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Jai Walia- A bussince tycoon, rude person, but changed after Bani had lefted him with his child. He learned the meaning of love when Bani wasn't there for him when he needed her or when she needed him. Each day he lives with a wish that he could meet Bani one day and his child.
Bani Walia- After leaving her love Jai Walia, she moved in with Sumeet and they share a rishta of brother and sister. Each day Bani lives with a fear that Mr.Walia finds out about Payal their daughter he will take her away from her when she is her strength and the reason for her to live.
Payal .J. Walia- Lives with her mom and Sumeet mamaji in Simila, but never tells her mom that she misses her papa a lot. Payal prayed to god that one time she can meet her father and ask him "Why did mummy leave him?"
Sumeet Sachdev- All his life he lived so lonely until one day Bani came in his life as his sister because he had a sister, but she died in a accident. Knew a little about Bani's marriage with Jai Walia.
Dadi- Sweet, kind and very filmy.
Mansi- A kind, sweet person who had bring Jai and Bani together because she wanted her munna to be happy in life. After Bani lefted she started to hate her for taking away Jai's right on his own child and getting married to someone, but also can see much pain and love for Bani in Jai's eyes.
Adtiya- A kind person who loved the three sisters, but after Bani changed he started to hate her. Him and Rano had a sweet rishta after Jigyasa died in a accident with Ranveer, but they ever found there dead body so he had a feeling they would be alive and shared with Rano.
Rashi- Never shared a rishta with Ranveer, but was know as his widow, but only knew what Bani did was to save their family from bankrupt from her husband and kept this secret all her life until she couldn't see the hatered for Bani in the Walia Mansion, but couldn't tell anyone because she promised Bani and the sake of Jai's child.
Sahil- Cared for is Mamaji and Mamiji because he knew the truth cause he had heard Bani Mami when she was telling the true to Rashi Bhabhi. Rano his life and strength of living.
Rano- Close to her Bani Di and Jai, but hated Pia for coming in middle of Bani's life.
Summary- After Bani found out the raaz about park road from her husband, and the same day she found out she was pregnant with Jai's child that was suppose to be a happy moment in her life, but turned out to be a nightmare because father of her child has token away her childhood by taking their mother. Couple of months passed by Bani was on her fourth month and lives in Pushkar's company guesthouse, but only until she found out that Pia had lefted Pushkar for a stupid reason, so she moved out from there and meet this guy called Sumeet Sachdev. They became good friends, after they gave a name to their relationship as brother and sister for society. Each day Jai became a drinker non stop, after he realized that his life is nothing without Bani and his child. Pia tried many times to get Mr.Walia's attention toward her, but Jai told her clear that his life starts with Bani and ends with Bani. Rano had changed toward Pia and became more like Jai's favourite because she tried to get Bani back in his life and Pia tried to take Bani's place in Jai's heart that bring a big difference between Pia and Rano. Bani had moved with Sumeet to Simila after giving birth to her daughter Payal and Jai was told by Pia that Bani had married someone her own age, but Jai was hurt and thought about it every time when he see his room empty without Bani, but always will love her from the bottom of his heart. After Jai told Pia that she can't live in the Walia Mansion anymore because there is no reason for her here, so she went back to Pushkar, but Pushkar kicked her out by saying today she has destroyed many levies. Each day Payal prays to god that only one time in her life she wants to meet her father and ask him why he lefted her and her mother.
Will Payal bring back her parents together with help of her Mamaji Sumeet?
Watch Kahaani Teri Meri about a girl who brings back her parents.
I'll post 1-3 parts on page one after I get back from a meeting, so please leave your feedback about the caracters. And one more thing all the parts will be posted on page one so people don't have to look around for the parts.
By Kashish Patel
Sorry for making you all guys wait this long. Thank you for all the beuatiful comments. đ
Chapter One- Year of 2012
Moonlight shone through a window in a room where a sweet lady comes out of a shower getting ready for bed in her pink night suit when a little girl comes in running and says mummy. The lady turns around and (its another than Bani.)
Bani- Yes Payal
Payal- Mummy tomorrow is my fifth birthday and Sumeet Mama is going to Mumbia for a meeting, this is not fair.
Bani- Payal, Mama has to go for a meeting and I promise before your birthday party starts he will come ok know lets go to bed.
Bani put Payal to a sleep than got up and looked at a picture she stolen before leaving the Walia house.
Bani talking to Jai's picture- Mr.Walia tomorrow our daughter is turn five, lekin for me it was like yesterday when I gave birth to Payal on March 22, 2007. I still remember the day I came to the Walia Mansion to give back your property to you, but you weren't home so I gave it to Rashi and lefted with Sumeet bhaiyya. On our way I got my labour pain in the car, so Sumeet bhaiyya drove me to hospital without admitting they took me in because they knew I was Jai Walia's wife. The moment I needed you the most, lekin I still hated you for my parents death, but I loved you the most. That night we became one lekin that night for you was a mistake, but for me the worlds best gift Payal. After I moved with Payal to Simila and know Payal is turning five years old.
After put Jai's picture back in her cupboard drawer locked, so Payal can't see the picture, after Bani went in her bed and kissed Payal's forehead, after fell asleep next to Payal.
* In Walia Mansion in Jai's room*
A man sitting in his study room looking at Bani's picture and saying it has been six years since you lefted me with my child. Bani many things have happened after you lefted, but my trust on you never broke even when Pia told me you got married with someone, but I know it's not true because in your eyes I saw the true of love. The word LOVE didn't mean anything after you lefted my life. What I thought for Pia or Roshini was nothing, the only person made me competed was you Bani and always will be. After Jigyasa and Ranveer died in a accident Adtiya has became so lonely like me, but he still has Rashi, Sahil, Rano and Anu. Anu had moved to London after her baby was born with the Chopras. Pia your middle sister tried to come in our life again, but for me it was only you after I kicked her out of this house. Rano and my rishta have changed from Mr.Walia to a juju, we share our beautiful moment we spend with you. Today Mansi is coming back home from the hospital after she got a heart attack when Jigyasa died.
Bani I know what you did was for me because Sahil told me about it lekin it's hard to tell Mansi now because she thinks what you did was only for money.
Chapter Two-
Recap- Bani and Payal shared a sweet bond and Jai talked about how his life changed after Bani left with their child.
Bani got up early in the morning and made all Payal's favourite dish (That where similar to Jai)
While Bani was in the kitchen Payal gets up gose straight to the bathroom, at the same time Jai gets up and go to the bathroom. Payal and Jai both go out of the bathroom both went up by the cupboard to look for what to wear, Payal found two dress one pink and one black while Jai was looking for his suit when he pass by Bani's pink sari it reminded him of the time (where he told Bani to wear the pink sari for the party where he found out about the fake pregnancy to save Anu from badalmi. )
Bani gose up the stair and find Payal in the Pink dress with a little back design on it. Bani was surprise to see Payal in both of her parents favourite colour.
Payal gose up to Bani and touches her feet by saying mummy give me the strength to fight my battle with my emotion about my father. Bani put her hand on top of Payal by saying Beta I know the day you where born I have tooken you away from your father, but I know when it's time you will understand me.
Sumeet was looking from the door and says you both make me cry on a special day when it's time to be happy. Payal gose running to Sumeet Mama and says of course me and mummy look alike, think alike, but I have some side effects from my father like his temper. Bani looked at Payal and says who told you that.
Payal looks up to her mummy and say I heard you talk with Mama couple days back, but before I can hear much more Diya auntie caught me, but I'm sorry mummy I know that I shouldn't listen to older peoples talk if they don't talk in front of me. Bani and Sumeet both laughed at Payal's innocent.
*Jai's Office*
Jai was working on his laptop when Pushkar comes in by saying Mr.Walia today we have a big meeting today with the owner of Payal Enterprise.
Jai- Thanks Pushkar for reminding me, but today you and Rashi will have to go Pune for this meeting and here is the detail also share it with Rashi.
Pushkar- Yes Mr.Walia, I'll tell Rashi about the meeting in Pune bye know.
Jai- Bye when he spots Bani's picture on his desk. ( this picture was tooken on their first dinner date in Goa before Bani was pregnant with his child)
Jai tooken Bani out to the biggest restaurant in Goa, Jai sat across Bani in the restaurant when a little boy came and ask if he could take a picture. Jai stand beside Bani when the boy said Sir if you don't mind please put your arm around your wife. Jai did it, they looked so cute together with a huge smile.
Adtiya snapped his finger to get Jai back to real world and says Jai what where thinking.
Jai- Yaar you have every thing, but I loss my life after Bani left me anyways did you need something.
Adtiya- Jai I need you to over this deal and sign it.
Jai- Looks at Adtiya and says you have looked over it so I'll sign it ok.
*Payal's birthday Party*
Payal was playing with her friends and Bani was looking out the window when she heard people saying that Jai Walia has becoming a devdas after his wife lefted him with his child. Bani heard this made her cry but she hold her tears because it was their daughter's birthday and on this day she didn't want anything bad happen. Payal went up to her mummy and said when will Sumeet Mama come because without him I won't cut my cake.
Bani said maybe he is stuck in traffic that's why he is late, but we can't make your friends wait that long so lets cut the cake. Bani and Payal went to the centre and cut the cake while people sang Happy Birthday song for Payal. Payal feed the first piece to her mom and after Payal took a piece of cake toward Gareshji idol and put a cake there for her papa and said please god let me see my papa once. Bani knew what Payal was doing and showed her how much she misses Mr.Walia her father, but Bani never wants to meet him again after what she did to him.
Chapter Three
Recap- At Payal's birthday people talked about Jai Walia and how his wife lefted with his child. Payal prayed to god on her birthday that she can meet her father one time. Bani told Payal that because of her she is far away form her father, but she won't tell her the reason yet.
One Month has passed- Jai and the whole Walia family are going to Simila for Anu because Rohit's friend's sister is getting married with someone. Jai drive his own car and the rest are driving in one van, one the way Jai's car stopped at a mandir where he saw Bani, but before he can get to her she lefted. Sahil's van full of action because of Dadi's funny jokes about the film Lage Raho Munna Bhai.
Rano- Dadi you are to much.
They all had fun, but Jai was thinking all this six years I was looking for you in Mt. Abu and you are in Simila. lekin where.
* Diya's place*
Diya had called Bani to her house to pick her outfit for her wedding with Sumeet Sachdev. Bani told Diya bhabhi that she will come after she picks up Payal from Parvati's house. After Diya went to take a shower because today was her sangeet function. Diya was wear what Bani will pick for her, Bani was driving her car to Parvati's place when she saw Rano right across from her, but she didn't want to show her face so she put up her window with tears because it been six years since she met Rano or Pia.
*Anu's place*
Anu showed everyone there room, Sahil and Rano started talking with Krishna. Krishna is Anu and Rohit's son he is around seven years old. After they all get ready to go at Karan's place for the sangeet.
*Karan's Place*
Bani and Payal went into Diya's room while Karan and Sumeet where talking. Payal watched her mom get Diya Mami ready for her sangeet while Payal was fixing her payal on her legs. After Diya was ready Payal took her down while Bani changed into her sari that was Pink with light blue design and match jewelleries. Karan was chancing Payal went she bumped into Sahil and hide behind Rano so Karan uncle won't she her.
Karan- Payal where are you?
Rohit- Who are you looking for?
Karan- Payal my sister's brother's niece, but anyway welcome to my place. Karan took them all inside the house while Bani was trying hard to tie her dori of her blouse when she remember the time where Mr.Walia had tie her dori of her yellow blouse when she heard someone scream Payal she went running down the stairs to see Payal without realizing the Walia family. Jai was shocked to see Bani right in front of him outside by a little girl.
I hope you all love these parts.
By Kashish Patel
Jai Walia- A bussince tycoon, rude person, but changed after Bani had lefted him with his child. He learned the meaning of love when Bani wasn't there for him when he needed her or when she needed him. Each day he lives with a wish that he could meet Bani one day and his child.
Bani Walia- After leaving her love Jai Walia, she moved in with Sumeet and they share a rishta of brother and sister. Each day Bani lives with a fear that Mr.Walia finds out about Payal their daughter he will take her away from her when she is her strength and the reason for her to live.
Payal .J. Walia- Lives with her mom and Sumeet mamaji in Simila, but never tells her mom that she misses her papa a lot. Payal prayed to god that one time she can meet her father and ask him "Why did mummy leave him?"
Sumeet Sachdev- All his life he lived so lonely until one day Bani came in his life as his sister because he had a sister, but she died in a accident. Knew a little about Bani's marriage with Jai Walia.
Dadi- Sweet, kind and very filmy.
Mansi- A kind, sweet person who had bring Jai and Bani together because she wanted her munna to be happy in life. After Bani lefted she started to hate her for taking away Jai's right on his own child and getting married to someone, but also can see much pain and love for Bani in Jai's eyes.
Adtiya- A kind person who loved the three sisters, but after Bani changed he started to hate her. Him and Rano had a sweet rishta after Jigyasa died in a accident with Ranveer, but they ever found there dead body so he had a feeling they would be alive and shared with Rano.
Rashi- Never shared a rishta with Ranveer, but was know as his widow, but only knew what Bani did was to save their family from bankrupt from her husband and kept this secret all her life until she couldn't see the hatered for Bani in the Walia Mansion, but couldn't tell anyone because she promised Bani and the sake of Jai's child.
Sahil- Cared for is Mamaji and Mamiji because he knew the truth cause he had heard Bani Mami when she was telling the true to Rashi Bhabhi. Rano his life and strength of living.
Rano- Close to her Bani Di and Jai, but hated Pia for coming in middle of Bani's life.
Summary- After Bani found out the raaz about park road from her husband, and the same day she found out she was pregnant with Jai's child that was suppose to be a happy moment in her life, but turned out to be a nightmare because father of her child has token away her childhood by taking their mother. Couple of months passed by Bani was on her fourth month and lives in Pushkar's company guesthouse, but only until she found out that Pia had lefted Pushkar for a stupid reason, so she moved out from there and meet this guy called Sumeet Sachdev. They became good friends, after they gave a name to their relationship as brother and sister for society. Each day Jai became a drinker non stop, after he realized that his life is nothing without Bani and his child. Pia tried many times to get Mr.Walia's attention toward her, but Jai told her clear that his life starts with Bani and ends with Bani. Rano had changed toward Pia and became more like Jai's favourite because she tried to get Bani back in his life and Pia tried to take Bani's place in Jai's heart that bring a big difference between Pia and Rano. Bani had moved with Sumeet to Simila after giving birth to her daughter Payal and Jai was told by Pia that Bani had married someone her own age, but Jai was hurt and thought about it every time when he see his room empty without Bani, but always will love her from the bottom of his heart. After Jai told Pia that she can't live in the Walia Mansion anymore because there is no reason for her here, so she went back to Pushkar, but Pushkar kicked her out by saying today she has destroyed many levies. Each day Payal prays to god that only one time in her life she wants to meet her father and ask him why he lefted her and her mother.
Will Payal bring back her parents together with help of her Mamaji Sumeet?
Watch Kahaani Teri Meri about a girl who brings back her parents.
I'll post 1-3 parts on page one after I get back from a meeting, so please leave your feedback about the caracters. And one more thing all the parts will be posted on page one so people don't have to look around for the parts.
By Kashish Patel
Sorry for making you all guys wait this long. Thank you for all the beuatiful comments. đ
Chapter One- Year of 2012
Moonlight shone through a window in a room where a sweet lady comes out of a shower getting ready for bed in her pink night suit when a little girl comes in running and says mummy. The lady turns around and (its another than Bani.)
Bani- Yes Payal
Payal- Mummy tomorrow is my fifth birthday and Sumeet Mama is going to Mumbia for a meeting, this is not fair.
Bani- Payal, Mama has to go for a meeting and I promise before your birthday party starts he will come ok know lets go to bed.
Bani put Payal to a sleep than got up and looked at a picture she stolen before leaving the Walia house.
Bani talking to Jai's picture- Mr.Walia tomorrow our daughter is turn five, lekin for me it was like yesterday when I gave birth to Payal on March 22, 2007. I still remember the day I came to the Walia Mansion to give back your property to you, but you weren't home so I gave it to Rashi and lefted with Sumeet bhaiyya. On our way I got my labour pain in the car, so Sumeet bhaiyya drove me to hospital without admitting they took me in because they knew I was Jai Walia's wife. The moment I needed you the most, lekin I still hated you for my parents death, but I loved you the most. That night we became one lekin that night for you was a mistake, but for me the worlds best gift Payal. After I moved with Payal to Simila and know Payal is turning five years old.
After put Jai's picture back in her cupboard drawer locked, so Payal can't see the picture, after Bani went in her bed and kissed Payal's forehead, after fell asleep next to Payal.
* In Walia Mansion in Jai's room*
A man sitting in his study room looking at Bani's picture and saying it has been six years since you lefted me with my child. Bani many things have happened after you lefted, but my trust on you never broke even when Pia told me you got married with someone, but I know it's not true because in your eyes I saw the true of love. The word LOVE didn't mean anything after you lefted my life. What I thought for Pia or Roshini was nothing, the only person made me competed was you Bani and always will be. After Jigyasa and Ranveer died in a accident Adtiya has became so lonely like me, but he still has Rashi, Sahil, Rano and Anu. Anu had moved to London after her baby was born with the Chopras. Pia your middle sister tried to come in our life again, but for me it was only you after I kicked her out of this house. Rano and my rishta have changed from Mr.Walia to a juju, we share our beautiful moment we spend with you. Today Mansi is coming back home from the hospital after she got a heart attack when Jigyasa died.
Bani I know what you did was for me because Sahil told me about it lekin it's hard to tell Mansi now because she thinks what you did was only for money.
Chapter Two-
Recap- Bani and Payal shared a sweet bond and Jai talked about how his life changed after Bani left with their child.
Bani got up early in the morning and made all Payal's favourite dish (That where similar to Jai)
While Bani was in the kitchen Payal gets up gose straight to the bathroom, at the same time Jai gets up and go to the bathroom. Payal and Jai both go out of the bathroom both went up by the cupboard to look for what to wear, Payal found two dress one pink and one black while Jai was looking for his suit when he pass by Bani's pink sari it reminded him of the time (where he told Bani to wear the pink sari for the party where he found out about the fake pregnancy to save Anu from badalmi. )
Bani gose up the stair and find Payal in the Pink dress with a little back design on it. Bani was surprise to see Payal in both of her parents favourite colour.
Payal gose up to Bani and touches her feet by saying mummy give me the strength to fight my battle with my emotion about my father. Bani put her hand on top of Payal by saying Beta I know the day you where born I have tooken you away from your father, but I know when it's time you will understand me.
Sumeet was looking from the door and says you both make me cry on a special day when it's time to be happy. Payal gose running to Sumeet Mama and says of course me and mummy look alike, think alike, but I have some side effects from my father like his temper. Bani looked at Payal and says who told you that.
Payal looks up to her mummy and say I heard you talk with Mama couple days back, but before I can hear much more Diya auntie caught me, but I'm sorry mummy I know that I shouldn't listen to older peoples talk if they don't talk in front of me. Bani and Sumeet both laughed at Payal's innocent.
*Jai's Office*
Jai was working on his laptop when Pushkar comes in by saying Mr.Walia today we have a big meeting today with the owner of Payal Enterprise.
Jai- Thanks Pushkar for reminding me, but today you and Rashi will have to go Pune for this meeting and here is the detail also share it with Rashi.
Pushkar- Yes Mr.Walia, I'll tell Rashi about the meeting in Pune bye know.
Jai- Bye when he spots Bani's picture on his desk. ( this picture was tooken on their first dinner date in Goa before Bani was pregnant with his child)
Jai tooken Bani out to the biggest restaurant in Goa, Jai sat across Bani in the restaurant when a little boy came and ask if he could take a picture. Jai stand beside Bani when the boy said Sir if you don't mind please put your arm around your wife. Jai did it, they looked so cute together with a huge smile.
Adtiya snapped his finger to get Jai back to real world and says Jai what where thinking.
Jai- Yaar you have every thing, but I loss my life after Bani left me anyways did you need something.
Adtiya- Jai I need you to over this deal and sign it.
Jai- Looks at Adtiya and says you have looked over it so I'll sign it ok.
*Payal's birthday Party*
Payal was playing with her friends and Bani was looking out the window when she heard people saying that Jai Walia has becoming a devdas after his wife lefted him with his child. Bani heard this made her cry but she hold her tears because it was their daughter's birthday and on this day she didn't want anything bad happen. Payal went up to her mummy and said when will Sumeet Mama come because without him I won't cut my cake.
Bani said maybe he is stuck in traffic that's why he is late, but we can't make your friends wait that long so lets cut the cake. Bani and Payal went to the centre and cut the cake while people sang Happy Birthday song for Payal. Payal feed the first piece to her mom and after Payal took a piece of cake toward Gareshji idol and put a cake there for her papa and said please god let me see my papa once. Bani knew what Payal was doing and showed her how much she misses Mr.Walia her father, but Bani never wants to meet him again after what she did to him.
Chapter Three
Recap- At Payal's birthday people talked about Jai Walia and how his wife lefted with his child. Payal prayed to god on her birthday that she can meet her father one time. Bani told Payal that because of her she is far away form her father, but she won't tell her the reason yet.
One Month has passed- Jai and the whole Walia family are going to Simila for Anu because Rohit's friend's sister is getting married with someone. Jai drive his own car and the rest are driving in one van, one the way Jai's car stopped at a mandir where he saw Bani, but before he can get to her she lefted. Sahil's van full of action because of Dadi's funny jokes about the film Lage Raho Munna Bhai.
Rano- Dadi you are to much.
They all had fun, but Jai was thinking all this six years I was looking for you in Mt. Abu and you are in Simila. lekin where.
* Diya's place*
Diya had called Bani to her house to pick her outfit for her wedding with Sumeet Sachdev. Bani told Diya bhabhi that she will come after she picks up Payal from Parvati's house. After Diya went to take a shower because today was her sangeet function. Diya was wear what Bani will pick for her, Bani was driving her car to Parvati's place when she saw Rano right across from her, but she didn't want to show her face so she put up her window with tears because it been six years since she met Rano or Pia.
*Anu's place*
Anu showed everyone there room, Sahil and Rano started talking with Krishna. Krishna is Anu and Rohit's son he is around seven years old. After they all get ready to go at Karan's place for the sangeet.
*Karan's Place*
Bani and Payal went into Diya's room while Karan and Sumeet where talking. Payal watched her mom get Diya Mami ready for her sangeet while Payal was fixing her payal on her legs. After Diya was ready Payal took her down while Bani changed into her sari that was Pink with light blue design and match jewelleries. Karan was chancing Payal went she bumped into Sahil and hide behind Rano so Karan uncle won't she her.
Karan- Payal where are you?
Rohit- Who are you looking for?
Karan- Payal my sister's brother's niece, but anyway welcome to my place. Karan took them all inside the house while Bani was trying hard to tie her dori of her blouse when she remember the time where Mr.Walia had tie her dori of her yellow blouse when she heard someone scream Payal she went running down the stairs to see Payal without realizing the Walia family. Jai was shocked to see Bani right in front of him outside by a little girl.
I hope you all love these parts.
By Kashish Patel
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