Fan Fiction Sindoor Tere Naam Ka - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
i m really sorry for not continuing. i recently got a job nd i m really bz wid dat nd by da time i come home i m soooo tired dat i jus go 2 sleep. i'll try 2 continue 2day or tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
No problem. Con't whever you have time. Your updates are always rockin 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanxs 4 da compliment 😊 . but i m really really sowwie i was really bz wid some other stuff dat i didnt hav da time 2 continue nd tomorrow is my job 😭 . i'll try my best 2 continue tomorrow nd if not i'll definetly continue on sunday cuz dats wen i hav my day off. once again really really sorry 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
no problem yaar!! cont whenever you're free 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
yeah there's no rush. We understand! Just don't forget about us!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dhruv nd Vedika enter Dhruv's house holding eachothers hands. when dey enter da house da sindoor title track is played in da background. all r really happy. kavita walks up2 dem

Kavita- titli... jaldi se aarti ki thali leke aao
Titli- ji didi abhi leke aati hoon

Titli comes back wid da thali. Kavita takes der aarti. All r in smiles. Kavita brings Vedika inside da house. All r tlking bout dhruv nd vedika nd wen dey'll hav a wedding.

Tara (sits next 2 vedika)- hi vedika bhabi (nudges her)
Vedika (shocked)- o god meine ye kya kardya
Niharika (sits next 2 vedika)- vedika ab kaan khol ke sunlo mein iss ghar ki badi bahu hoon so 4rm now on pls i'd prefer dat u call me didi rather den niharika
Vedika (annoyed)- theekhai meri maa aur kuch
Tara- haan make me tea
Niharika- nd some pakoda
Kavita- kyun tum dono merri beeti ko tung kar rahe ho
Tara- mom
Kavita- abhi tak toh shaadi bhi nahi hwi aur tumlog ne use abhi se daradya. (looks at vedika) baccha dont need 2 worry ye sare kaam tum abhi nahi karogi shaadi ke baad theek hai.
All laugh.

Dhruv's cell phone rings
Dhruv (sees da id)- excuse me (goes to a corner, annoyed)abb kyun phone kya
person- arre how rude, na hi na hello. well ne ways appko bahut bahut mubrak ho vedika appko finally mil hi gaye.
Dhruv- vedika ne srif shaadi ke liye haan ki hai... shaadi abhi tak howi nahi hai
person- howi nahi hai toh hojayegi. btw mo mittha kab kara rahe ho
Dhruv- mo mittha karneke liye samne bhi toh hona hoga na. aur mein toh tumhe jaanta tak nahi
person- how can u b so sure of dat. well ne ways saahi waqt aane par mulakat bhi hojayegi
Before Dhruv could say nething da person hangs up

Druv goes back nd joins every1
Kavita- Dhruv kiska phone tha
Dhruv- mama mere doost ka usne aaise hi phone kya tha
Kavita- ok... bhaisaab
Aman- hmmm
Kavita- ab app jald se jald hume humari beti dedein
Aman (smiles)
Viren- abb bus jald se jald ye shaadi hojani chahye
Kavita- bilkul theek kaha aapne. kyun na hum ye saagi kal karlene
Vedika (shocked)- kal
Kavita- kyun beta koi problem hai
Vedika- aunty nahi but kya ye saagai ek do hafte baad nahi ho sakti
Kavita (smiles)- bilkul, kyun nahi ho sakti. Toh abb ye tae hai ke dhruv aur vedika ki saagai ek hafte baad hogi
All r happy accept for vedika who still seems a bit confused.
Suraj- congrats dhruv aur should i say jejaji
Dhruv (smiles, upset wen he sees vedika)

Next Day
Dhruv nd Vedika r in da park. Both r walking.
Dhruv- vedika
Vedika- hmm
Dhruv- tum khush toh hona
Vedika- matlab
Dhruv- i mean iss rishte se
Vedika- ye kaisa sawaal. ofcourse i m happy. mein bahut khush hoon meri shaadi hone wali hai i m going 2 start a new lyf meri zindagi ka ek naaya safur aur iss safar mein tum mere saath hoge my best friend.
Dhruv- toh phir kal tum kyun itni (vedika interupts)
Vedika- bus kuch purani yaadein yaad aagaye
Dhruv- vedika mein jaanta hoon ke meine tumse kaha tha ke mein tumhara intezar karunga lekin mein ye nahi chata ke ye rishta koi sumjota ho
Vedika (silent, looks at him)- dhruv i promise u ke meri taraf se tumhe koi shikait ka mauka nahi milega mujhe srif waqt chahye.
Dhruv- i understand srif dil ko ek tasali deni thi dedi
vedika smiles


The End
pretty lame i know. sorry for not continuing 4 such a long tym been really really really really bz. well will b hopefully continuing regularly now okkie byeee 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!! gr8 fan fic im readin it after sum tym..wicked!! keep it up...wen will vedika find out the truth...poor sohan i feel sorry 4 him!!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dhruv drops Vedika home. Wen Vedika goes inside her house she is shocked.

Vedika (shocked)- omg vivek
the person is shown standing up. the character of vivek is played by amit jan (da person who played ronit in ye meri lyf hai)
Vivek- surprise
Vedika runs nd hugs him. she den starts 2 cry
Vivek (unhugs her)- dont worry vedika sub kuch theek hojayega. main abb aagaya hoon. tumahri aur sohan ke beech jo bhi (vedika interrupts)
Vedika- nahi sohan abb bohat daer ho chuki hai sohan ne jo dard mujhe dya hai use main kabhi nahi bhool sakti.
Vivek- lekin vedika (vedika interrupts)
Vedika- nahi vivek its 2 l8 aur agar meine sohna ko maaf kar bhi dya phir bhi main use shaadi nahi karungi kyunki meri saagai dhruv se hone jaarahi.
Vivek- hone wali hai howi toh nahi na
Vedika- vivek tum samaj te kyun nahi ho dhruv mera accha dost hai nd i cant hurt him. wo mere bure waqt mein mere saath tha nd i jus cant hurt him.
Vivek- tum jaanti to hona ke tumhare ye ek faisle se teen zindagi barbaad hogi. tumhari, dhruv, aur sohan ki
Vedika- nahi vivek sohan aur dhruv ki zindagi nahi srif meri. meri zindagi ko ek khel banadya hai. sohan ne mujhe hurt kya aur dhruv ne mujhe pyar aur abb tum keh rahe ho ke mein wapas sohan ke pass chali jaon impossible
Before Vivek could say nething Suraj, Tania, nd Aman come
Suraj- Vivek tum aur yahan
Vivek- kyun nahi aana chahiye tha (goes to Aman) namaste uncle (touches his feet)
Aman- jeete raho beta
Vivek smiles
Suraj- toh Vivek (tania interupts)
Tania- lagta hai mera introduction toh hoga nahi toh mein khud ko hi introduce karleti hoon. hi i m Tania suraj ki biwi
Vivek- hi i m vivek vedika ka bachpan ka dost. hum log ek hi skool mein the
Tania- o really (looks at vedika, whose head is jus bent down nd isnt smiling much) isse kya howa. vedika... vedika
Vedika- (coming out of her dream world)- hun, kya
Tania- never mind.
Suraj- so... tell me yahan aachanak
Vivek- yeah business ke siisilay mein
Suraj (starts laughing)- u r kidding ryt tum aur business
Vivek- kyun agar tum suraj malhotra da world's biggest slacker can buckle up den y cant i
Suraj- ok watever. but i m glad dat u finally decided 2 help uncle out wid da business
Vivek- yeah well hav 2 help dad wid it sooner or later so y not now ryt
Suraj- ryt
Vedika- Vivek tum yahan kitne kab tak ho
Vivek- yehi teen chaar mahine aur usme aana jana laga rahega kyun
Vedika- kyunki tum aab yahi rahoge
Vivek- obviously even if u werent going 2 offer mein yahin rehne wala tha... mera saaman gari mein hai leke aajoa nd put it in my room
Vedika (annoyed) yeah ryt... jaa kar khud leke aao (leaves)
Suraj nd Vivek laugh

Vedika is in her room crying.
Vivek comes nd knocks on da door- can i come in
Vedika (wipes her tears)- vivek come in
Vivek- Vedika tum sabse apni takleef apna dard chupa sakti ho lekin mujse nahi. Vedika mein tumhe acchi tarha se jaanta hoon aur ye bhi jaanta hoon ke tum dhruv se pyaar nahi karti aur ye shaadi tum srif aur srif sohan ko dard dene ke liye kar rahi ho. Vedika tumhari aur Dhruv ki shaadi dunya ke samne toh ek shaadi hogi lekin mein jaanta hoon ke ye shaadi srif aur srif ek samjota hai.
Vedika (yells)- kya suna chate ho tum vivek kya. haan ye sach hai ke main dhruv se pyaar nahi karti. haan ye bhi sach hai ke mere liye ye shaadi srif aur srif ek samjota hai. aur ye bhi sach hai ke main sohan ko hurt karna chati hoon. lekin sabse bara sach ye bhi hai ke ye sab karte howe mujhe bhi bohat takleef horahi hai aur chahe mein sohan ko kitna bhi bholne ki kohsish karoon kuch na kuch mujhe uski yaad diladeti hai. i still love him. lekin mein uss dard ko nahi bhol sakti jo usne mujhe dya hai.
Vivek- pyar ki baat tum mat karo toh zyada hi acha hai vedika. pyar ka word tumhare mo se accha nahi lagta. pyar ka matlab hai bharosa vishwaas. lekin tumne... tumne toh sohan ko apni baat kehne ka mauka tak nahi dya tumne jo dekha use maanlya. Vedika sacha pyar bahut kaam loogon ko milta hai aur... (vedika interupts)
Vedika- Vivek tum jaante bhi ho ke usne mere saath kya kiya hai
Vivek- achi tarha se jaanta hoon. sohan ke parents ne mujhe sab kuch baatadya hai aur mein yahan apni doosti ka faraz nibha ne aaya hoon
Vedika- doosti kis doosti ki baat kar rahe ho tum doost mere aur tarak dari sohan ki wow
Vivek- vedika tumse abhi baat karna hi beqar kyunki tumhare dil srif nafrat aur badle ki aag hai. Ek bar srif ek bar sohan se milo aur uski baat sunlo aur phir faisla karna nd trust me uske baad tum apne har faisle ke peeche apne doost ko paogi
Vedika- theekhai mein Sohan se milne ke liye tayaar hoon
Vivek smiles
Vedika- lekin pls vivek tum mujse koi umeed mat rakhan
Vivek- tumne kilne ke liye haan krdya mere liya itna hi bohat hai (to himself) vedika tumhara ye doost tumhe aur sohan ko ek karke hi rehega nd dats a promise.
Vivek leaves da room.

The End 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

wow hun.........reading this after so long!!

Fab parts!👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
The Next Day

Vedika is in her room getting ready 2 meet sohan wen her phone rings.

Vedika- hello (its dhruv who is on da other line)
Dhruv- hi Vedika. kya kar rahi ho
Vedika- kuch nahi
Dhruv- acha suno jaldi se tyaar ho jao mein tumhe abhi pick karne aa raha hoon
Vedika- Dhruv actually main abh nahi aa sakti kyunki main so... (stops before she says sohan) main apni dost se milne jaa rahi hoon
Dhruv (disappointed)- ok toh shopping nahi dinner to kum se kum mere saath karsakti ho na
Vedika (thinks)- ok
Dhruv- ok main tumhe theek ath (8) beje pick karne aaraha hoon.
Vedika- ok
Dhruv- bye
Vedika- bye (vedika hangs up, nd gets dressed.) She is wearing a really plain/ simple purple dress, Vedika grabs her purse nd leaves.

Vedika goes downstairs
Suraj- good morning
Vedika just walks past him without replying. Vedika goes inside her car nd starts 2 drive really fast. She den calls Sohan

Sohan picks up- hello
Vedika- main tumse abhi milne aarahi hoon bolo kahan milna hai
Sohan (happy 2 hear her voice)- tum mujhe hotel paradise milo room 203
Vedika- theek hai (before sohan could say nething vedika hangs up)

10mins later Vedika arrives at paradise hotel. She goes to room 203.
Vedika- sohan... sohan

sohan shows up in front of her. hes a complete mess
Sohan (smiles seeing her)- vedika (vedika interrupts)
vedika- isse pehle ke tum kuch bolo ya phir kuch socho mein tumhe ye batadoon ke main yahan tumhe srif ye batana ne aaye hoon ke main dhruv se shaadi karne jaa rahi hoon. agle hafte humari saagai hai aur tumhe usi ke liye hi invite karne ke liye main yahan aaye hoon (throws da invitation at his face) (wid anger nd hatred) i m going 2 get married. aur aana zaroor.

Sohan in complete anger pushes vedika towards a wall. he den goes to her nd puts his hands on da wall. so dey r facing each other. (hope u can imagine it i suck at descriptions). Vedika is breathing heavily nd fear can be seen in her eyes.

Sohan- kyun... kyun tum mujhe itna hurt kar rahi ho. (yells) why
Vedika is now completly scared.
Sohan (calms down)- itna bara faisla karne se pehle meri baat toh sun leti. srif ek baar.
Vedika (scared nd in a soft tone)- kya sunti main ek aur jhoot
Sohan- jhoot maine tumse kab jhoot bola haan. kab dhoka dya tumhe haan. dhoka toh tumne dya mujhe mujpe vishwaas na karke. meri ankhoo mein ankhein dal ke dekho kya inmein tumhe jhoot nazar aaraha hai. (vedika looks in his eyes) dekho vedika ye tumhe kabhi nahi jhoot bolengi. mein tumse kal bhi pyar karta tha aur ajj bi pyar karta hoon aur karta rahonga. mein ye nahi jaanta ke jo howa kaise howa lekin main tumhe such keh raha hoon i love u a lot. aur main ye bhi jaanta hoon ke tumbhi mujse ajj bhi mujse bohat pyar karti ho

vedika bends her head nd starts 2 cry. Sohan lets go of da wall.
Sohan (sad, nd hurt)- theek hai mat karo mera bharosa. lekin mein tumhe kisi aur ka hote howe nahi dekh sakta. tum agar meri pass nahi ho toh meri zindagi ek dum bekaar hai. ek ek pal maar raha hoon mein tumhare begair. pal pal marne se acha ek pal main hi marna.

Vedika is shocked 2 hear dis. Sohan turns around nd sees knife he goes towards it nd picks it up. Vedika is completly terrified. Sohan is about 2 stab himself with it suddenly vedika puts her hand on top of his nd he stops. Vedika in anger slaps him. she den hugs him. Sohan hugs her back.

Sohan (while hugging her)- i love u
Vedika- i love u 2.
Dey keep hugging each other. Sohan den starts 2 kiss her on her neck. He den nails her to the wall nd is about 2 kiss her on her lips wen Vedika's cell rings. Vedika comes back 2 her senses nd stops. She goes 2 pick up her cell phone she sees dat it is Dhruv calling. she is shocked nd suddenly relises wat she was about 2 do. she answers dhruv's call. she is talking 2 him while looking at sohan wit a helpless look on her face.
Vedika- ok bye (hangs up). she grabs her bag nd slowly walks out da door. sohan is shown as she is walking. the sad version of thoda sa pyaar howa hai is playing in da background. Vedika is outside walking in the middle of da road nd it is raining.

The End 😊

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