ONLY LOVE-epilogue on pg 148 - Page 17

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetu144


NAHIIIšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
uff yaar....don't do this to mešŸ˜†šŸ˜†.
Ok well as along as you promise to update it first thing tomorrow morning i wont be forced to make a group off people who are willing to chase after you with a balanšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰. Naah i am jk.....but i do hope that you'll continue soon, i truly love your ff!!
Luv ya
Sweetu

hi sweetu,

u know now i am realy worreid šŸ˜•yaar bcoz i have a feeling that after creating so much of suspense u ppl will be disappointed with the nxt prt but i'll try my best not toDisappoint u all and not to shock u all with what i have in my mind.

luv

minks

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Posted: 19 years ago
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FIRST OF ALL TO UR GREAT WRITING...MY GR8 APPLAUSE..U ARE SIMPLY GR8 WRITER...AND d aoder thing...plzzz break da suspense soon..i am dying to read it..is it dat Jai proposes Bani or is it dat he says her dat he loves her alot.... šŸ˜•
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Posted: 19 years ago
ehehehe i just read chapter 18! i completely missed it this morning when i was browsing!!! omg! *shocked* but anyways... he might say he hates or..or being a womanizer..he asks her to go home with him..i chose to put that second question innocently..lol nothing naughty *wink* lol heheheehhehehe or maaaybeeee.... he asks her y she did what she did adn wants to know if she hates him.. which wud get her angry u kno..or he cud taunt her about it...trying to provoke her..so he cud get another chance with her right there in d cabin.. then rosh cud walk in, attack bani..*starts running my mouth as ideas pour in* and thne jai wud slap her, she wud charge at jai adn bani who side stpe her and she heads staright out the window! heehehhehehehehehehehe *cracks up into a million pieces..then glues myself back together...(repeats this action many times)* hehehehehehehehehehehe i crack my self up when i bored.. well please hurry yaar.. tomorrow can neevr reach fast enough!
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok...now another suspense....
firstly awsome part... šŸ‘
but what on earth did he say to her... how much will I wait.... waise bhi i can't think of anything...
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Posted: 19 years ago
fantastic part??
ur killing us with the suspence!! what did jai say
Plz continue soon!!

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i wonder what jai said, i hope he didn't say what i think he said šŸ˜•
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Suspense!!!! Oh man!!

What he's talking about???!

Cant wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was a fab part!!! And so were all the ones before that!!! Please continue asap!!! I really want to know what he said that made Bani so shocked!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi everyone,
I am feeling really apprehensive writing this prt, I have a feeling that I dug my own grave writing this prt and u ppl will get mad at me, I hope this doesn't happens but still if I shock some of u with this prt then I am sorry and promise to take care of it in the future but before reading this prt….
I want to caution u about something and that is- that in my story jai walia is someone who has not none love in his life, his father had died when he was only a child and his mother had never recovered so he was all alone in the world fending for himself on his own and did not get any love from anyone and so it happens that he does not believe in love and if he believes in it he thinks that love never lasts forever and in the end only breaks ur heart, let me also tell u this that our jai has fallen head over heal in love with bani but has not yet realized it but still he wants her for only himself and no one else that's crystal clear to him and he wants her badly she has managed to get under his skin and is never out of his thoughts. Plzzz read the following prt keeping this in mind and don't get mad at me or jai either.
Last of all tiffany u r the only one who was able to guess what jai was going to ask bani, I must say u do have a head on ur shoulders just like mine heeeeeeeeee heeeeee just kiddin, don't get mad at me huhh??. Ok know I won't waste anymore of ur time so here is prt 19 just for all of u and do tell me if u liked it or not.
Luv
minks


ā¤ļø ONLY LOVE – CHAPTER 19 ā¤ļø

Jai said "u r lying, u know why I am in this mood, u know that u have got under my skin and u r driving me crazy." He pressed his hand against his head and sighed "my god bani u r driving me nuts going hot and cold on me, I want u so much that I am going mad……..I am obsessed with u dammit"

Bani's heart went out to him (he has not yet said the thing that'll shock her) and despite her self she found her hand reaching out to him and touching his flushed cheeks, the touch was electrifying and she removed her hand immediately as it had got burned and distanced herself from him. She said in trembling voice " u r too used to get everything u want, and because I said no ur ego is suffering and u can't take no for an answer……if I ….I ……if we…..if I…..(u know what she is trying to say, right??) said yes u'll be satisfied that's all u want don't u?? well this time u'l be disappointed bcoz I'm not like the other women that u r used too, I am my own self and I won't compromise myself, for me marriage comes first"

Jai looked at his and stated flatly "u r a virgin, this doesn't surprise me infact I thought so last night" bani blushed deeply she couldn't think how she could be discussing such a thing with this man. She said defiantly "if I am, I am"

Jai just stared at her for some time and then he said the thing that shocked bani to the core of her being, the thing she would not dream of doing in a million year, it shocked her so much that she did no even show any reaction though she was seething with rage inside at his suggestion.

He went to her and placed his hands on her shoulders and said " bani I know u r not like other women, and for us it will be different, u could move in with me, u'v seen my house and u know how big it is, u'll be very comfortable there, u won't even have to work" saying that he just looks at her but she doesn't shows any reaction from the shock of it but when he sees no reaction from her he misinterprets it and thinks she'll agree with a bit more persuasion.

He leaned down and pressed his forehead against hers and said "u'll have ur own bedroom. Think of the money u would save" bani just looked at him and wondered how incorrigible this man is, and jai is not understanding her silence at all goes on harping the theme "u won't even have to work and obviously when u r living with me my money is ur money and I'll buy u a beautiful car infact I can picture u behind a red sports car"

Bani now realized that he his taking the meaning of silence as a "maybe yes" and though she was really angry, she couldn't help it and had to smile at him and his incorrigibility and seeing her smile he thought his persuasion is working and she would say yes and seeing him smile her smile broadened bcoz it was obvious what he was thinking, and she decided to play a little game with him to teach him a lesson.

She peeped through her lashed and asked him with an innocent look "I'll have my own room??" jai thought this working man and said enthusiastically "of course the very best in the house" bani then sighed deeply and said "oh! I don't know, I am too used to have my own way and have my own money to spend" jai said "but of course u'll have all the independence that u want and I'll give u allowance so u won't have to worry about money" bani smiled and asked "and u'll buy me my own car??"
Jai said "I'll buy u whatever u want??" and thennnnnnn our bani saidddddddddd

"ohh!! Jai I accept, who could have ever thought that I'll end up getting married to such a fabulous man"

"married" came out the word from the mouth of a very shocked jai and bani couldn't help but smile at his expression of pure and genuine horror and she sincerely hoped that he didn't have a heart attack from the shock of it bcoz he looked like it very much……………..to be cont.


do tell me how u liked this prt and stay tuned for the nxt prt when bani confronts jai angrily at his indecent proposal

P.S –I hope no one is mad at me.

Edited by minks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
I am outta words. šŸ˜• šŸ‘

I do hope they get married though. šŸ˜‰

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