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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sapphhire

virat is back yaay happy dance.


Yeaah he's backkk πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

He started to come closer. Manvi's heartbeat was increasing with every passing second. He grabbed her face.

Viren – Manvi please stop behaving as if I was a stranger to you

She didn't reply, she tried to calm down herself, his touch was burning her skin painfully.

Viren – I know that it's difficult for both of us but we'll have to do this for our child and …

Manvi cuts him off – It's not YOUR child, it's VIRAT's child and only his !! Do you get that ?

Manvi couldn't take it anymore. Viren who was heartbroken after hearing all this became very angry.

Viren – No Manvi, now it is MY child and you better understand that.

Manvi was scared, she never saw Viren like this before. She was going to reply to him when she felt his hands on her waist, this was the limit ! She pushed him away with a jerk and gave him a tight slap.


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He entered the house, it was so silent he thought. Everyone was more shocked than happy to see him. Vanshika Maa was crying hard. The rest of the family was just looking at him with different sort of emotions. He knew that they have gone through very difficult moments, especially Manvi, how did she react when she learnt that he was dead. Even he didn't know how he's feeling right now. He can't wait anymore, not seeing her was making him restless.

Virat – Where's Manvi ?

Now the silence became even more silent and it wasn't bearable. Even Vanshika Maa stopped her tears.

Virat – Okay, so you all are scared that how she will react and that maybe she'll attack me like a bhooki sherni ?? Haha don't worry I know my sherni very well, I'll manage.

He tried to joke but he understood that something is wrong, even more than wrong...

Virat – I'll go and check her myself

Before anyone could stop him, he went upstairs and someone bumped into him.


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Manvi – VIRAT !!

She couldn't believe her eyes. No, this was not possible. She thought she was dreaming, until she felt him hugging her tight. She hugged him back. She was crying non-stop.

Virat – Shhh Manvi, I'm here jaan. Everything will be fine now. Oh God I missed you so much...

Saying this, he kissed her neck and saw the Mangalsutar.

Virat – So you didn't remove it ? I knew that only you will understand that I'm still alive.

He said that smiling. Manvi started to cry even more harder now. She hugged him as tightly as possible.

Virat – Jaan what happened ? Yaar I'm here now !! And wait, where's my baby ?? God I'm dying to see him, Manvi where is he ?

Just then Viren and all the family members arrived.

Viren – Virat !! You ??

Virat – Viren !! How're you dude ??

And they hugged each other. Viren didn't know if he had to be happy because Virat was back or if he had to cry because his life became a joke.

Virat – Manvi yaar, please go and bring my baby I wanna see him.

Manvi was not able to move, seeing Virat and Viren together and both looking at her was making her mad. She somehow managed to look at Jeevika.

Two minutes later, Jeevika came with Viru.

Jeevika – Here is your son Virat Jiju.

Virat was overwhelmed taking this little life in his arms. He kissed Viru's forehead and gave a look of gratitude to Manvi.

Manvi couldn't control herself anymore, she broke down on the floor, and let her tears rolling slowly.

Virat gave Viru back to Jeevika and went to Manvi.

Virat – Manvi just tell me what's the matter, I can't see you like this. Maa, Dadaji please someone say something.

No one responded and looked down. Finally Swamini Bua spoke :

Swamini – Virat, please listen to me very carefully. It is very difficult for me to say this, and it's even more difficult for Manvi and Viren as it is happening to them...

Virat – Manvi and Viren ? Please Bua, come to the point.

Swamini – Actually Virat, Manvi became really lifeless after hearing that you were dead and no one could see her like this and two days ago, Viren asked … well he asked … if...

Virat – IF ?

Swamini – If he can marry Manvi

Virat became breathless. Did he hear right ? Did Bua really said that ? He didn't react at all.

Manvi couldn't take her eyes off of Virat. She was dying inside her seeing his painful face.

Swamini – And we all together accept it, Manvi is young Virat, and Viru also needed a father so... Viren and Manvi had a simple ….. court marriage today...

Virat – WHAT ?? What did you say Bua ? Viren and Manvi's what ?

Vanshika – Beta please calm down, we'l find a solution and...

She was cutted off by Virat

Virat – Maa please all of you stpo this nonsense joke ! It's disgusting !

Virat was fuming with anger, no this cannot be true, his Manvi, his jaan someone else's wife...

Virat – NO ! NO ! Manvi tell me that they are all lying ! Jaan please tell me that all this isn't true !

Please say something Manvi !

Manvi – Vi... Virat

Virat – Yes Manvi I'm listening

She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, she has to tell him the truth, together they will face this situation.

Manvi – I'm married to him...

Virat – MANVI !! Listen I know that you're the best prankster of the world but this is not a joke anymore !

He knew that they were all right but he just cannot accept it.

Viren – Listen Virat I...

Virat – Viren just leave from here right now !

Swamini – Virat ! I know how hard this is for you but you cannot talk to Viren like this.

Viren – It's okey Bua Ji, I'll better leave now. Manvi your phone was ringing so I thought that...

Virat snatched the phone which Viren was giving to Manvi.

Virat – Don't even TOUCH at her phone again

Viren understood what he meant, he left the house angrily. First the slap given by Manvi and then the rude behaviour of Virat.

Viren – You both will regret this. I promise.


Okey guyzz so this was part 2, I know there is a lot of rona dhona but this is the beginning of the story and there will be more of VirMan in next update. I just want to clear the problem with Viren before giving some hawwt VirMan.

Plz tell me how it was, all your comments are welcome :-)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲viren villan girl u gave me heart attack omg virman behaved so badly with him aww hawt vm scenes will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: uzmasable

😲viren villan girl u gave me heart attack omg virman behaved so badly with him aww hawt vm scenes will be waiting


Hehe don't worry he will be normal after some time 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Just read both parts and loved it viren as a villian omg lol please do pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: madpaki

Just read both parts and loved it viren as a villian omg lol please do pm me when you update


Hey tfs deaar 😊
Yeah will surely PM you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
quite different story line n really interestng too...
luvd it...
nreally happy dat virat z bak...cudnt bear to c anyone else wid mannu othr dan our virat...
viren in villian role ...
plzz cont soon...wud luv to recieve a pm for ur future updates!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
just awesome part
thanks for pm me
plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
lovely !!
eagerly waiting 4 nxt ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Viren is playing antogonist role! Really different story! Finally virat and maanvi united. Fabulous update. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.

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