nayak nahi khaknayak hoon mein zulmi bada dukh dayak hoon mein
hai pyaar kya mujhko kya khabar
bas yaar nafrat ke layak hoon mein
"humein aisa kyon lag raha hai ki saale sahab humein khud lene aayenge "
yea right .. sure dude .. dream on .. i mean it is as far fetched a thot as Akash coming to get you .. come on guy .. thank ur stars for the small mercy ... small wonder .. small chance ... KHUSHI ...
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Finally Anjali delivered on her promise .. she finally went on a NO food diet .. no water diet .. no medicine diet .. great ... atleast she lived upto her promise ..
Ques 1: she is on drip .. can meds not be fed to her from there .. neways post a gynae operation the first day solids are not administered .. u r given sustenance through drip ... which she is on .. SO .. Dear Mr. Maker .. how can not eating be a problem .. in one day after she lost her child ???
Anjali .. a mother no more .. who lost her child .. 8 days back
(serial time) .. & in these 8 days .. she has mourned for her child twice .. once in hospital .. once in RM .. & since then she has been constantly asking for her husband .. or sneakily meeting her husband ..
Ques 2: Anjali a mother who has lost her kid .. ( 7 months still born child) & u have as yet shown her remember her baby only twice .. now Dear Mr. maker .. how do you expect your audience to connect with her .. how do u expect ur audience to NOT "bash" the woman .. who has no VISIBLE emotional upheaval of loosing her child??
Khushi .. i seriously get it .. why she has to be the one to bring Shyam home .. its part of the future of the track .. i understand the importance of this .. so she feels for Anjali .. a woman who needs sustenance .. & is not taking it . being compounded by the nurse adding in her 2 bit .. so i get it she goes to bring Shyam ..
Ques 3: Now my ques to you mr. maker here is .. when u show Khushi in her monologue .. do u not want to show her actually reminising .. on how Shyam tried to kill the MAN she loves .. HER SUHAAG .. how heinous Shyam is NO ONE but KHUSHI knows .. so what kind of a monologue was ur audience expecting .. shudnt it have been her torn between doing the right by Di .. & her thinking for a minute .. what it cud mean to Arnav .. the MAN Shyam tried to kill the Man who is her HUSBAND ..
How do u expect ur audience to digest this .. when treatment is so wrong ???
NOW Mr. Maker .. lets c . what in this one week was need of the hour ..
1. We your audience would've appreciated .. a completely broken Anjali .. not an Anjali .. who at the drop of her hat comes onto her husband .. an Anjali .. who would've struggled with her loss .. wud've wanted to STOP EATING .. FOR THE LOSS OF HER KID .. an anjali ... who is devoid of emotions IN SHOCK .. not at all talking...except to mumble her husband name ... . & to break this SHOCK .. THE DOCTOR SAYS SHE WUD NEED HER HUSBAND .. & a family broken .. not knowing how to proceed ...
This justifies Shyam coming into RM as well .. & also .. paves way for a logical post still delivery trauma .. It also justifies .. Anjali ... & ur audience who is struggling with connecting with her .. cud find it in their heart to be a bit lenient with her ..
BUT above all this would NOT TRIVIALISE .. such a BIG social & medical problem .. as that of A BABY born STILL ..
NOW i am not a script writer nor have aspirations of being the same .. if i cud point one such scenario u cud use . i am sure ur very capable script writing team .. cud've come up with 100 such scenarios .. where Anjali wud be justified in her behaviour ...
2. KHUSHI .. oh we so get why she has to be the one to get Shyam back .. now .. today .. when Shyam was brought back .. what was the reason for it ?? why did Khushi bring back the man who attempted to murder her HUSBAND .. her SUHAAG .. just because Anjali skipped a meal ??? was there enuf drama & justification shown to us the viewer to merit such a BIG MOMENT ..
Now lets look at the ouster of Shyam .. the same scene had 3 days dedicated to it .. & reentry through the same front door .. was all of 3 minutes ..
WHERE was the struggle for KHUSHI .. she looked like she was stepping out to bring a cadbury chocolate for Anjali .. that was the sum total of her dilemma . what shud i bring .. Dairy milk or fruit & nut ?? .. did we get to see a torn KHUSHI .. did v get to see a Khushi .. who went against herself .. to do the BIG THING .. of bringing back the MAN WHO HAS MOST HURT HER ..
Now we all as audiences know .. the biggest impact of Shyam coming back to RM will be on KHUSHI .. so was this at all dramatised .. for us viewer .. ?? So how do you expect ur audience to be with u through thick or thin .. when u dont respect their intellect ???
Now lets go to the other BIG one tonite .. ARNAV SEEING SHYAM IN RM . that too ENTRY THRU THE MAIN DOOR ..
Lets visit this scene .. Arnav is told by nani & mami . that .. anjali is in real poor health .. OK got that they were also trying to get in touch with Arnav & Akash .. ok get that ..Nani thot .. that this was it for ANJALI .. she was so frail that they wud loose her . ok get that ...
Now lets pause here .. was a doctor even called .. the last we checked .. Arnav was the head of a fashion house ..he doesnt know how to save lives . so cudnt the esteemed family members call for a doctor .. wud that add to the credence & seriousness of this claim .. coz in this manner .. i as a viewer thot this was more manipulation of Arnav .. not real concern ..
Then for the BIG MOMENT .. Shyam walks in .. there is the typical ekta kapoor treatment .. bang bang .. close shots of all present on set .. then predictably .. Arnav holds Shyam by the collar .. & threatens him .. & shyam is speaking in a very calm dulcet tone .. so .. pray do tell me .. how did Anjali .. come to know on the first floor .. or the other family members come to know on the first floor that .. shyam was down .. was it so windy on the sets that the dulcet tones carried .. to the first floor .. heres my reaction to this .. WHAT THE F***
Could we have seen an enraged Arnav .. dragging Shyam who was digging his heels in .. & the other 3 passer bys .. Nani , Mami & Akash .. adding to the pleas .. NOW cud a doctor here now not make sense ..who would say . great this is what was needed .. if this is shyam he is the anti dote needed TO BRING ANJI BACK TO GUD HEALTH .. ok chalo too much drama ..
Ok .. now lets c .. shyam enters .. there are a couple of close ups of the people on set . then arnav goes up to him .. exchanges pleasntaries .. which he replies to . SO WHERE IS KHUSHI ALL THIS TIME .. was she by any chance paying the auto guy & ran out of change ?? that she came in SO LATE ???
Common .. drama .. for the sake of drama .. please .. the audience .. is not that naive .. u can dish some parts sense to us as well ..
NOW FOR THE NEXT BIG MOMENT .. Arnav realises .. KHUSHI has done this .. she has brought SHyam home .. now my friends .. i am not even going to give that much respect to the maker here that i will write here on the mistakes in this one .. so please pause & play this ur self .. BELIEVE U ME .. U WILL WANT TO GET UP & COMMIT HARAKIRI URSLEF .. ON THE MAKER ..
please do pause on both the leads expressions ... i for one cudnt understand it .. was it anger on Arnav's face .. disbelief .. shock .. a look of et u 2 brutus .. ( please do tell me if u caught even one of these)
Now Khushi .. did she have an expression of .. i am worried for Di .. i am dam scared of how arnanji will react .. i am disgusted that i have to even stand in the same place as creepwa .. was there a look on her face . try to understand that i did this for Di .. ??
again if u managed to catch any one of these expressions .. do let me know promise to rewatch with an open mind) ..
NOW FOR THE COUP DE GRACE ..
anjali comes .. rolling down . note she removed the drip as well .. she also repaired her lipstick to a darker shade .. ( ok that was uncalled for ) .. then she comes down .. & sees her Shyam ji .. & promptly HUGS HIM .. wow .. "madhur milan " happened .. how much have u trivialised the death of a child .. mr . maker .. please see this scene urself ..
she is happy her husband is HOME .. wow .. how sweet .. now tell me Madam MOTHER .. cudnt believe she had KHUSHI KE AANSOON in her eyes .. instead of breaking down .. for her baby in her husbands arms .. crying for their child .. mourning their loss .. she is so happy to see her lover back in her arms .. she wants to go for some private time to their room ..
Then she turns around & tells Arnav thank u for bringing my husband home to me .. he is my life .. awww .. what a moment .. now did any one here catch helpless ness in the brothers eyes .. did anyone catch him clench his fist to stop the HUG between his sister & his kidnapper .. did ne one catch .. a look of extreme disgust in arnav's face . when he saw Shyam .. speaking to Anjali .. in those i love u tones .. wasnt there a need for this .. isnt Arnav the only one to whom SHyam has confessed his true feelings for Rani Sahiba too ?????
such glaring errors in one of the most important episodes of the track .. the episode which laid the foundation for the future .. the start of the REAL DESTRUCTION .. the start of the BATTLE ..
Now my question to you the VIEWER .. DID ANYONE OF U FEEL THIS WAS HOW IMPORTANT THIS EPISODE WAS ?????
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This is the first time i have ranted on DC about the episode .. but this really was the straw which broke this camels back .. SUCH AN IMPORTANT EPISODE .. BUT TREATMENT .. & SCRIPTING ALL WRONG .. the no of people who got the magnitude of this episode must be in negatives .. hence .. i came out of the closet literally on this one ...
have written my post .. in black .. u normally do that . when u mourn something .. tonite i mourned the death of creativity .. this episode .. was a death in creativity .. for IPK .. i am hoping . tomorrow will be a new day .. the precap . was the only promise i cud see in this episode ..
if this episode was return of the prodigal ..
tomorrows episode hopefully will be . Return of the MAN .. yes .. asr .finally hopefully wil DON the mantle of the MAN of ACTION ..