ss-9 limitation in love :A fAiRy MARMAID Nd cHaRmnG PRINC ch-60pg-98

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Now i m start new ss..
Specialy 4 my darlng reader @SONAM..
I hope u lyk it...


Magical manveer ss
-no limitation in love
:A bEaUtIfUl MARMAID
Nd A cHaRmInG PRINCE..

Chercter sketch:

:-)RYTHYM(MANYATA):A BEATIFUL MERMAID(JALPARI),A QUEEN OF SEA.
She s a innocent,inteligent,naugty nd sbki pyari,sbki jan...

RAHUL(UDAY):A PRINCE OF JAIGARH..
He s evil prince,rahul's crush mermaids,he plyng hr feelings...

JAYNANDINI:she s also vry beautiful mermaids,bt she hate rythym,she wish ki wo sea ki mharani bne..

Brijraj:rythym father.
He s magician.
He s king of sea..
All mermaids apni problems,wories,happines apne sea king k pas leke aati h..

Giriraj:rahul father.
He s also evil devil..
Mermaids ko kaidi bnana or dusre country me becha ka krta h..

Unanti:griraj's youngstar daughter she s beautiful,simpl,decent grt.
She lyk alot mermaids..

jagat:all mermaids ka frnd.
Becoz he lyk rythym alot..
He truly love hr..

Thanx guys,always appriciate my nd my stry.

I hope u lyk it..
If yes do hit lyk nd cmnt also..
If u r nt interstead ignore it..

Love u guys
Leave cmnts...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yup story of mermaids vs evil wow...😊...
pari u always comes up with gr8 idea.😛..
iam sure just lyk ur past works this would be also amazing...waiting forward for...😊...
we will see M turning Uday from evil to good😳
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG, It's specially for me. 😲
Thank you so much Pari humari wish ek hi din mein puri kar di. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much.
Love you Pari.🤗
Oh Mermaid & Prince story. I liked it Pari..😉
Nice Prologue.👏 👏
Now I'm waiting for first chapter n I'm really excited to read this FF.
Thanks for the beautiful SS n Pls update first chapter ASAP.🤗
🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great prologue👍🏼 nice concept awesum character sketch👏

cont soon plzz PM me if u can😉lagta ha kafi khuch honay walay ha 🤣

ab jaldi say 1st update bi de do🤗
Edited by killerashish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey pari..I'm Pooja..
Maine tumhare previous SS padhe hai & they all were just awesome...lekin maine kabhi comment nahi kiya kyoki mein comment ke mamlo me bahut aalasi(Lazy) hu...
So i hope you will forgive me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@snow thanku darlng.
Yes,i hope aage stry bi main aacha likh pau...
Try my bst.
@sonam ofcourse dear or kisi ne ni kha personaly srf tumne kha i want new one,nd tumne tym bi to srf sunday tk ka diya tha.
Lol..
Aar ya par.
Wating ur cmnt.

@killerashish dear watng u r cmnt.

@pooja,dear finaly tumne cmnt krdiya.
Ya 4give me,bt plz thoda sa tym nikal k cmnt krdena,bt u read my stry u lyk mystry thanku so much...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great pari. A new SS and that too magical world. Great work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome i dont think any forum will have this kind of story
i loved the prologue and character sketch
great job
will be looking forward to this SS
manyata a mermaid was a surprise
one query; can human and mermaids romance like how would their kids look like
anyway great and unusual concept
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shals
thanku babe.

@vamp.
9 memaid nd human romance nt posible nl physical.
Mentanly love to ho skta h..
Nd let c.
I hope u lyk it...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneet..

@shals
thanku babe.

@vamp.
9 memaid nd human romance nt posible nl physical.
Mentanly love to ho skta h..
Nd let c.
I hope u lyk it...

Pari


ofcourse i will u are a great writer

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