Just came back from uni. going out again. res. will comment and read after i come back :)
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Extremely sorry for this late reply. Uni is taking a toll on me :(
So this OS! f**k! I was reading and then I read it again and then one more time. Let me cut to the chase and tell you my favourite thing about this writing k? It was how there was no, absolutely no freaking dialogue in this whole OS and yet I felt like I was reading a conversation between a couple who just broke up and the guy realises what he's doing and they're back together. It's just so amazingly and fantastically scripted that I could hear a conversation through those emotions that you've portrayed. Their pain, his realisation, them getting back together; all in all, their emotions; they're tangible. I can feel them, just like I do in every other OS of your's! This is definitely one of the best I've read from you, and so ya :)
"So when he whispered "Stay" a centimeter away from her lips, she whispered a yes. And when he kissed her, she flung her arms around him."
Do you need any words for this scene? Hell no! Ah, it's so beautiful!
I am so sorry I am commenting on it so late, had I known I would have instantly written a comment :)
My favourite OS from you till now Twinno.
I miss you heaps. Hope we talk soon and hope your studies are good :)
Love you
<3
🤗
Edited by ..Jojo.. - 14 years ago
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