I remember guys..:)...d3 ff..Epilogue Pg 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
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~~PROLUGE~~

Sharon came into the rehersal hall..taani was not in the rehersal hall...the group was...
Sharon-Guys!!!...
All-Haan sharon???...
Sharon-Kria wapas aarahi hain!!!...
All-What are you serious??...
Rey-Lekin sharon...agaer voh wapas aa rahi hain isska matlab ki..
Swayam-Usse voh promises wapas le liye aunty ne...
Sharon-I know...woh kria ko itna sad nahi dekh sakti...and come on guys hum bhi kria ko sad nahi dekh sakte na??...
Neha-Voh toh hain sharon lekin...
Rey-Lekin usska hum sabke aur close aana means usski death!!!...
Sharon-Rey tum aisa kaise...
Simmi-He is right sharon...and rey kria se pyaar karta hain voh kyun aisa bolega mazak mein bhi nahi bolta...
Sharon's smile dissapeared...
Sharon-Toh phir hum sab kya kare??...
Swayam-Usse humein hate karna padega...
All *except sharon*-What!!!...no swayam...
Sharon-I think swayam is right!!...
Rey-Mein apni baatcutter ko kaise apne se dur jaane dia tum log nahi jaante and ab...
Swayam-Voh hum dono ki bhi kuch lagti hain rey...
Vishakha-What should we do then?..
Sharon-Insult her!!...
All were shocked...at that time kria entered the rehersal hall...she was very happy to see the group...taani came and saw her...
Kria-Hi guys..
All acted as if they were sad...
Bharat-Abe kyun aayi tu wapas?..
Kria-Matlab??...
Amar-Humein teli zalulat nahi...
Kria-Guys??...rey...meine aapko...
Rey-Shut up kria...mujhe kuch nahi sunna...tumne kya socha tum chali jaogi aur mein akela tut jaaunga bikhar jaaunga...i hate you kria!!...just go to hell...
Kria-Swayam...
Swayam-Kya swayam??...tum jaisi ghatiya aur giri huyi insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekhi...
All were insulting her...kria was in tears...taani smirks...kria ran away from their...taani's smirk dissapears as she saw rey falling on his knees...
Rey-I am sorry baatcutter...
The whole group were crying...sharon the most...after her reyam...they had hurted a special person...taani was shocked...

Confused??...eh...now yeh ss mein bahot twists and turns honge...koi bhi confusion hogi feel free to ask...and haan past ke scenes thode badlenge...iss mein rey taani ke upar ek dum lattu nahi tha...and shivam ka sirf flashback mein role hain present mein nahi...taani bhi ek positive character hi rahegi...

P.S-Hope u all lyked it...
P.P.S-For pms add me in ur buddy list!!...
P.P.S-No update of dis ss b4 pg 7!!...😈...cuz i send pms 2 75 ppl...and still get 40 lyks..and mujhe comments chahiye!!!...*comments ki bhuki hun 😛*

INDEX
Proluge-Pg 1
Part 1-Pg 5
Part 2-Pg 8
Part 3-Pg 13
Part 4-Pg 20
Part 5-Pg 24
Epilogue - Pg 30
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was good dear

Awww rey was crying

But me confused y he insulted her...

Leave it I no u will tell me y ?

All and all it was amezaing
Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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one more😲

bapre kitna likhti ho,,

nw cmg 2 d update,,,,,amazing,,,,luvd proluge😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ! Really good ! :)
Please update :D

And and i think people should start writing new SS or Os because i feel like The love from Kriyaansh fans has decreased alot :/

I really don't want that to happen.

COming froma hardcore Kriyaansh fan :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cool..!! KANFUSing hai..but i know u'll clear it...!!
and poor Kriya..she soo hurt. And poor gang...they are even more hurt...!!
wonder what is it that may cause Kriya's death..!! Update soon..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome prologe
Continue soon and thanx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: enrique

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It was good dear...Thanks...😊

Awww rey was crying ...😭

But me confused y he insulted her...baad mein pata chalega...

Leave it I no u will tell me y ?😈

All and all it was amezaing ...Thanks...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: D3kriyansh4ever

Awesome ! Really good ! :)...Thanks...
Please update :D...Not till it reaches pg7😛

And and i think people should start writing new SS or Os because i feel like The love from Kriyaansh fans has decreased alot :/...nothing lyk dt...kriyaansh fans havent decreased!!!...after kriyaansh was shattered dey stopped coming 2 india forums...

I really don't want that to happen...

COming froma hardcore Kriyaansh fan :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing work 👏...
Louians ko pehle se he Kriya ke bare mein pata tha 👍🏼...
But woh usko apne apse door kyun rakhna chahte hain 😒...
Kriya ki itni insult bhi kardi ...
Plz update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os..
bt i m confused..
bt i m sure u ll solve it soon..
really liked the way of ur writing...
thnx for pm...

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