FF: My Passion My Destiny:someone like you.Pg 106

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Title credit to Aroran & Deepak...
I saw her coming from the stairs wearing Black gown, with long open hair...
She was looking beautiful as usual... my eyes were just admiring her...
suddenly when Atul came and held her by waist and she smiled...
and i felt pain in my heart... but why?

She had slapped me four times... and i had signed an agreement with her to be my personal assistant for forty months in lieu of forty lakhs for her father's treatment who was beaten to death by my goons...
In that period, i hated her to the core and tried my best to make her life hell...
I treated her like a spot at sets, made her serve drinks at Party,
made her stand outside for the whole night in cold just to break her...
When it didn't work, i made her dance on item song in my movie without her wish...
even then she didn't back out...
Finally i forced her t work in my movie..as i knew she hated acting...
Once i had said" I am going to write her destiny" and really i did the same...
. But i don't know her luck worked or my unluck...
she is a superstar even release of one movie... that too with me...
When today evening she came to me and said... the agreement period is over and she is free now to work anywhere, act in any movie... and above all to live her life...
I felt something broke in my heart...
Why?
just because inspite of all my trials, i could not make her life hell as i wished?
or She was now successful in film industry?
or She was getting engaged to Atul...just an assistant director at my movie?
I wanted to break her. but i have broken myself in all...
i wanted to make her a looser, but i have loosed myself in this game...
I wanted to punish her for slapping me, but today, i am punishing myself for letting her enter into my life...
I don't know what is this this. is this my passion? my obsession? or my love...

So, how is it? should i start writing? i will, only if i get at least 20 likes.. and yes, i need suggestions for the name of FF... i could not think a good one...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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r eally a nyc start dear and first one to cmmnt hurray. Hmm so madhu is enganged to atul, but i think she also have feelings for rk. and titile should be " Since U Have Been Gone ". I think it sounds good for ur story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start!! please continue and pm me when u do!!!
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Thanks for liking the Prologue of my FF...

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Edited by jeenia123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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also make index and reserve a post for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm, Today i find someone like you or someonelike you
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oh ya i forgot... res...
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Originally posted by: darkangel93

nice start!! please continue and pm me when u do!!!


thanks dear. will try to continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

hmm, Today i find someone like you or someonelike you


Hey this is nice one... how about " Its only you..."
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Thanks dear. hope to get enough likes to start the FF...

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