacing back and forth, wishing you were at my door
I'd open up and you would say

It was enchanting to meet you
All I know is I was enchanted to meet you

This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew

This night is flawless, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, dancing around all alone
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you

This is me praying that

This was the very first page, not where the storyline ends
My thoughts will echo your name until I see you again
These are the words I held back as I was leaving too soon
I was enchanted to meet you

Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you
Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you

This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew

This night is flawless, don't you let it go
I'm wonder-struck, dancing around all alone
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you

Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DGEsRZf_txw

"You did great" said one of the judges
"Yes you did but the decisions on Virat Vadhera" said the other one
They told me that I had to wait another hour because Virat vadhera had to listen to all the songs that were recorded. I went outside and again bumped into someone. I looked at the same pair of chocolate brown eyes and groaned.
"You again!! Why are you following me?" I asked him
"Buzz off" he replied
"How dare you say that to me" I said
"I have some important things to do so get aside" He replied
"I won't" I said
He pushed past me and went inside. I sat on the chair again, bored. Finally one hour had passed and I went inside.
"So you are miss Maanvi Choudhry" The chocolate brown eyed man said.
What the hell was he doing here? I thought
"I'm Virat Vadhera" He said with a smirk and my jaw dropped. I talked to my boss so rudely. Oh no!! There's no way I could get the job now.
"Sorry but you aren't good enough to get this job" He said and the others just stared at him open-mouthed.
"B-but s-sir" I trembled
"No buts" He said with the same smirk
Tears came out of my eyes and anger took place in my heart for him. He just ruined my whole life and he sat on the chair smirking. Now it was time for revenge!! I ran away from there crying.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Stella_Virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey stella...new FF...well there is no prologue...but part 1 is good...interesting...update soon...and take care...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! that was just awesome!!!
aww i loved it!!
hmmm... so that was their first meeting and maanvi messed up with him! and virat didnt give her the job.. that was sad! i felt bad for maanvi!!
wait i am a fan of Taylor swift too!!
continue soon
plzz pm me when u update!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
loved it
plz cont it
plz pm me when u update it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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het steela it was really a cool update.i liked the concept.pls pls pls pls continue soon and PM me.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow this ff is rocking gal loved it poor maanvi i m excited to read how they vl fall for eachother pm me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it was awesome
But why is like crying baby type gal
Amazing start
Update Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice and Intersting Concept...If she was good he still refused i guess Ego clash..Pm me when u update...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue dear.. its good to read another ff on virman.. nd concept really sounds interesting.. nd pm me wen evr u update...😊

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