The Black Kite - ArHi OS - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This was a beautiful OS Zara.
I really enjoyed reading this.
The relationship between Arnav and Khushi was so perfectly written. All the right emotions surfaced.
I loved your descripton of colours and the backdrop.
Thanks for the PM hun and sorry for being so late.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww this is beautiful!! very unique Zee!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was really nice and different in a good way...something that brings a smile on your face😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys, you all have been very kind :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have never read your work before, but I'm amazed with your writing. It has this sense of calm pervading over it. And the whole concept of involving a Kite and that too a Black one, is unique, and refreshing.

It would be nice if you could scrap/PM me with your index. Thanks!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loveeely OS!

AMAZING! I was expecting a real emotional reason for the 'black kite' but GOD was i surprised ! Hahaha loved it! IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL READ! No better reason for the blak kite! A beautiful relation starting with a beautiful understanding called friendship!

Beautifully written! loved it!

Please pm me your future ArHi works if possible :)
And scrap or pm me your index if you have one :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It kind of blows me away to see that my old works are still being read and appreciated, it elevates a piece of writing when it becomes timeless.

@sona- Thank you very much, i have grown a lot as a writer equal credit to some wonderful people here on IF whose work has woven magic that has touched me too. I will send pm's our way, Thank You once again :)

@Fan_Ipkknd1- Thank You, your good name?
Yes particularly when it's the title, one is bound to get the feeling., but it was nothing big, actually it was a funny way of Arnav teasing Anjali, I really liked the thought when it came to me, got me all excited 😳 Will surely sent a PM your way, Thank You once again :)

Now i think i would really like to share the inspiration for this OS. It's damn hilarious. I was switching through channels and came across a movie title Kali Patang. I did a double take and switched back, then i read it again, it said Kati Patang (i think!) I had a laugh. But the Black Kite stayed, and slowly my mind had this Oneshot shaping up :)


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