Asya : golden moment's...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i'm back after a story on asya Night of star's with golden momen't . the concept is littel bit different then the serial . hope ya all will like this too a small Teaser is here ...


Asad was asleep on chair . The dairy was oppened on table and his head was on the dairy . najma come inside and move Curtain from the window . The sun's rays come inside the room and on asad's head . najma ask asad

Najma : bhai kya hua aap saari raat iss chair par soye rahe . aur ye dairy phir se koi sher lika hai ???
Asad : haan kal zoya ka khayal dil o dimag se jaa hi nahi raha tha to socha uss khayal ko lafzon mein band kar ke apne paas rakh lun .
Najma : acha sunao na ke uske khayal mein doob kar aap ne kya sher likha ...
Asad smile a little and say suno ...

Wo Waqt Haseen, Wo Yaadein Haseen
Tujh Sang Beetaye Wo Lamhe Haseen..
Na Jane Kiski Nazar Lagi Meri Khushiyo Pe
Na Waqt Katta Hain, Na Hoti Ratein Haseen..

Najma got tear's in her eyes and she say bhai kitna pyaar karte ho zoya se aap . ke bin soche apni feeling ko lafzon mein saja dete ho .
kaash uss din wo sab na hota to aaj zoya aap ke paas aap ke saath hoti ...
that's a raaz will open it soon as the story will start 😆

So guys how was the small teaser plz leave you lovely comment's.


Ramisa

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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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d shayari is sooo beautiful n touching:)
loved ur mini teaser n surely will love wat u shall write👍🏼
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awesome start rami...
loved the teaser and the shayari...
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

d shayari is sooo beautiful n touching:)

loved ur mini teaser n surely will love wat u shall write👍🏼

thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey wonderful start
loved it
where is zoya????
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a spectacular way to start <3
I loved it
Continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start! continue soon...thanks for the PM and plz pm me again as well!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved ur mini teaser n surely will love wat u shall write
and plsss dont frgt to pm me
gm tc ks hav a gud day
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Originally posted by: princess14

great start! continue soon...thanks for the PM and plz pm me again as well!

thanks and ya i will shurely pm u 😃
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thank you

Originally posted by: grad2011

very nice update soon!!!


thanx

Originally posted by: Raneebee

Imagination!!!! great!

thanks

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