After Sept. 22 episode... prt 2 on pg 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guyz! Here is a new FF. I just can't bear what is happening in KS right now. so I am writing this one. It is very short. Probably 2 or 3 parts. And also it is my first one. So plzz tell me if I should stop.

I am continuing from Fridays episode. Bani is in the operation theater. And there are a few changes. Bani falls unconscious so she doesn't say anything to pushy. She is rushed to operation theater. Meanwhile, jai somehow finds out the bani is in the hospital, so he goes there to find pushkar waiting for the operation to end.

Hospital

Jai in a worried tone: Pushkar, what happened to bani? (he forgot all his hatred toward him)

P: someone hit her hard in the stomach and she fell unconscious. So I brought her here.

J: who the did this and why?

P: actually, and he tells him everything.

Jai, shocked: why did bani save me pushkar? She only wants my money.

Pushkar stares at the floor unable to answer jai's question. Jai repeats the question understanding that there is something which he doesn't know. Just then the doctor comes from the operation theater. Jai immediately turned to the doctor.

J: how is bani doctor? Is everything okay? How is my baby?

D: Mr.walia, I am sorry, we couldn't save ur child. Ur wife had a miscarriage. Jai didn't believe what he just heard. His heart refused to believe what the doctor just said. He just stared at the doctor, expression less. Pushkar understanding jai's state, said

P: how is bani doctor? Can we meet her?

D: Yes, right now she is unconscious. she will wake up in 10 minutes, though u can go in now. Jai just walked into the room without saying anything and pushkar followed suit.

The first thing jai saw when he walked into the room was bani unconscious holding her stomach. Tears were streaming down her face and she was mumbling something. Then suddenly she woke up can screamed

B: NAHIIIIIIIII!!!!!!! Krishna tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakthi ho!

guyz, leaves ur comments. i will end this in 2 or 3 parts like i said.

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jigna_07 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
great job!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 so sad 😭 😭 no krishna..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job - can't wait for the next parts.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 Good FF plz cum up with the next parts soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy a new FF! that was great! pls continie soon! i loved it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 aww it was a sad yet effective storyline.. love it already..

Cant wait for u to continue!!!

Henna x
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was good, but sad. This might bring Jai and Bani together.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I prefer reading your part of the story than the real thing on tv.. ;)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job. 👏 👏 👏
waiting for next parts

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