Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10

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Rituja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
haye paroo kitna achi hai

Itni taarif kya baat hai...????

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Stunning...beautiful...mesmerizing...

i don't know what to say because fact is you left me seppechless

You have created magic by putting such simple words togther to make sea of emotion

I can only imagine how jard it must be to narrate a story like a poem but my my you did an absolute wonderful job

I really loved it and loved the freshness of the style. I so wish you had more readers so if ok, i am going to share this thread through my next post and PM.

Hayeee... U knw mein kal se aapke comment ka wait kar rahi thi..

Hehe.. Sachi.. Aww.. I didn't knew u all would love it... Thank u sooo much...

And For me its ok u can... and as I said this OS was like my special baby... I love poetry thats why wrote it.. and No issue of readers like for me.. I m satisfied with what I got... 😃

and Hugsss to you... Luv ya sooo much...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: deepali1022

aww ye to khtm ho gaya...

Wow d last part was jst superb...dey get married...

I simply luv'd it...u r awesum grl

me waitng for u to cm back wid new os...

Thank u sooo Much dear...

New OS.. Umm let me think... Will come soon...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: jasraj123
awesome writing ritu

Thank u soo much JAS...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Oh...very sweet confession
At last they got married in a poetic way

Superb Ritu...just awesome

Aisehi likhate rehana

Par khatam ho gaya

TFP

Aww... Hugsss... and Thank u madhuri...

Hayeee dnt wry new Os likhungi na aise hi poetic way main...😉

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Meine kya kiya...??? 😭

itna spam agar meri thread pe kiya hota tho tera punya ho jata😡 🤣

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
Aowww!!!! Happy Shappy ending.⭐️
Loved it yar, too gud.
Aapki poetry to, mashaallah!!!!😉

For Ur Poetry Ritu dee.
nd
For uu😉😉😉

Luv ya Choti... And I loved this smiley...

They are soo cute...