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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Thiri

:( the like button is not working..!! But i LOVED it =)


That's alright. The like button's been getting stuck a lot recently.

Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

hahaha..PanSh on role nw a days...Der wer PanSh creation also..n nw dis OS..
I loved it..
n frankly speaking wen I read panchi walking dat reminds me of swayam addicted sequence...Lol
lovely OS :)


I know I got this idea after reading the first two chapters of Mais's story. All the credit goes to her.

Oh can you give me the link for the PanSh creations. Would really love to see.

Swayam's addicted sequence... Wow... I never realized! 😆

Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@pree check d creation gallery..PanSh creations r Der...I don't exactly remember d page no.
n dont u think soo??panchi's walk n swayam's walk some how similar...if u visualize dat it's ditto..Lol

n pree tu pechani mujhe..I think noo..Lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os...plz do write more stuff like this... I wuld love to read about pansh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You gonna make me smile until my cheeks hurt!

This was beautiful Pree! I loved it.

Detailed comment coming up soon! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Detailed comment's here Pree! 😆

From the very beginning, to the very end, you had me smiling like a total idiot! KD's inner child came out in the 1st paragraph as he wrote his name in the sand; however, the maturity shines through as his thoughts lead the way as the waves come and go.

Beautiful analogies there woman! The waves compared to his thoughts are brilliant! I agree, the PanSh jodi strikes a chord within me; a beautiful friendship or siblings, I don't know which, but it's wonderful all the same.

I LOVED the way he called her 'kiddo', like a protective older brother kinda way. Kudos to that one line, honestly.

No matter how their conversation started, it took them places. The other never once imagining why they were talking so effortlessly, and Panchi seems to share my thoughts, excellent! 😆

'He said pointing at the now drawn LOC between them' 😆😆😆 Awesome. KD's honestly too mature for his age. You've shown that here brilliantly Pree. He understands the world a lot more than an average 16/17 year old should, and that's what makes him such a powerful character.

Panchi is no less though! I loved the way she drew another diagram and this line literally made me smile so much that my cheeks hurt! 'Meri Ranveer ke siva bhi koi existence hai, shayad bhul gayi thi'.

The story ending with another wave was just beautiful. '..what it meant to be themselves' AAAH Pree, just super! LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. 🤗

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