OS : The Splintered Rainbow + Note on 9

Whoa...right now, I have a red nose, there is huge lump in my throat and tears are running down my cheeks...but I don't know what to say!!! Simply MOVING!!!

This was beyond splendid!

If you said it was long, then it didn't seem so. I thought Masam is back with a happy wala story. But m heart broke in to a million pieces when she turned around and he wasn't there.


There were so many lump in the throat wale parts 😭


I knew she was in denial and she continued to be despite of her therapy sessions.


Her loss is too deep. She not only lost Arnav with whom she had a blissful life and would have had a even better life he and the baby were there.


Everyone played their part in making Khushi see the reality:


Dr. Rathore - professionally during every session


Payal - by re-arranging the living room and making Khushi spend time with her and her kid


Shashi - A new marriage for his daughter


Garima - hugging her daughter, reassuring her.


Arnav- asking her to move on, again and again.


Khushi - who finally decided that it was in her hands and she did let him go.



P.S. Abhi ek happy wala story likho in which nobody is dead ok?



Spectacular :D

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Wow! That brought tears to my eyes. Amazing.

I cried my eyes out while reading it... It was heart wrenching yet awesome... U r a fabulous fabulous writer.

I M CRYING SO BADLY HERE😭.. U WRITE SOP BEAUTIFULLY👏

Wt have u done my dear girl ? I'm sobbing my hearts out here reading ur story ?I bet u went through the same emotion when writing this brilliant story ..I don't think I can l sleep now ..honestly,I hv only one thing to say tht ur an amazing writer..