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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter Fourteen (A)-

Recap-Rano- Didi I hate her for that and in those time mine and Mr. Walia's rishta changed from Mr.Walia to Jiju and he gave me lot of love like a father gives their daughter.Bani all in tears and say you are right I thought Mr. Walia never loved me, but I was wrong.Payal came out and said Mummy where is my night suit.

*Airport*
While Jai and Sahil did all the checking Rano and Bani took Payal to the restroom before they broad the flight. Jai told Sahil to let Payal sleep couple of days in his room with Rano.
Sahil- Why Mamaji?
Jai- Actually me and Bani made a bet that if Payal can sleep in your room for four month.
Sahil- What? What is it in for me?
Jai- Any thing you want, but please let me win.
Sahil- I'll thing about it only if I get your car.
Jai- Which one?
Sahil- ummm
Jai ( Please not my red car)
Sahil- Mamaji I want your red car and if you don't give it than I'll tell Bani Mami.
Jai- Kya
Sahil- Hurry up mamaji, Mami is coming
Jai looked back at Bani than at Sahil and said you win.
Sahil- Thanks Mamaji
Jai- What ever
Payal- Papa when is our flight?
Jai picked up Payal and said soon
Payal- ok
Bani- Mr. Walia put Payal down
Jai- Why
Bani- Mr. Walia because Payal is five know and see is a big girl.
Jai puts Payal down than goes to Bani and say in her ear- that we should have another one
Bani- What do you mean?
Jai 😉 at Bani and said another one
Bani pushed Mr. Walia and took Payal's hand toward the gate. Jai ran behind them and said wait
Sahil- Turns around and says Mamaji you need to lose some weight because you can't run.
Jai- Shut up
Sahil- Bani Mami
Jai- Sorry Sahil
Bani turns around and says what Sahil
Sahil- Nothing
*Mansi, Dadi comes home*
Bilo didn't we have fun at the wedding.
Mansi- Yes Biji, it was fun
Mansi calls out for Munna but no answer came back when they heard Tony scream Sir.....
*Rashi in her room*
Dear Dairy:

Today my life took a new turn after I met him. Oh I mean to say Pushkar, Me and Pushkar have been good friends after Ranveer lefted me. 😭 Hey Rashi "why are you crying after him?" I know Ranveer he just married me for his sister Anu because she was pregnant with my kid brother Rohit before marriage first I was encaged with Sahil but he loved Rano from the bottom of his heart than destiny got me married to Ranveer. He was alright but he falled his mom's eveil plans to hurt Jai Mama and Bani Mami. They gave me a lot of love after Ranveer's death, but "why do you miss him?"
Rashi please open the door I bring you hot coffee.
Rashi- Pushkar give me a mintune.
*Takes of from Mumbai to London*
Anuocser- Please put on you seat belt becaues in shortly we will take off.
Sahil and Rano put on their belt but Rano was mad becaues she didn't get to sit beside the window and is stuck by another guy who is drunk.
Payal got the window seat, Bani next to her and Jai next to her; they all put on the seat belt and Bani covered Payal's ear because of the noise when it took off. Jai saw Bani scared of the noise so he put his arm's around her.

By Kashish Patel




Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
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that was a sweet part
i hope raashi and pushkar fall in love with eachother
becahara jai 😭 he had to get give up his sport car to Sahil, for the bet,but i bet its worth it 😉
plz cotninue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 14 (B)

Recap-{
Sahil asked for Jai's red car because of the bet Bani made with him. Rashi is attached with Pushkar and Rano had to sit with drunk guy beside her when Sahil got the window seat.

*Ranveer and Pia in their house*
Pia was taking a shower while Ranveer was standing in the balcony (the cold wind blowing the curtin of his room)
Pia comes out with a towel covering her body, went up to Ranveer and wrapped her arms around him from the back.
Ranveer- Pia can I ask you something?
Pia- Go ahead sweetie
Ranveer- When did we get married?
Pia- Umm...( closed her eyes with couple of flashback)Woh before your accident happen
Ranveer- Pia than why can't I find my picture with you?

Pia- Ranveer because your face was different before your accident, but it doesn't matter to me because I love you.
Ranveer gave a smile and hugged her back by saying please give me my nightsuit so I can change than go to bed.
*Mansi in her room*
Mansi sat in her room looking at the family photo of Jigyasa, Jai and Bani (came after many years in Mumma's life that bing happince to him but after she got married to someone else and telling her Munna that Payal is his daughter but I know she killed it a long time ago)
Bilo why are you crying?

Mansi- Biji Actually when we saw Bani with her daughter at Rohit's friend's sister wedding function, but after we naver saw her.
Biji- Bilo Jai also wasn't there lekin daoesn't Payal look like Jai when he was little.
Mansi- Biji please don't make my sakam {Pain} more fresh.
Biji- Sorry Bilo, but how can we believe Pia after what she did to us (saying that she leaves Bilo thinking)
Mansi- Biji is kind of right about Pia, but why does my heart says Payal is Munna's child, also ,y mind says she isn't Munna's child "How can I find out?"

By Kashish Patel
Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
heyy those two parts were awesome! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
ooooooh... i am soo looking forward to the next part!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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massi listen to your heart 😭 😳
do some dna test if you want, don't believe pia 😡 i hope massi finds some medical reports in jai and bani's room saying that payal is there daughter
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww cutest scene ever bani covering payal's ears, jai covering bani's ears awwwwwwwwwwwww
so cute
and masi listen to ur heart
can't wait for the next one
pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very very good. update soon. poor jai, had to give up his red car lol!

can't wait to read more!

anam
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry guys that I made you guys wait along time for the next part but right know we are busy packing for India so I'll try to update often, but it also depens if I have homework.

Chapter 14 (C)

Recap-
Ranveer asked Pia "How they got married because he can't find his pictures?" Mansi and Dadi talked about Bani and Payal.

*London to Toronto flight*
Bani carried Payal in her arms and Jai put his arm around Bani's shoulders because the London airport was pretty big to find things like their gate and stuffs. Sahil walked behind them with Rano who didn't want to talk with him because he sat by the window and she had to sit by a drunk person who tried to lean on her, but after Mamaji came and sat by him while Rano sat by Bani for reat of the flight I hope this flight Rano will talk to me.
After a while of walking they found their gate to the flight for Air Canada.
*Sumit and Diya at Simila*
Sumit it feels so lonly without Bani and Payal. When they were here the whole house was full of Roshini and know it feels so empty.
Sumit- I know Diya it's feel like something of mine is lost but we were planning to go, lekin Mr. Walia called us and told me about there plan for Canada or we would have been there for our honeymoon.
Diya- True, Hey what do you want for dinner take out or I cook someone thing good.
Sumit- Lets just eat out today.
*Karan planning to go Canada*
Karan was sitting in her room talking to Bani's picture with Payal. Bani I was with you when you lefted your husband's house after you gave brith to your daughter Payal and today you went to your that husband who didn't even care to see his own daughter and know all of sudden he wants to be with you and his daughter, but I won't let that happen. Payal will be reason you met so what if anything happens to Payal than you will have to came back to me.

By Kashish Patel

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I love your fanfic, coutinue soon!!


luv Yah 😊

Banirocks

Edited by banirocks - 19 years ago

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