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Dhamaal 4 emerges a success,a potential HIT
24 years of Devdas
Dhamaal 4 emerges a HIT
🎵S. Janaki: One Voice that Reflected in a Thousand Melodious Emotions
Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ
G - its good writing, but its not in sync with AnSh characterization...the vibe/cadence is not quite right... its what you want them to say not what they would say. So, dialogue does not work for me. Action wise Shiv is becoming forward, but not quite that forward yet... do i make sense? Don't kill me! When it comes to writing, I am a dangerous reader🤔 seriously picky...as for Anandi, I don't think she is that weak... JMO
Yes.. that's where i diverge with most OS/SS writers... and why I am always reluctant to write os/ss/ff... a compulsive need to stay true to characterization... be it my own or someone elses. Anyway its well written.Originally posted by: VerboseG
Thanks Anjy for your comments. You are right, this is what I want, not what they will do.Its called literary licence, you see 😊
Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ
Yes.. that's where i diverge with most OS/SS writers... and why I am always reluctant to write os/ss/ff... a compulsive need to stay true to characterization... be it my own or someone elses. Anyway its well written.
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