FF: DIL HAIN KI MAANTA NAHIN... (ch2,Chp3 pg 5)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys i am a anari.. and dis is my first try to write an ff.. if u like it.. plzz give feed back.. i will continue..

In the ETF office.. ( rathore is engrossed in a file and shree, riya and chotu are whispering)
chotu : shree baata na...
shree: main kya batau.. arre yeh rathore sir ka kuch bharosha nehi hain.. pata nehi kab bharak jaye..
riya tu baata.. he never scolds u.. 😉
riya : ha saare khatre waale kam main hi karoon.. aur and mein arjun sir aur rathore sir se bhi daant
main hi khao.. na baba na..
shree : chodo tum dono se kuch nehi hoga lagta hain mujhe hi batana parega.. tum log ek choti
si picnic k permission k lie aisa kar rahe ho to case kaise solve karoge... 😡 sab kam
mujhe hi karna parta hain..
(arjun enters at that moment.. riya galnced at him.. he was looking unresistably handsome today in that white shirt..)
arjun : yeh kya ho raha hain? tum 3 no hameesha kya khusur fusur karte rehte ho? ria?? maine
jo tumhe data sheet nikal le k lie kahi thi woh tumne nikali?
riya : ( darr k ) woh sir... abhi nikal deti hoon.. woh sir hum mein aap 2 no se kuch baat karni hain..
(shree and chotu giving thumbs up to ria )
rathore and arjun: kya??
riya : sir woh sir woh... humare samne to abhi koi case nehi hain toh kya hum sab ek saath kahi
ghumne chal sakte hain? i mean picnic sort...
arjun : hum skul k chote chote bacche hain kya jo picnic pe jayenge? statistically speaking ria
agar yeh sab faltu cheez hum log karte rehenge toh humare case solve karna k chances
90% kam ho jayegi.. samjhe ya samjhaoon.
rathore : ek min arjun.. i think its not a bad idea.. hum log police wale hain iska matlab toh yeh
nehi dat we cant njoy..
(riya staring at arjun.. really hoping to change his decision.. agar woh hi nehi jayega woh mein ja k kya karungi)
arjun : watever i am not coming..
rathore : but we will go.. guys pack up hum saturday ko niklenge.. aur kaha jana hain yeh hum kal
deceide karenge..
shree and chotu : yaaa 😃
riya and arjun stared at each other.. arjun realised by seeing the pain in riya's face and got out of the room smiling.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start... do continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful, so Arjun knows Riya has feelings for him😉
Continue dear
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Interesting

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy

this is so amazing yaar this is so good i like it
this is really going to be so much fun for ETF as well as for us also

though this is ur first os but its rocking yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yrr just loved it
th picnic part
too excited cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Countinue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 2
3 days later outside the building of E.T.F. in the morning..
chotu - woh dekh riya bus aa gayi..😃
riya - hmmm... ( with a sad face)
chotu - accha hua na rathore sir ne gari ki jagah bus mangyayi... aram se maaze karte huye jayenge..
riya - hmmm..
chotu - yeh kya tabse hmm hmm laga rakkhi hain.. kuch bol na.. kya hua hain tujhe?
sree ( peeche se aake) - arre chotu samjha kar na yaar.. ( by smirking) iski samjhe ya samjhaon nehi aa rahe hain na.. 😉 isi liye moos off hain.. aab kya kare ri tujhe hum logo k saath hi jaana parega..
riya - shut up shree.. aisi koi baat nehi hain.. ( but actually she was praying from the morning.. ki god plzz koi to chamatkar kar do ki arjun sir bhi humare saath chale. plzz varna mein picnic pe jaake kya karungi)
rathore - guize ready? jo chale aab?
riya - sir apne ek bar arjun sir se baat ki..
rathore- riya agar usse aana hota to woh zarur aa jaate.. woh nwhi ayega.. chalo aab.
riya- ok sir..😭
sree- arre ha chal na..
( getting up in the bus)
sree- oyee.. arjun sir...😕
riya - sree aisa mazak mujhe bilkul pasand nehi hain..
sree - arre nehi mazak nehi peeche dekh..
riya (turning around saw arjun sitting beside a window seat.. having his cutting chai and giving a mockery look to riya)
riya got stunned for a minute.. is that really arjun sir? i mean.. woh sach mein chal rahe hain humare saath.. she is so overjoyed that she did'nt notice tears falling through her eyes..
rathore - rawte.. tum yeha kya kar rahe ho? tum to nehi jane wale the na?
arjun- nehi jaane wala tha.. lekin aab ja raha hoon.. koi problem hain?
rathore - hume kya problem hoga.. yeh picnic E.T.F. walo k lie to hain.. huh..😡
arjun - toh phir yeha kaare hoke sab time kyon waste kar rahe ho? chalo..
chotu - yes sir..
then riya took the window seat parallel to arjun.. arjun seeing dat was preparing to get up suddenly shree comes and sat beside riya..
shree - hey ri.. mein tujhe raaste mein apna latest techolonogy dikhayungi jo maine banaya hain..
riya ( with a puzzled look staring at arjun) - oh .. okk..
arjun was watching all these through the corner of his eyes and giving a look " as if nothing has happened". but inside he was fuming with anger.. and was looking at them continously..
after some time the bus has started..
arjun was seeing shree and riya laughing and chatting together heartily.. suddenly he got up and came near their seat..
arjun - shree kya tum plzz mere seat pe jaake baithoge? i mean mujhe peeche baithne mein nausea hote hain..
shree.. par sir bus mein toh aur bhi seats khali hain aap woha ja k baithiye na..
arjun - nehi.. ( almost shouting) i mean.. mujhe riya se aane wale case k baare mein kuch discuss katna bhi hain.. tum uth rahe ho ya nehi?
shree - oh okk sir.. ( then got up with a sad face and took anonther window seat)
riya and observing the whole event with astonishment.. new case ? lekin abhi tak toh koi case aaya hi nehi.. toh phir arjun sir.
arjun sat beside her..
arjun - riya.. tumhe koi sense hain ki nehi.. ek ladhke se kaise baat karti hain yeh bhi tumhe nehi paata?
riya - par sir...
arjun - mana ki tumhara dost hain par usse itna chipak ke baith ke baat karna ka koi tarika hota hain.. kab thodi si maturity ayegi tum mein riya.. u r a E.T.F. officer.. thodi to apni dignity maintain karo.. 😡
riya( smilng) - ok sir.. ( lagta hain yeh puicnic utna bhi bura nehi jayega jitna maine socha tha..)...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow

this is amazing this update is cute and lovely...i like this so much

arjun is jealous of shree...and this is enjoying by riya as well as me also

hey plz when u update na pm me and add me to ur buddy list


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey plzz tell me k how will i include u guize to buddy list? i am totally lost and kuch samaj mein nehi aa raha hain..😭

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