SwaRon/TanHa SS ~You R Mine~ Last chp pg 36

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

fantabulous update baz

waiting for next

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

BaZ dont you dare😡😆 chalo i will be commenting tomorrow itself coz i have xams re but three words I LOVE YOU 🤗

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devil_rocks

@devil_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Suku meri jaan I love ya too rey🤗

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

This update ws amazing...
Loved kriya sharon convo...
Sharon as a sister awsm..
Thnx for pm
update nxt part soon..

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

//Edited//

Woah this update got more serious than what I had anticipated. I had thought it would be light and Rey will be on other side of Sharon's wrath but still it would be on lighter note but the change in tone was surprising. Loved it. Sharon and Swayam were are the rudest best (can't believe I have to write this :P) in the begining and I really felt sorry for both Rey and Kriya. But it was good to see they both ammending their ways in the end. Sharon-Kria scene was nice but it was Swayam-Sharon scene in the end which took the cake. And the kiss at that time totally unexpected but the most passionate one in this SS so far.
P.S- Liked the Swayam way to get his junglee billi back.

Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

ausum update!! 👏
poor sharon she is really hurt 😭 first part was emotional n was nicely penned down... Sharon's outburst was justified.. she had dreamt of helping his bro with his love of his life, tease them, proposg his love she felt like he had betrayed her. "She loved him more than anyone else in the world and he told swayam her biggest enemy and not her, was something she was not able to bare." She loves her brother alot. 😊
Krisha convo was so cute.. Sharon cumg n apolozig kriya n kriya understandg her.. 😊
Swaron convo was also nicely put up.. Swayam cumg to say sorry to her n want to take her home back.. Sharon on other hand does nt want to go home as she thinks she makes rey unhappy... Sharon kisses swayam first time.. 😳
Swaron on deir way back home part was cute n amusg swayam nt likg "this quiet mode of Sharon. He loved his Jungli Sharon more." so he kissed her again n she yelled at him he grinned at her. "Yup, his Sharon was back and he loved her this way." "It felt so great to hear her curse him. He happily drove back while she kept yelling at him." 😃
Vl b waitg for d nxt update!!

Edited by lassipriya - 13 years ago

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

res

Unres!

On the whole i liked this part! dissecting it...

Angry Swayam had spoiled the situation! he should had let Rey handle it all alone! He really said some harsh things to Sharon!>

poor sharon she really wanted to help her brother ... patofying her sister in law! 😉

Poor girl! i really like the way you show the Tom and jerry Swayam and Sharon in this FF! 😆😆

And the last part... Swayam was way too cute! and Sharon is surely a gem!

well as the lip locks in this FF!... this FF may become incomplete without it as the way you have presented till now!

And you have written till chapter 6 post na BAZ... 😊

PS: update Engima and Hostage soon plz...desperately waiting for it!

Edited by Nehal92 - 13 years ago

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

u do deserve lots of hugs... for such an amazing updte... i love d last prt d most... swaron...prt...

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Completely loved the update !!

I seriously felt bad for sharon... She is such a sweet person at heart ...she accepted Kriya just because she didnt want to hurt Rey...how sweet 😊... Wish Rey never hidden anything from her!!! Was really annoyed with Swayam😡, the way he showed his anger and calling her bitch😡.. and wanted a little more sorrry from him🤢... but he was sweet at the end😳 ...

how come swayam knows where sharon is but rey doesnt...what kind of brother is rey, he should be knowing where his siter goes when she upset 😡 Poor sharon... Rey is a loving brother , but I felt sharon loves him more than he loves her 🤔..But liked how he snapped back at swayam , whn he was going on insulting sharon 😊More than Swayam and sharon , Iam excited to see the equation between Rey and Sharon in next update .. How rey is gonna handle all the situation...Please do update soon

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 13 years ago