SwaRon/TanHa SS ~You R Mine~ Last chp pg 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index:
Chapter 1:pg 1
chapter 2: pg 6
chapter 3: pg 10
chapter 4: pg 13
chapter 5: pg 19
chapter 6: pg 25
chapter 7: pg 31
chapter 8: pg 36
Edited by DaShInG_DeViL - 13 years ago
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Hey Swthrt🤗

WOW...a light hearten..happy and romantic SS from you...a treat for ur readers...like always...as u know i am a big fan of your writing skills...i dont want to repeat myself again and angian...just one thing...u r amazing my dear...

The 1st chapter of this SS...you made sure the readers get hooked to this SS...Sharon...her relationship with her family..her Parents..her brother..Rey...beautifully penned down by you...well nothing to be surprised about it...i am used to the amazing write ups u give us...i wait for them...crave for them...
I loved the way u portrayed...SHAREY relationship..

she heard a voice from behind saying "Dumboo?" she turned around and smiled widely upon seeing her brother standing there with a shocked expression on his face. She said "Big Bear'did u miss me?" and ran in his arms. Who hugged her back and replied "u have no idea" rey was sharon's big brother

And how beautifully u merged the real story with ur imagination...one word...perfect...

Her reason for hating HIM...WOW...it was hilarious...

That was one reason for her to hate him the other reason was that he stole her first kiss from her. He kissed her in front of the whole college to shut her up when she was insulting his team "WEAKLINGS" and gave her the tag that she a dazzler has been kissed by a weakling. That was not the only time he kissed her, he kissed her later on too one other time when she decided to give him a piece of her mind but he was not in a mood for it.😳Lovelyyy...

GOSHHH...u want to kill me girl...i was grinning like an idiot while reading this ...

"well if a weakling can kiss a dazzler than he can sure as hell do more" Sharon glared at him she hated it when he would remind her that he was the one who tasted her first and spat back "that is never going to happen'.this time I won't let it happen" he smirked at her and replied "yeah like u stopped last time?" and that was it. She hit him where it hurts with her knee and he fell sideways groaning in pain.😆😆😆

I am loving the ping pong fight between them...their chemistry is amazing...like always...I am dieing to read when they will fall in love...plz plz continue soon dear...😊




Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved this update!!! Even I was expecting some romantic stuff after emotional termoils in other FF's 😆

This is one rocking start !!! I love when swayam is a jerk ( but having some feeling for Sharon😳), and sharon as usual arrogant and doesnt want to give up kinds !!!
But update the nxt chapter soon as cant wait when the first chapter is like this 😆
Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Baz!how on earth do u manage to write such ah-mazing romance on swaRon!!
I have an awe-ed expression after reading each of ur writings!
i really loved the jerk swayam who manages to make sharon speechless in his own way!(LOL)
I dont even have much of words to describe how much I enjoyed reading the first chapter!!
yeahh please turn it into an FF for sure..certainly anyone of us wudnt mind dis at all..like seriously!bt iss thode jaldi updates dena!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Baaazzz, Awesome seriously it was amazing...

Swayam is such a jerk and arrogant... I love this Swayam...
SwaRon are enemies but they kiss like hell...
loved it.. update soon...

Apne baki ke works bhi update kardo...
Edited by manasie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Baz!!!! you write such awesome stuff and ask us to wait long and long for the updates ! This is so not fair na!

Hostage update i am dam excited for it :D i was waiting for it for so longgg!!

but wait how am i suppose to wait for the update of this??? :'(


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totally loved it.. Swayam s such a jerk y is he troubling Sharon so much.. Poor gal..

Waiting 4 u 2 update the nxt part.. Thanx 4 the pm and do pm me whn u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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all the while i was reading this i had my hand on my cheek as i was so mesmerized by both of them who supposedly HAte each other ahahahah
i dont like swayam being a jerk but this jerkiness of swayam I love hahaha
where to begin from. The way they met each other is quite weird what was he doing in her room 😳 and awww out poor sharon i really pitied on her
although she was the victim but she somehow had it coming when she went to his house at that time
enjoyed it to the fullest and loved it totally
eagerly waiting for the next part and of HOSTAGE to be updated !!
p.s. i have one complaint
u update really slow yaar
i know u have work being a student and all and i know how universities treat us but i think u might be having atleast 4 days holidays now
so update HOSTAGE alteast
really wanna know whts next with them

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