7 Months In Heaven - Ch 6 Pg 75(Happy Bday Alissa) - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
What is this fia? I was not here for so many days. I thougit that you must've updated 2-3 parts. But it seems that you're taking even more long break then me. Please dear, update soon. We're waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

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At first lemme rejoice...coz I'm the first one to comment even before receiving the pm😆
Yiiipppeppepeee...one more super update ...party time...🥳
Haha I'm sounding crazy right...????? but thats the effect ur SS have on me😉😆 Hey the font u used is Gergia ..isnt it..??? Its one of ma fav. fonts😳...hehe...😆
Ok ok now dont be gussa...🤗 No more bakwaas n coming straight to ur update😉

Yiipppeee...the Princey is back to India I wanna meet him too😆

👏👏👏Vultures, they are all hungry vultures who just want to pounce on me and feed on the stories of my life that please them and the ratings of their channels the most. Why would they care what a mess my life has been, why would they care about the hard times I have been through and yet still smiled like nothing bad ever happened to me, why would they care that I just lost the woman I loved and respected the most, my Mother. All they care about is a sizzling hot breaking news regarding me, whether it is true or not doesn't even matter. It should be enough to leave people talking about it for weeks. This is my life that people crave for and dream of getting a first-hand experience at. Awesome!👏

This dialogue was aawesome...seriously yaar😳 Bechara Uday...how much pain he went through😭😭 but those vultures... i mean media...uurrgghh😡
n now I'm really gonna kill that Taklaraj😆..means Giriraj😡😡 He is such a bad dad🤢
How can he even tell Uday to give Meghna his mom's place😭😭

👏👏👏People say time heals all wounds. I don't agree. Because the scars that those wounds leave remain forever. Yes the pain lessens, but it never ends. And these scars have the strange power to remind me that my past was real. I don't regret whatever happened in my past, because nothing I do can alter it. But the wounds of my past are evidence of the humanity buried within me. The circumstances in life made me lock away that side of mine a long time ago, but that does not mean it doesn't exist. Our choices make us who we are today. And I choose to stay this way. Because I will never give anyone the chance to hurt me again. I have always learned from my mistakes, and that's what makes me stronger at heart and mind than others. And I will not repeat the mistake of unlocking my heart, only to be shattered to pieces once again by people like my Father. My Mother was my family, the light in my dark life, the meaning of love and happiness, and with her death, these emotions died too. With her death, her Uday died too. What remains is only Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh, a Prince who will fulfill his duties and serve his people for as long as his life permits him.👏

This one is another heart-touching speech😊 Uday misses his mom so much but never lets others see his pain...😭

Finally we get to see the entry of our deary princess Unnati😳
Unnati n Karan getting married...huurrayyy🥳

The trio arguing over food was really funny n Unnati eavesdropping Karan n Uday😆🤣

"I think you dropped something" , Uday extended his hand in which he was holding the wallet in order to hand it back to her. But as soon as the girl turned around, Uday was left stunned.

Now who is this...??????😕 errmmm...lemme guess..!!!!😳 Well I cant guess it right now😆 Is this__________??????? (plzz fill in the blanks)😆
kk..now after reading further ...omg..where's the next part...???😲 Bad bad move fifi...!!!!!😡 Where's the remaining update...??? it was sooo short..😭😭
I planned to make a long comment this time...but the update was itself short..bhebhebhe😭
How can u do this😆
Now u gotta update fast I tell u...!!!!!😈
Kk now coming to ur speech (better call it a speech isnt it.???)😆
So I know u were really busy over the last 2 weeks😉 n yep..I didn't even miss manyata once..!!!! 😉😆 guess why..??? coz its the story of my hubby😳, i.e, Uday ofcourse...!!!! now dont think anything else😆
Negativity in the forum...well yesterday that girl killed me...uurgghhh😡😡...!!!!
Fifi I trust u...I know u read all the FF/OS/SS 🤓🤗
Now this time I'm not gonna thank u for the pm😳 bcoz I had reserved before I got the pm...!!!!!😆😆

kk I've dropped in my precious comment⭐️...sambhaal ke rakhna...kahi kho na jaye😉 Its really precious u know😆
Alright bohot bakwaas ho gaya..now I need to stop...!!!!!😆

reserved...for some more bakwaas😉

Byeee...
Love yaa mwaahhh...!!!🤗🤗



Lol yes the font that I used is Georgia. People have been asking me that question a lot lately 😆
Thanks Riyu. Glad you liked those parts. I really wanted the readers to connect to Uday's character and it's good to see that happening.
Yes Unnati and Karan are going to tie the knot 😊 . I figured that such an awesome guy like Karan deserves an awesome girl like Unnati.
Hahahkeep guessing 😉 . Lol you thought it was short? 😲 . It was like 8 pages. That is not short 😛 . Yaayy I am happy you didn't miss Manyata. Exactly, it's Uday's story and as long as we have him in every update then all's good right? 😉
Lol yes sambhal kay rakhungi and I will update soon. Thanks once again!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

wow amazing update fifu

so princey is now back in india 🤣

hahaha and karan and unnati getting married. wow, i called unnati's bf karan too in my ff 🤣

loved the update 🤗
thanks for the PM
do continue soon



Thanks Nihu.
Lol yes he's back. Hahaha omg yes I just realized that. Lmao 😆
I'll update soon. Thanks again!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi0809

yay... a new update!! Great!

Great update Fia!👏
Yup, I kinda missed ManVeer in it but I completely understand that for the continuity of events it's important to take it slow and steady and not to rush in events and give proper time for everything to unfold😳...

oh gosh!... I just hate Giriraj... just when I think he can't stoop low any further he makes another benchmark of His Highness's Lowliness 🤢... I'm happy Uday gave it back to him in his true classy style.. a firework of words... Can I tell you one secret... For months, I've been thinking that Yuvraj Udayveer hasn't had a best friend in DEK and in my mind I had cooked up a best friend for him and had even named him 'Karan'... Karan is my most favorite male name, has a certain cuteness to it ...

And OMG Uday meets Manyata again so soon?... COOL😎!... And once again, you've ended the part at another cliff hanger... arrggghhh why do you do this to me? Now I can't wait for the next update to know more... Atleast once make a normal ending for a chapter so one does not anticipate in a berserk way for the next part to come🤪 but in a calm and sophisticated manner😃... Plzz do update soon!... Now I can't help but wonder but Manyata looks up into Uday's face what is her reaction?... The mighty Yuvraj is already stunned☺️



Thanks Mahi 😃
Exactly. And thank you for understanding that. I know how we all are obsessed with ManVeer but we can't really move a story forward with just 2 characters no can we? And they can't romance in every update either as it might bore people eventually 😆

His Highness's Lowliness, I like that 😉😆 . Omg mine too 😳 . Karan is a really amazing name for guys.

Soon for us but not for them as they are meeting after 5 years 😆 . Hahahaha I try to make the ending as normal as I can but it ends up being a cliffhanger anyway 😛 . Lol. You will find her reaction out soon 😉
Thanks again for the wonderful comment 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor

ye aii fifu bhai ki munni😆

aww part 3

gr8 update fifu bhaiawesome👏 awesome👏 awesome⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

uday is back in indiaMaharani Avantika is no more its sad😭i hate giriraj😡aww uday entry is rocking black shirt blue jeans black ray ban☺️

Reporter 1: Welcome back to India Yuvraaj Udayveer. Any specific reason behind your sudden return?😆

Reporter 2: You were last spotted with Princess Natasha in a restaurant in London. Are you both dating?😡

Reporter 3: How do you feel after your Mother Late Maharani Avantika's death?😔

Reporter 4: We heard that you have not been on good terms with your Father Maharaj Giriraj ever since his divorce with Late Maharani Avantika. Is that true? Do you approve of his second marriage?👎🏼

Reporter 5: What was the real reason behind you leaving India 5 years ago?😡

"No comments" , was all Uday said.🤣🤣🤣thats like my prince😳👍🏼hungry media huhhh😡

i like karan and uv friendship⭐️very good👏

i hate giriraj uncle😡Giriraj moved forward to hug him but Uday moved back and raised his hand to stop him. very good uday👍🏼👏👏giri deserve this 😡this meghna is so annoying i hate her😡uday rocks acha kia giri uncle ke saat👏👏"Rot in hell"🤣fifu bhai u rock yaar⭐️this was epic good🤣 👍🏼uday really miss her mom😭poor uday i feel bad for him😭karan is sweet⭐️Princey boy😆👍🏼Jeez man I sound like your girlfriend"🤣🤣both are very funny 😆best friends😎i like it😳all credit goes to my fifubhaiawesome writing skills munni khush huiunnati is also is in india yayyy 😃unnati and karan are couplewow i am happy for them🥳i think that wallet owner is manyta 😆am i right?yay manveer meeting againwaiting for ur next update love u fifu bhai




Thanks a bunch Munni 🤗
Yes Uday is back and his mom is dead. Sigh. Glad you liked his entry 😳
Hahah I loved how you expressed your reactions on the reporters scenes 😆
Thanks baby. Haha yes our Prince rocks 😉 . Yes Unnati and Karan are a couple. You will find out who the wallet owner is in the next update 😛
Love you too baby 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Ahhh!!! Wat an update fifi!!!

I loved it to the core!!
Yay i guessed it right unnati and karan huh??
Yippee!!! Love u fifi!!
And that girl is manyata right??
Ya i know i am right!!!
Hehehehehehehe!!
Love you fifi!!

Still res mood have a long comment still!!



Thanks Gowri.
Yes Unnati and Karan are together.
Lol you'll find that out in the next update 😉
Love you too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

FIA, Thank u finally Updating. Please don't apologise for the lack of Manveer in it, ...I DON'T MIND! I loved the conversation between Giriraj & Uday...It was filled with so much of emotion. Giriraj, really is a nasty piece of S***! ...He really needs to learn how to be a parent. I agree with Uday: "ROT IN HELL" (to Giriraj). Karan & Unnati...was a pleasant surprise😃. Thanx 4 such an awesome update.
Please continue soon...



Thanks Navina 😊
Pheww thank God you didn't mind the lack of ManVeer in it. Makes me feel better. Lol.
Hmm true about Giriraj. I am glad you liked his conversation with Uday.

Yes Karan and Unnati were meant to be a pleasant surprise. Lol.

Thanks once again. I'll continue soon!
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-


ahhh...what a awesome update!!
amazing fantastic brilliant...👏👏👏
this update was worth waiting...😃
I LOVEDDD ITT...👏
really...well manveer itny bhi zarori nahi hain..personally i like these kinda chapters more😳,chapters only about uday and his feelings and u write his feeling his thought's his point of views amazingly well...
once again amazing...👏👏
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ahem...😆
first of all sorry for commenting SOoo Late..i am really very sorry...🤔
without wasting more time i should start writing what i felt(or i should say MINI SS 🤣) after reading this amazing awesome chapter...you have my hat wear it kyunki bar bar hatts off karna parta hai..😆
when i read the the very first line MUMBAI 2012 i was like 😳 oh fifi yar itna intezar karny pary ga ye tu bta deti kya hoa agly din...😆😆
but then when i start reading ye sari bakwaas mery mind sy nikal gai...so and i was like hmmm uday,uday ki entry...
and the way u wrote that scene is exceptionally good i really liked the way u used media i mean reporter to tell us,your reader his present and past story,a short summary of his last five years life.i loved it...that paragraph is amazingly written...👏👏👏
awww...really feel bad for uday...avantika died poor lady..😔i am really feeling bad for uday...
hayyeee...here comes our sexy prince...😉ay hayyeee fifi kya likha hai subhanallah...sachi i was actually able to visualize that scene...hayyeee na pocho!!awesomeee..👏👏👏
woh song ki line yad a gai...🤣"gory sy chity sy punjabi chery py gucci ka chasma tera aisy hai jaisy ky lasi ky glass main vodka shot ho milta" 🤣🤣(o teri yahan tu Ray ban tha na) 😆😆 i loved the way u explained his style his dressing...
the whole paragraph was Hayyyeee...amazing...😆😆
i loved these lines ALOTTT...welldone for writing this oh yeah u have my hat na so hats off for this...😃
The doors opened and out came a suave and handsome young man, about 6 feet tall, clad in a black buttoned down shirt and a pair of blue jeans, his eyes hidden behind the veil of black Ray Bans and his lips forming a million dollar smile. (hayyee sary songs a gay mery mind main..ufff..yar!!hayyeee...mar dala allah...🤣)Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh was the heartthreob of millions all over the world. koi shak!! 😎somethHis one of a kind aura and persona easily differentiated him from the others,ing that only a true Prince could muster.na pochooo!!!🤣 Uday waved away to the crowd and it burst into never ending screams of excitement. A group of Royal Guards immediately surrounded him from all sides, protecting him as a shield from the crazy fans who were attempting to touch, kiss, grab and sometimes even bite him.🤣🤣 Not a single day passed by when he didn't make a girl faint within ten feet of his presence
we can't blame girls either.. can we?? itny hot smart charismatic intelligent aur yummy ho(🤣 remember VB dialouge i am cutting it short) us ko dekh kar kisi ko bhi UDAY-LARIA ho jay...😉


ughhh seriously this media they only need spice gossip for there news channels high trp's and nothing else..i mean how one can feel?? he lost his mother u fool!!😡😡

We heard that you have not been on good terms with your Father Maharaj Giriraj ever since his divorce with Late Maharani Avantika. Is that true? Do you approve of his second marriage?

this media is just..ughhh!! is ko kehty hain jaly par namak chirkna..😡😡
i love this quote alot "most people do not listen to the intent to understand they listen with the intent to reply -stephen covey"
its like people don't care what u feel what u r going through the will just listen to your story mock sometime at your face sometime behind your back make fun of u or just gossip around about u that's the reality in this world har koi yahi karta hai...logon ko bas mazy leny hoty hain..and i believe that at the end of the day its your life your road your's alone other may walk it with u but no one can walk it for u..and that's exactly what uday is doing he is a royal he is making his own way in the bunch of these stupid feeling less people...

Vultures, they are all hungry vultures who just want to pounce on me and feed on the stories of my life that please them and the ratings of their channels the most. Why would they care what a mess my life has been, why would they care about the hard times I have been through and yet still smiled like nothing bad ever happened to me, why would they care that I just lost the woman I loved and respected the most, my Mother.All they care about is a sizzling hot breaking news regarding me, whether it is true or not doesn't even matter. It should be enough to leave people talking about it for weeks. This is my life that people crave for and dream of getting a first-hand experience at. Awesome!👏👏👏

when i read this paragraph..omg poor uday i really feel bad for him...😔poor guy is hiding his pain his sorrow..i was so touched after reading this paragraph..fifu amazing as i always say u describe his feelings amazingly well and every time i read his thoughts my love for this SS and uday become more deep and more strong...😳
awesome...👏
ahhh!!!KARANNN!!! i really like him...😛i love reading about them..the strong brotherly bond they share is just beautiful...amazing..he is his real and true friend i really love reading about them there friendship..its like u can't hug yourself...u can't cry on your own shoulder..Life is all about living for one another..so one should live with those who love u the most..

Uday knew that Karan and his Father never got along as he thought Karan always provoked his son. Whereas the truth was that Karan always gave Uday the confidence and support that he needed, and that was something his Father was always unable to see. So he decided not to push him further to follow him inside.
huh!!sarra hoa saala taklo budah ghosat...😡kisi ko tu acha samjh ly apny or apni meghu ky ilawa..budha!!i hateee giriraj...😡kuch kar do is ky sath fifu paralyses coma na na AIDS yeah best option... 😡woh meghu ko bhi kara do...😡churail or ye ganja bhoot...😡

"Maharaj Giriraj Singh wanted to meet me"

"That's a very nice way of addressing your Father" , teased Karan.

"Yeah well I am here to meet him not as a son, but as a Yuvraaj" ,


awesome amazing that's called a strong person a true yuvraaj royal not by just his blood but his actions..he hate that man who is unfortunately happen to be his father but still he is going to meet him for the sake of his people..amazing fia..i really liked it..👏 👏

AWESOME,AMAZING 👏👏👏FANTASTIC, BRILLIANT, EXCELLENT, OUT OF THE WORLD, HATS OFF ...fia where r your hands i really kiss them..omg girl how can u write so so so good...amazing...here u go a tight hug for writing this AMAZING conversation between a king and prince i loveddd it...🤗
i am not gonna copy/paste here what dialogue or line i loved in this para as every line every word the way u wrote is just simply amazing..dil khush kar diya g ap ny...MWAHH!!!❤️
such a ********,******,*********,*******,***** girraj is...😡 😡i HATEEE HIM 😡😡yukh yukh..sachi wanna kill him right now i mean his wife died but budhy ko tu pehla nasah pehla khuma waly halat chary hain...😡😡
but really fia the way u wrote this whole paragraph dear u r a brilliant amazing writer..👏👏👏standing ovation,round of applause everything...i mean this is just brilliant...👏 👏 👏
for me this was the high light for this amazing update...👍🏼
i loved the way uday didn't call him dad even once all his lines was full of aggression anger pain the feeling of being slaughtered being rejected...yeah being rejected by his own father...and this hurt like hell...i can feel what uday is going through and that's why u r a brilliant writer amazing..u r just omg..mashALLAH so talented...👏may god bless u and protect u from evil eye..ameen..
oyeee hoyeee kya kaha hai ROT IN HELL bestest dialouge ever...👏👏👏fia is ky liye aik aur hug..a tight one...mwah!! 🤗for writing so so so good...👏
okay so now we will talk about uday his disappointment from his father...
sometimes u can't always be nice.that's how people take advantage of u sometime one have to set boundaries and uday did it he set the boundaries between a relation of father-son and a king and a prince...now i am not feeling bad for uday he is a tiger he stand for himself...
i believe that don't let anyone break your soul you have to stand on your own two feet and stand up for yourself there are those,that would give anything to see you fail,but u must never give them the satisfaction,hold your head up high,smile and stand your own ground..
and uday our strong brave uday did exactly the same...u know why i love your uday more why i find him better bcz he is just the way i wanna be...i wanna be like him fight and stand for myself what he did is something i wanna do but i can't, not that strong and that's why i loved it even more...
i read some beautiful lines somewhere i thought should share it with u...it was like its time to take your life back from the people that are causing u pain and making u unhappy this is your life and u are the author of your story if u are stuck on the same page just remember that at any moment u have the power to write a new chapter...
i wrote this here because that what he did he took his life back from a person who was causing him pain..a person who was his father who is a murderer of his mother he gave his mother lot of pain lot of sorrow which was not acceptable for him but he bear everything,everything what his so called father did who call himself a king a rich king who's no more a king in his own son's eye as a father he is the poorest man on this earth who's son hate him..and is leaving him to be rotten in hell and going to start a new chapter in his life...

i think that there are moments in our lives when we found ourselves on crossroads ,afraid,confused without road maps,the choice we make in those moments can define the rest of our days and of course when,we face the unknown most of us prefer to turn around and go back...but once in a while people push around to something better something found just beyond the pain of going it alone and just beyond the...bravery and courage to let someone go..
bcz its only when u'r tested,that u discover who u can be...the person u want to be does exist somewhere on the other side of hard work and faith and belief and beyond the heartache and fear of what lies ahead...
i wonder if i am making any sense here...😳
so phewww...
moving on...
and then again
People say time heals all wounds. I don't agree. Because the scars that those wounds leave remain forever. Yes the pain lessens, but it never ends. And these scars have the strange power to remind me that my past was real. I don't regret whatever happened in my past, because nothing I do can alter it. But the wounds of my past are evidence of the humanity buried within me. The circumstances in life made me lock away that side of mine a long time ago, but that does not mean it doesn't exist. Our choices make us who we are today. And I choose to stay this way. Because I will never give anyone the chance to hurt me again. I have always learned from my mistakes, and that's what makes me stronger at heart and mind than others. And I will not repeat the mistake of unlocking my heart, only to be shattered to pieces once again by people like my Father. My Mother was my family, the light in my dark life, the meaning of love and happiness, and with her death, these emotions died too. With her death, her Uday died too.i was in tears after reading this line What remains is only Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh, a Prince who will fulfill his duties and serve his people for as long as his life permits him.

how beautifully u explained his feelings his..his pain his disappointment...
omg...u should be a professional writer u should write a book..u can play with words u know that...
can i share something with u here...here i go...

It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance. It is the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance. It is the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give. And the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live. -

and oh man fia rula diya tum ny mujhy...but that's okay...phewww...so yeah!!
u r a brilliant writer...👏 👏👏👏omg how beautifully u wrote his feelings..👏
never ever think of stop writing..never...promise me..😊
amazing,awesome beautiful...⭐️ after reading this para i just wanna say that god doesn't give u the people we want,he give u the people u need,to help u,to hurt u,to love you,to leave u...and to make u the person u were meant to be!!
sometime its not about u,its much more than that its about what other wants from u or cah kar na cha kar ap ko kuch aisa karna parta hai jo ap nahin karna chaty par karty hain...
as u said earlier "with great power comes great responsibility" and your uday is the perfect example for this phrase...
On their way Karan deliberately tapped the steering wheel with his thumbs in a constant rhythm further annoying Uday.
that' called a true friend a real friend...its like you don't have to be perfect in front of the right one they see beyond ur imperfections...except u...and love u for who u are...
and uv-karan relation is the same...😳
hahhahahhaha...princey boy...hahahaahahhaa...
oh man i love there every single convo...i just LOVE it...

Well atleast I made you smile. You look good when you smile buddy", said Karan.

"Jeez man I sound like your girlfriend" , 🤣🤣🤣

amazing hahahhahh...👍🏼


ohhh...😃unnati..i love her alot really i use to love watching her and uday's scenes in the show..really...i love this dada choti i really like it...and well its feel awesome to be called choti my bhai call me choti...😆
and here too omg she is sho sho shweet loving and caring...😃
wohooo...that's good that's really good actually unnati and karan awww how sweet both of them are great support or i should say only support in UV's life..and are just amazing..welldone fifi...👏👏👏and the reason karan gave for choosing unnati was commendable and actually very welldone fia i mean amazing kya approach hai yar!!zabardast!!
i loved these follwing dialouges ALOTTT...

Her antics were something that Uday always enjoyed seeing. For him, she was the most adorable thing on the planet.

"Ahem ahem. I guess I am invisible for you two. Unnati this is not done. Won't I get a welcome hug?" , Karan grinned and spread his arms.

awww..how sweeettt!!!😃i loved it..👏👏

"3 days ago when I arrived at the airport. Karan proposed" , Unnati answered shyly. Karan was utterly proud of himself for having accomplished the arduous task of proposing and had a triumphant grin plastered on his face.

"I'm sorry, did I hear the words 'Karan' and 'proposed' together in the same sentence?" , Uday asked flabbergasted.

"Ha-Ha-Ha very funny Uday" , replied Karan sarcastically.

"So Karan. You finally decided to tie the knot huh?" , winked Uday.

"Yea well it's not everyday you find a girl who considers your handsome and dashing best friend to be her brother. And Unnati happens to be the first girl who considered you as her brother and not some hot-shot sex God that girls normally are always worshiping" , said Karan to which Uday laughed.

"Karan, behave yourself" , glared Unnati.

"What? It's a compliment baby. You know the day I heard you calling Uday "Dada" , I had decided that I am going to marry you and you only" , Karan said in a melodramatic way, holding Unnati's hands. The trio burst out laughing.🤣

Same here" , Karan raised his hand excitedly.

"Dude are you drugged?" , Uday leaned forward and whispered to Karan.

🤣 🤣🤣🤣i loved it...i must say ur sense of humor is amazing...
i mean after reading there convo i was laughing like crazy...🤣

okay so that was all...it was a total BLOCKBUSTER update for me..and didn't miss manveer for once and i would love to read more chapter like this...
really fia i mean there was everything in this particular chapter i laughed i felt pain got worried got pissed,there was suspense i felt love care affection everything a proper film a well scripted show need so your update was a full on package for me...and that's makes u a perfect writer a brilliant awesome fantastic writer your every update is amazing..and complete...i love it and i can tell u that,the story u r writing i feel is not just a story its a saga...a saga of yuvraaj udayveer singh...❤️
and i loveee it...🤗
do continue this SS...u r a brilliant writer and whatever happen don't stop writing yeah u can take a break relax give your mind some rest write when u feel like writing but do continue this SS and don't worry about the replies we all can wait u r busy..studies are more important and i think its really good that you appreciate your readers feedback and reply them but if u can't and stuck or busy in something or not feeling well we all are family and can understand that u can't reply for now..and will reply later when u feel like doing it..and there is nothing to worry about and feel bad in all this..okay...
so don't feel bad..do continue this SS as i loveee it...
take your time..
love ya...🤗
jen...😊



Thanks Jen 🤗
Me too. I prefer writing more about the characters emotions instead of the romance between them.
It's okay. Your comment is still not as late as my reply to it 😆 . Lol I love your mini SS 😛 . Haha yes I have your hate and I am wearing it 😆
Lol why is everybody getting shocked by the leap? I had warned you all about it in my prologue 😛
Thanks Jen. I really wanted everybody to connect with that particular scene with the media and show what it feels like when your personal life becomes a public affair and that's something our poor Prince has to go through all his life. Hahahaha perfect song 🤣 . But yes chashma Gucci ka nahin tha, Ray ban tha 😆 . Glad you liked Uday's entry. It's the way I have always wanted to see it in the show. Kya na poochon? 🤣 . Exactly. Hum to khud he uske sath chipak jain to phir baki larkion ko kya blame karain. Lol. Haha yes I remember VB and his awesome dialogues 😆
Yea well media is a pain in the ass.
True that. And apt quote to describe the media and their actions. You are right, people just want to enjoy another person's misery and unfortunately, all this happens a lot in the world. Yes Uday alone has to walk this road to reach his destination.
Uday is not the kind who would go around telling people how miserable his life is hence he prefers enduring the pain himself. Yes I know and I am glad I could live up to your expectations 😳
Lol I like Karan tooo. Haha. And I am so happy to see that everybody likes his friendship with Uday so much.
Meghu? 😆 . Yea well Giriraj is one selfish ass so he doesn't care about anyone else but his Meghu.
kuch kar do is ky sath fifu paralyses coma na na AIDS yeah best option... 😡woh meghu ko bhi kara do...😡churail or ye ganja bhoot...😡
I don't even know what to say to the lines you wrote above. I am just laughing like crazy! 🤣
Thanks Jen. Oh dear you're just making me blush now 😳 . I'll say it again, I write good cuz it's amazing people like you who motivate me *hugs back*
Glad you liked the conversation between them. Hahaha you are so funny when you curse Giriraj 😆
Awww thanks for such amazing words and praises Jen. Lol everybody loved the rot in hell part 😊
sometimes u can't always be nice.that's how people take advantage of u sometime one have to set boundaries and uday did it he set the boundaries between a relation of father-son and a king and a prince...now i am not feeling bad for uday he is a tiger he stand for himself...
i believe that don't let anyone break your soul you have to stand on your own two feet and stand up for yourself there are those,that would give anything to see you fail,but u must never give them the satisfaction,hold your head up high,smile and stand your own ground..
and uday our strong brave uday did exactly the same...u know why i love your uday more why i find him better bcz he is just the way i wanna be...i wanna be like him fight and stand for myself what he did is something i wanna do but i can't, not that strong and that's why i loved it even more...
i read some beautiful lines somewhere i thought should share it with u...it was like its time to take your life back from the people that are causing u pain and making u unhappy this is your life and u are the author of your story if u are stuck on the same page just remember that at any moment u have the power to write a new chapter...
i wrote this here because that what he did he took his life back from a person who was causing him pain..a person who was his father who is a murderer of his mother he gave his mother lot of pain lot of sorrow which was not acceptable for him but he bear everything,everything what his so called father did who call himself a king a rich king who's no more a king in his own son's eye as a father he is the poorest man on this earth who's son hate him..and is leaving him to be rotten in hell and going to start a new chapter in his life...

i think that there are moments in our lives when we found ourselves on crossroads ,afraid,confused without road maps,the choice we make in those moments can define the rest of our days and of course when,we face the unknown most of us prefer to turn around and go back...but once in a while people push around to something better something found just beyond the pain of going it alone and just beyond the...bravery and courage to let someone go..
bcz its only when u'r tested,that u discover who u can be...the person u want to be does exist somewhere on the other side of hard work and faith and belief and beyond the heartache and fear of what lies ahead...
All I want to say for the above part is that hats off to you Jen 👏👏 . I am falling short of words to even reply to that. You have summed up everything beautifully and I can't add anything more. You're amazing at understanding emotions, be it a person's or a character's.
Professional writer? 😲 . Wow that's like the biggest compliment ever. Aww I promise I will never stop writing 😳 . Exactly, Karan and Uday is bond is such that they except each other with their qualities and flaws both.
You're right, Unnati and Karan are Uday's only support system right now. Lol thanks. And glad you liked those dialogues.
Hahaha thanks. I tried to make their conversation as funny as I could 😛
Awww thank you so so so so much for such an amazing comment. I really appreciate it. Yes I won't stop writing. Thanks so much for everything.
Love you so much ❤️
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Originally posted by: Futbol_queen

Ermahwerd...FIA THAT WAS AMAZING!👏 Absolutely love the way you write, you had me laughing at all the parts with Karan, and gosh..Uday sure hates giriraj (*even i would). But the best part was when they were in the car (K and U), and Karan made that remark about being his girlfriend 🤣



Thanks Gurr 😃
Glad you liked all those parts. Haha that remark popped in my head out of nowhere so I thought I might aswell add it.
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Part Fia Bacha

Poor Uday what a Dad he has such a manipulative idiot I hate Giriraj in this ff hes just out of order I hope Uday become Maharaj and throws Giriraj and the Megnah in the dugeons... Unnati and Karan are a cute couple... liked the trio convo together...
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Thanks Mummy.
I hate him too. Lol out of order indeed. Glad you liked all those parts.
I'll continue soon.

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