A LOVE STORY (FAN FICTION)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi! Friends i am making an attempt to write a story i hope u like it. Here is the introduction of the charchters. If i get a good response then i will continue wiht my story.

Garewal Family

Chetan Garewal - a rich businessman of delhi. - Someone who is and was always busy in his business and hardly had time for his family.

* Veena Garewal - Chetan's wife - A very simple lady. loves all her children but closest to Sujal her elder son.

Children:

* Sujal Garewal - 26 yrs old- Eldest son of Chetan and Veena. Handles the business along with his brothers. Very close to his Mother. Not so close to his father though respects him. All his brother love him and respect him. He has always been ther for them wen ever they need him.
He is someone who doesnt show his emotions to anyone, not very expressive about his feelings . Sujal is also close to simran he cares for her as a father does for a daughter. Sujal got engaged to Diya 3 yrs ago and she dies after 2 months of thier engagment. Sujal loved her a lot and is changed prson after her death.

* Akshat Garewal - 24 yrs old - A lawyer by profesion. :Loves sujal a lot and works with him. Handles the legal matters of the company.

* Varun Grewal - 22 yrs old- Also helps sujal in business. Looks after the financial dept of the company. He is a C.A by profession.

* Rishi Grewal - 20 yrs old - Youngest of all brothers. Loves sujal a lot. Closest to sujal than anyone in the family. He is also afraid of sujal. Though a very good person at heart but at the same time naughty.

* Simran ( Veena's sister daughter staying with them since her parents death) - 8yrs old - Darling of the house. very close to sujal. Sujaljust adores her can never say no to her for anything. Drops her to school, takes care of her studies even at times help her in her homework, takes her out for shopping. She is the only person other than his mom he goes out with in the last 3 years.


Lalit Garewal - Chetan's younger brother. (His wife died when piyush was 5 yrs old) a simple person.

Piyush Garewal 25 years old- Chetan's son - sujal's closet buddy and his best friend. Veena has taken care of him since his mothers death calls Veena "mumma" like everyone else. He is someone very talktive. Haapy go lucky person. Sujal shares everything wiht him. Really lokked after sujal after Diya's death.


Aggarwal Family

*Diya Aggarwal - Sujal's fiance who died in an accident 3 yrs back. Daughter of Om and Parvati agarwal.
*Om Aggarwal - Family friends of garewal have. Also a big buusinessman.
*Parvati Aggarwal - Om's wife.
*Aman Aggarwal - Diya's brother and Rishi's Best friend. He also respects Sujal.
*Nandini Aggarwal - Om's brother's daughter. Was Diya's best friend. And is also a good friend of sujal because of Diya.

Raheja's

*Mihir Raheja - Businessman staying in US wants to shift to India. Close friend of Chetan.
*Tulsi Raheja - his wife

Children:
*Kashish - his eldest daugther -24yrs old. She is very beautiful. Though she has stayed in US but has traditional values. A very sweet natured person.
*Charu - 22 yrs old
*Mehak - 21yrs old
*Kanan - 20 yrs old
*Mouli - 18yrs old.

Sujal who was a very friendly person and loved going out for picnics, parties, etc,. is now a totally changed person since death of his fiance Diya whom he loved very much. He is now a very quiet person. Doesnt talk to anyone much. Is always busy in his own work.


This story is about Sujal and Kashish. Sujal after Diya's death thought he would never fall in love again but since he met kashish he is attracted towards her but still loves Diya a lot.

PART 1

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This story is Set in Delhi

It is 7:00 o' clock in the morning Veena enters Sujal's room sees him sleeping. She has come to wake him up but decides not to as she knows he works late in the night and gets up early and leaves for work. So she decides to let him sleep for some more time.

Sujal gets up early everyday and drops simran to school.Simran also loves to go to school with him. Being with simran relieves him from all his tensiona nd problems. She is the only person with whom sujal goes out. Since Diya's death he hardlymoves out of the office he goes to offie early in the morning and comes back and then works till late in the night. He has stopped socialising since the day Diya died.

it is 8:00 o' clock Veena again comes to check on Sujal. He is awake this time.

Sujal: Good Morning Mumma. (Sees his watch it is 8:00am) Mumma yeh kya aapne aaj uthaya kyon nahin. Simran ko school mein late hojayega.

Veena: Uski fikar mat kar woh driver ke saath school chali jayegi. Tu itni der se soya tha apna thoda dhyan rakha kar.

Sujal: Mumma aap ko pata hai na Simran ko mere saath hee school jana acha lagta hai. Jaise mujhe papa.....(keeps quiet)

{Wen sujal was a kid he always liked that his dad drops him to school like most of his friends dad did But Chetan never had any time for the family he was always busy in his business. So sujal wants tto give simran all the love, affection, care which he always wanted from his father}

Veen understands wat sujal wanted to say.

Sujal goes to Simran's room and wakes her up. her room is just next to sujal's.

Sujal: Gudiya Good Morning. (Kisses her on her forehead) Jaldi uth der ho rahi hai school jana hai na.

Simran: Bhaiya bas 5 minutes aur.

Sujal: It is already 8:15 u will be late for school. Chalo jaldi utho.

Simran: Achha hai na bhaiya late honge tho school se chuti miljayegi.

Sujal: Theek hai phir tum so jayon but then i will have the choclate which got for u last night.

Simran: Maine yutha rahi hua. (Gets up) Meri choclate.

Sujal: Jab tum tayar hokar neece aayogi tho milagi.

Simran: (makes a face) okay..

sujal smiles at her. sujal and Simran get ready. Sujal is on the table waiting for simran to come and take her breakfast.

Simran and sujal take there breakfast. Simran is refusing to take milk and doesnt listens to Veena. Sujal takes the glass and makes simran drink the milk. She cannot refuse sujal as she really loves him and he also always listen to her and give her wat all she wants.

Sujal and simran leave . he drops simran to school and then goes to his office.

Sujal is sitting in his office the window behind him is open. Cool breeze start blowing. He gets up and goes to the window and sees outside it is raining outside. He thinks of Diya.

FLASHBASCK
(Sujal and diya met in the college there love started wen it was diya's first day of college(1st year) and sujal was in the second year and ragging the newcomers)

Sujal is sitting in the college canteen Diya comes to call him
Diya: Sujal yahan kaya kar rahe ho?

Sujal: kya hua diya?

Diya: Jaldi bahar chalo bahut zaroori kaam hai/

Sujal comes out and sees it is raining and stops.

Diya: kya hua wahan kyon ruk gaye.

Sujal: tho yeh tumhara zaroori kaam hai. Tum bhi naa.

(diya loved rains)

Diya: sujal u r so unromantic. Itna accha mausam hai aur tum. makes a sad face.

(Sujal could never see Diya's sad face. he loved her very much.)

Diya is still standing in the rain. sujal goes near her and kisses her on her cheeks and everyone around are watching them and the start clapping. The whole campus know how much sujal and diya love each other.

Diya gets embarrased and hits sujal and says kya kar rahe ho.

Sujal : (smiling looks towards her)Pyar!!!!!!!

Diya runs away from there and sujal follows her.

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Old memories of Diya bring a smile on his face and then he becomes sad and thinks why did u leave me alone.

His phone is ringing but since he is standing on the window and lost in his thoughts he does not pick his phone. Then his cell phone starts ringing. He sees it is his mom he picks up the phone.

Sujal: jee mumma

Veena: Kahan thee

Sujal: Yehi par tho hua kaam kar raha tha. (he doesnt know his landline was ringing)

(Veena can make out from his voice wat is his mood. She is really close to Sujal can make out from his voice, his face in wat kind of mood he is in)

Veena: Sach bol.

Sujal keeps quite he knows his mom knows wat is going in his mind.

Veena: Achha aaj ghar jaldi aa jana next week Simran ka b'day hain uskeliya shopping karni hai.

Sujal: Mumma aap rishi ke ko lejao. aap ko tho pata hai na mujhe shopping karna accha nahin lagta.
(sujal has jst stopped moving out since diya died. He used to go out very often with her for shopping. She loved it.)

Veena: tere ko tho pata hai na usko tho wahi pasand aata hai jo tum uske liya pasand karta hai. I will wait for u at 4:00pm.

Keeps down the phone.

Sujal then starts working. Suddenly sees his watch and it is 3:45pm. He calls piyush and says he is leaving for home and if there is any imp work he can call him. (Piyush and Sujal take care of the business)

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Sujal and Veena go out for shopping Sujal and Veena buy gifts for Simran and then they buy gifts for Akshat, Varun, and Rishi too. Veena asks sujal tumne apne liya kuch nahin lena.

Sujal: Mujhe ab kuch nahin chahiya. mera tho......

and keeps quite( he was refering as he has lost Diya he doesnt need anything now.)

Veena: Beta 3 saal ho gaye hai. Tu aaj bhi purani baatoin ke baare mein hee kyon sochta hai.

Sujal is quite but his eyes are moist. He thnks how can i ever forget Diya she was my life and i dont know why i am even living without her.

They come home. Sujal goes to his room and lies down in his bed thinking abt Diya.


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Chetan gets a call from his friend Mihir Raheja who stays in US.

Mihir calls up Chetan to find a business partner for him so that he can set up his business in India as he wants to come back to Inida and settle down in India. Chetan suggests why dont he and mihir do business together wen he is coming to India. Mihir agrees and says that his is eldest daughter KASHISH will be coming to India so that she can make all the preperations for us to come and settle down here. Chetan assures him that she will stay with him and by the time he comes to India with rest of his family all the merger requirements would be done and he can send Kashish.


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hey i thnk i hav read this story....yup i have read it...and i liked it very much... lekin as story goes make sum changes
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thank u friends for likiing my story. Will see to it if can make sum changes to my story.
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Hi! friends this is the second part of my story. I hope u like it. I have earlier also said i will try o add something new but it is mainly for the people who are members of the forum but not of yahoo grp.
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Sujal is lying down in his room and remembring Diya. He is thinking why has Diya left me alone.

FLASHBACK

Diya: Sujal aaj gadhi maine chaloongi. mujhe chabi doon.

Sujal: Tum rehne doon maine chaloonga.

Diya: Nahin maine chaloongi har baar tum mujhe Drive par le jate ho aaj maine tumhe le jaoongi.

Sujal: tum chup chap baitho maine chla rahahoon na

Diya forces him and takes the keys from him.

Sujal: Diya ghadi dheere chalo?

Diya; kyon Daar lag raha hai kya?

Sujal: Haan jab tum chaloongi tho daar tho lagega hee.

Diya is really driving fast on the Delhi - Jaipur Highway (NH - 8).

Diya: Achha tho yeh baat hai. (she increases the speed)

Sujal: Pls diya dont drive so fast. Pls speed kaam karo.

Diya is looking towards sujal and she bangs the car into a speeding truck coming from front.

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Sujal gets up from his bed and goes to his window he has tears in his eyes remembering Diya.

Veena sends Simran to ask him to come and have dinner. She knows he wont come unless simran forces him. Simran goes and calls sujal for dinner.

(Since Diya's death wenever he is upset he avoids joining the family for dinner he knows if they see him like this they would also get upset so he stays back in his room and makes the bahana that he has some office work and all them know how deeply he has immersed himself into his work)

Sujal comes down with Simran for dinner.

Chetan: Sujal my friends daughter Kashish is coming from states next week and both of u have to work on merger of Garewal group of industries and Raheja group of industries. Since they are shifting to Delhi soon and Mihir and Me would like to work together.

Sujal: But Dad, why is there a need for merger?

Chetan: It is for betterment of the company that is why we r going in for this merger.

Sujal: But i dont think soo.

Chetan: we r going ahead with the merger and u and kashish will b working on it.

Sujal: okay if u want u can but let piyush or akshat handle the merger. (Sujal hesitate to meet people since Diya's death.)

chetan: You are the MD of the company and i would like u to work with her. Infact u r the one who will be working with her.That's my final decision.

After being forced by Chetan he agrees.

Sujal: Okay dad.

The week passes by the all celebrate Simrans birthday. Chetan tells sujal that day after tommorow morning Kashish Mihir's daughter is coming and u hv to go to the airport and pick her up. Sujal doesnt want to go but Chetan forces him and he agrees. He asks piyush to come with him as he doesnt want to go alone.

End of this part

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goluuuuuuuuuuuu

zabardast! jo yahan per bhee post ker dee,,,,,

coz i lost this story sumway in betweennnnnnn!!

waiting for it badly!😊

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Nice story keep it up👏👏👏
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Great story Golu...

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