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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here is a little something i wrote for Ranveer, hope you guys like it!!! I know i am not that great with these type of things but hey since nobody writes anything for him i thought i should. Yep Ranveer is my newest obsession after Jai!!! some of you already know this since i keep pestering them about it!!!

People think I am evil,

But I am just trying to save everyone from the devil,

I know all I do is torture,

But can't show my feelings of nurture.

I come off as a complete mama's boy,

But can't help it since I am coy.

I can't help but be brutal to my wife,

Even though its like piercing my heart with a knife.

I had sworn to be spouseless,

But my sisters tears made me defenseless,

Unwontedly I had to get married,

So I don't let my emotions get carried.

All I want is a divorce,

For that I have to be fierce.

I come off as trouble,

Since I live in my own bubble,

I am in a great trepidation,

With this new expectation.

I know all my attempts are futile,

But I just hope they can make someone smile.

There are some actions I know I can't defend,

But for now it has to end.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW.. that was nice.. and that does sound like ranveer.. except fo d - im not sure if he's hurtin by hurting raashi - i wouldnt mind some luv connection between 'em.. that was very very well written 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

WOW.. that was nice.. and that does sound like ranveer.. except fo d - im not sure if he's hurtin by hurting raashi - i wouldnt mind some luv connection between 'em.. that was very very well written 👏

aww thanks,

well i couldn't make ranveer sound bad, so had to add the piercing his heart with a knife part. it could be true you know.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 Brilliant,simply awesome n very funny 👏 Why did you end,it was getting so good?I was LMAO....it so suits Ranveer's personality
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏

wow! that was great!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW Lone! 👏 Suits him very much! 👏 I too have a feeling that he doesnt like to do what he does with Rashi...but thats his self defence against the female species! 😆

Did you hear his dialogues the other day. He says to Rashi 'tumhare paas toh mere liye time nahi hai!' He roars at her!

What do we make of that?


Luv, Jojo
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job lonely, love it 👏 nice poem!!! totally true in our not so sanyasi anymore case 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya74

😆 Brilliant,simply awesome n very funny 👏 Why did you end,it was getting so good?I was LMAO....it so suits Ranveer's personality

Thanks hun!!!!! hahah i had to end it since i was running out of ideas.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigal101

👏 👏 👏

wow! that was great!

thanks hun!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessjojo

WOW Lone! 👏 Suits him very much! 👏 I too have a feeling that he doesnt like to do what he does with Rashi...but thats his self defence against the female species! 😆

Did you hear his dialogues the other day. He says to Rashi 'tumhare paas toh mere liye time nahi hai!' He roars at her!

What do we make of that?


Luv, Jojo

Thanks jojo!!!!

lol yaar he needs to have self defence against the opposite sex otherwise he'll go into the devdas mode too.

lol yep our sanyasi wants something but says something else!!!

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