Detailed comment's here Pree! 😆
From the very beginning, to the very end, you had me smiling like a total idiot! KD's inner child came out in the 1st paragraph as he wrote his name in the sand; however, the maturity shines through as his thoughts lead the way as the waves come and go.
Beautiful analogies there woman! The waves compared to his thoughts are brilliant! I agree, the PanSh jodi strikes a chord within me; a beautiful friendship or siblings, I don't know which, but it's wonderful all the same.
I LOVED the way he called her 'kiddo', like a protective older brother kinda way. Kudos to that one line, honestly.
No matter how their conversation started, it took them places. The other never once imagining why they were talking so effortlessly, and Panchi seems to share my thoughts, excellent! 😆
'He said pointing at the now drawn LOC between them' 😆😆😆 Awesome. KD's honestly too mature for his age. You've shown that here brilliantly Pree. He understands the world a lot more than an average 16/17 year old should, and that's what makes him such a powerful character.
Panchi is no less though! I loved the way she drew another diagram and this line literally made me smile so much that my cheeks hurt! 'Meri Ranveer ke siva bhi koi existence hai, shayad bhul gayi thi'.
The story ending with another wave was just beautiful. '..what it meant to be themselves' AAAH Pree, just super! LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. 🤗