Swaron SS: Second Chance (part 5 & 6 updated)!!!

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

This was a beautiful OS. Very well-written and expressed. The story was really good. Sharon broke up with Swayam as she felt she didnot deserve the almost perfect Swayam, leaving him with no choice in the matter. They lived five years of their life without each other. The painful emotions they were going through was well expressed. I really loved the concluding chapters where they got together. But honestly, the highlight of this OS was your poetry!! Brownie, you are an amazing poet dude!! I am a fan now!! I really hope that you use your poetry in your future works because they are a treat to read!!

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

fabulous!!

Nd sorry for being late!!

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

part 4 was amazing

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Simren

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Super duper update...loved all the updates they were amazing keep writing dear...😊

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

m sooo sorry!! m very late!! but really nyc update!! :D

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lalita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

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heyya guys 😊

thank you soo much for the amazing response for this ss 😃

i could never continue writing this one if it were not for your comments 😊

thank you for liking n commenting on this one

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

totally fan of ur poems. u really have a great gift of writing and this ss was just amazing. the ending and the way u ended it was just fantastic. totally amazing