kaash Aap Hamare Hote(NewPartVII added!!)

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All parts I-IV and new part V also added.

Part-I

My fanfic starts after Jigyasa has left and Pia leaving after having the nasty fight with Pushkar.

Bani has come to her room. She has tears in her eyes. She cannot get the taunt that Jigyasa has made about her and her character. She has mixed feelings of humilation, anger, frustration and love for the man who is responsible for complete turmoil in her life and also the as much as she hates him she cannot deny the love she feels for him in her heart.

She cannot believe that Pia insulted him like that. After all she has done for her sister this is the price she pays for loving and caring about her. She makes a decision to leave Pia's house.

Pia comes to Bani's room she says...

Pia- Di yeh aap kya kar rahi hai?

Bani- Maine ek faisla liya hai Pia, main yahan se jaa rahi ho.

Pia- Di yah app kya kaha rahi hai? I am sorry Di, lekin aap...

Bani- Pia, Mujhe is bare mein koi baat nahi karni. Maine tah kar liya hai ki main yahan se ja rahi hoon.

Pia- Di, Aap kahan jayegi?

Bani- tum iski parwah mat karo. Maine zindgai aaj tak doosro ke liye ji hai, ab apne aur apne baache ke liye jina chahati hoon? Maine independent rahaine chaathi hoon? Tum ab badi ho gayi ho pia. Apne faisle aur apni tarah tumhe zindgai jina ka haaq hai. Mujhe meri zindgai jine do.

And then she leaves. Pushkar tries to stop her but is completely unsuccessful.

The next morning Rano comes to meet Bani and wants to how she is doing. Before she can find Bani she overhears Pia and Pushkar arguing as to what they will tell Mr. Walia about Bani.

Rano hears this and comes rushing and asks Pushkar...

Rano- Di kaha hai Pushkar?? Pia??

No Reply. Rano gets worried and asks again..

Rano- Di kaha hai?? Kuch to bolo?

Pushkar- Rano, Bani yeh ghar choodkar chali gayi hai.

Rano- Lekin Kyu?

Pushkar then recants the entire episode how Jigyaasa and Pia insulted Bani and that was the reason why Bani left. Rano is furious with Pia. She tells Pia..

Rano- Aakhir tumhne wahi kiya jaisa tum karna chaathi ho. Tumhe kisi ki bhi feelings ki koi kadar nahi hai. Jigyaasa mummji to parayi thi di ki. Tumhne to apna hokar di ko dukh poochaya hai. Tum aisa di ke saath kaise kar saakthi ho. Aakhir kuy pia?

Pia - Maine maanti hoon, ki maine gussa maine di ko galat keh diya. Maine unse maafi bhi maang li. Lekin unhone mere aur pushkar ka bich maine bola to muche accha nahi laga. Isliye...

Rano cuts her mid-way and snaps back at her by saying- Accha, di ko haaq nahi hai ki woh tumhare and pushkar ke mamla mein kuch bhi bole lekin tumhne pura haaq hai ki tum di aur Mr. Walia ke divorce ki baat karo. Ek baat meri dhyan se sun loo agar di ko kuch bhi hua to main tumse na kahi baat karoongi aur nahi kabhi maaf karrongi. Tumhare jaisa maine aasan faramosh nahi dekha. Ab tumhe Mr. Walia ko jawab dena hoga.

Before Pia or Pushkar may say anything Rano storms out leaving the two worried about the consequences with Mr. Walia.

The scene now shifts to Walia House, Breakfast is getting ready and everyone is sitting on the dining table ready to have. The entire family is having breakfast. Just then Rano comes in....

Rano - Mummyji Bani di kahan hai?

The question shocks the family and Jai Walia as he is completely stomped and asks Rano..

Jai Walia- Rano, yeh kya kaha rahi ho? Bala, Jigaaysa kaise janegi ki bani kahan hai?

Jigyaasa is nervous and worried thinking what has Bani done now.

Rano - Mr. Walia, Di Pushkar ka ghar chood kar chali gayi. Mummyji ke maloom hai unhni ka karan to woh chali gayi.

Jai Walia- Jigyaasa, tumhari problem kya hai? Kyu nahi chaathi hoo ki main kush rahoo. Kya kaha tumne Bani se? Batao mujhe. Batao.

Jigyaasa says nothing. Jai asks Rano to tell him and Rano after lot of hesitation tells him everything and Jai Walia is furious and the other family members are shocked. Only Ranveer seems to be enjoying this moment with a big grin on this face.

Jai Walia- Yahan main apni poori koshish kar raha hoon ki bani mere paas wapas aajaye aur tum mere aur bani beech maine deewar kuy ban rahi hoon. Maine nahi jaanta tha ki meri bahein hi meri kushi ki dushman baanegi. Jab mere apne hi ghar mein dushman hain to bahar walon se kya shikayat karo.

Jigyaasa now crying says- Aapko hamesha maine hi aapki dushman lagti hoon. Aur yeh teen ladakeyin aapki hamdard. Aap apno ko paraya aur paraye ko aapne maine ki bhool kar rahe hai. Lekin appko maine hi galat lagti hoon. Aap mujshe hi naf...rat karte ha..in (and she starts to cry and yell at the sametime.)

Jai Walia is totally unmoved and asks Rano to call Pushkar and Pia to Walia House and tells Aditya to call the police and lodge that Bani is missing. He tells Aditya once he done with Jigaasa and Pushakar and Pia, they both will go and search for Bani. He is furious and concern for Bani and is driving him in despair. He is still yelling at Jigaaysa and the scene at the Walia House is one of confusion and commotion. Just then Pia and Pushkar enter Walia House. As soon as they enter Jai Walia like a bull charges at them and goes directly to Pia.

Jai Walia- Pia, tumahari himmat ki daat deta hoon main. Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri Bani se batmichi karne ki. Jis bahein ke karan tumhe maine maaf kiya tha uske saath tumhne asia kyu kiya? Jawab do mujhe?

Pia- Mr. Walia, Aapko meri and mari di ka beech main boolen ka koi haaq nahi hai.

Jai Walia- Haaq? Haaq toh tumhe bhi nahi tha mera jasbat se khelne ka. Tumhari wajah se Bani ko meri nafrat mili aur usne chup chap meri nafrat ko saha. Aaj ek baat ka ehsaas ho gaya mujhe ki tumhse shaadi karta toh aaj pushkar ki tarah meri zindagi bhi janum ban gayi hoti. Lekin Bani ne mujhe nafrat ki jagah sirf izzat aur pyar diya. Jaanti hoon, jab roshni se rishta toota tha tab woh rishta mere naseeb mein nahi tha, Jab sonali se rishta toota tho maine ek accha dost ko koya, jab tumne rishta toda tab mera dil toota, lekin jab bani mujshe alaag hui to pehli baar yeh ehsaas hua ki meri zindagi mujshe alaag hoo gayi. Mujshe tumhse koi aur baat nahi karni. Meri zindagi bani ke naam hain. Agar bani ko kuch bhi hua tumhare aur meri bahaein ka karan to is bar tumhe kud vidhata bhi nahi baja payega. And by the Pia, you are fired!!!

With this Jai and Aditya leave to search for Bani. They have no clue where to search but they go anyway.

Bani is aimlessly wondering around the streets of Mumbai. She has no clue what to do. The flashback of the past keep coming back to her. She does not know what to do and what life has in store for her. Her back is killing her and the luggage she has been carrying with her is not helping her. She is hungry and has not eaten anything. She decides she has to eat something for the baby.

Jai and Aditya keep looking for Bani very unsuccessfully. They call the police for an update but the reply is in negative. They keep searching but decide after sometime to go back to Walia house and devise a new strategy to find Bani.

Meanwhile Bani finds a restaurant to eat and drink tea. As she is finishing her breakfast, she hears a telephone conversation which sends chills down her spine. It is a someone talking about Jai Walia and that attempt on his life will be made at 10:00am today. He tells the caller that he had sent the white saree to his wife but to no avail. Hence, today will be the last day of Jai Walia on this earth. Bani checks her watch it is showing 9:30 am she leaves the place in a hurry, tries to call Mr. Walia but the network is busy she is unable to get through. She decides to go to Walia house herself.

The time is now 9:50am. 10 minutes to the countdown. Just as Jai and Aditya park their car. A paid assassin has taken a position at the opposite building of the Walia House and has trained his telescophic lens rifle on Walia's heart. And is adjusting the lens to take a clear shot.

Just then Bani reaches Walia house. The time is now 9:57am. 3 minutes to the assassination. She starts to run. Her heart beat is rapidly accelerating but the aderaline and the love she has for her husband tests her and she keeps moving. Her knees and back are aching. But she keeps going on. She has no clue from where the killer will attack. The assassin is ready on the rooftop, just then sun starts to come out on a gloomy and cloudy day. He checks himself to see if his positon is compromised but is sure that he is safe and hidden from anyone's viewing.

Just then Bani feels some kind of reflection on her eyes and it is a reflection from the telescophic lens and she sees the killer. He is aiming at Mr. Walia. She shouts Mr. Walia and then Aditya and Jai both turn around and are stunned to see paniced Bani. Just then the killer fires the first bullet it hits Bani on her upper shoulder. She jerks and two more bullets pierce her shoulder and back. With a thud she collapses in Mr. Walia's arm.

The gun fire shatters the silence of a quiet morning and brings the Walia family outside to see Bani in a pool of blood and Jai shouting Bani, Bani,

Bani, Bani....... but no reply is coming back.

The entire family is shocked. Is this the end of Jai and Bani? Will Bani survive? Will her child survive? Will Jai now finally realize his love for Bani? Will Bani's act of courage bring about a change of in Jigayaasa heart towards Bani? Will Jai Walia know who is after his life? And will the real mystery of Park Road unravel? Until next time....

This is my first attempt. Plz let me know should I continue or stop. Ur comments are welcome.

Also I want to end this by a poem which I believe tells the essence of Jai and Bani's relationship.

Kaash Aap Hamara Hote,

To hum aur aap judaa na hote,

Raaste hamara aise alaag na hote,

Kaash Aap Hamara Hote.

Tumhari tasveer ko jab bhi dekhta hoon,

To guzaare lamhe wapas laut aate hain,

Kaise kaho ki tumse mujhe pyaar ho chala hai,

Kya yeh bhi tumhe baatana padega,

Ki tum mere liya mera jeevan ho,

Kaash Aap hamara Hote.

Yaadein ko bulna aasan nahi,

Tumhara ehassas bulna aata nahi,

Chahat main teri aasa doopa hoon,

Ki Hosh ka pata nahi,

Aaj dil ki ek hi kwashish hain,

Ki tum aakar en bahoon mein,

Baas jaho aur mujshe sirf itna kaho do,

Is Hum to sirf Aapke hai,

Aur kisi ka nahi.

Part-II

Bani lays silently in a pool of blood. Jai Walia with tears in his eyes is at loss of words. He wants to say things yet all he can do is weep as if he just lost of voice. For the first time in his life he can barely speak but at a time when he needs to be in control, he just has lost grip on reality.

Aditya is yelling for ambulance. The entire Walia family is in shock. Rano is too stunned to speak and Pia is complete shock. The two sisters of Bani are just standing there like a statue. The noise of the ambulance breaks the silence. The attendants come and lay Bani on a stretcher and rush to the hospital. The entire Walia family following in the car behind the ambulance. Jai Walia is sitting with Bani in the ambulance completely in a daze as the world around him does not exist or he has become non-existent to the world.

The scene moves to the Life Care Hospital where the media, police and team of doctors are waiting to start their treatment on Bani. They take her directly to the Operation Room. 3 bullets have piereced Bani and she is pregnant, they are worried of the complications and consequences in the event they are unable to save Bani.

The media as usual is looking for a soundbyte from the Walia family, police and doctors to get something on the condition of Mrs. Walia. They start speculating and once again the police come under the scanner. Mr. Jai Walia is not a odinary man he is a high-profile industralist and this was the second attempt on his life a very quck span of time. With the case now becoming high-profile, in a surprise move, the case has been handed over to the CBI. The most unexpected turn. The Walia family is unaware of this development.

The scene now moves to the operation theatre where the doctors are not only trying to access the damage done to Bani but are also seeing her chance of survival and the fate of her unborn child. It is a Catch-22 situation for them. They have been successful in taking out all the three bullets, but there has been enourmous blood loss and there are internal injuries which can complicate her pregnancy.

The scene now shifts to outside the operation theatre where the Walia family is eagerly waiting to recieve any kind of news. Just then, the red light of the operation theatre goes off, and the doctor emerges, he has grim expressions on his face. Jai Walia first impression upon seeing the doctor is of fear, fear of losing his wife and child. The doctor now faces Jai Walia directly and the entire family huddle around him. Jai Walia says,

Jai Walia- Doctor, Bani kasi hai? Woh theek to hai? Mera baccha toh theek hai?

Doctor- Mr.Walia, hum golia to nikalne me kamyab ho gaye hai. Lekin Mrs. Walia ki condition very critical hai. Jab tak unhe hosh nahin aata, hum kuch bhi nahin keh sakte. Kafi blood loss hua hai, and agle 48 ghante tak kuch bhi nahin kaha ja sakta. Jab tak Mrs. Walia ko hosh nahin aata tab tak yeh janaa bahut muskil hoga ki aapke hone wale baccha ke kya condition hai. Hum apni tarah se poori koshish karenge. Aage sab us baghwan par hai.

The news is not good and Jai Walia just collapses and the other members help him before he falls down. Seeing his condition and Pia and rano's reaction, Jigaaysa for the first time realizes that her brother has actually fallen in love with his wife Bani. As much she hates the three sisters she loves her brother vey much and for the first time is torn as she questions her actions against Bani. Just as she is analyzing these thoughts, Aditya comes and tells Jai that this case has now been given to CBI and there is a press conference regarding the same in the next few minutes. They rush to doctors office to find a television.

The scene now shifts on Doctors office and the press conference is about to happen at the CBI Headquarters in New Delhi. The entire Walia family wants to know what is happening. As they are watching the screen comes the man who is known for his intelligence, courage, dedication and is India's top investigator and criminal profiler Ajay Singh Rathore, who looks smart, sleek with a steel rimmed glasses, is gradually growing bald, comes centrestage in the middle of reporters, cameras and walks upto the microphone and says...

Ajay- Good evening, I have been given the case of the twice attempted assissnation on Mr. Jai Walia. Part of our special team has already landed in Mumbai and has started taking over the case from Mumbai police. I will be going to Mumbai this evening and start our investigation. I would like to share this with you that we will catch whoever is after Mr. Walia's life. Thank you, at this point of time we will not be entertaining any questions or making any speculation. And with this Ajay leaves the press conference.

The entire family is looking at each other trying to fathom what is going on. When both Rano and Pia in unison say two words that pretty much silences the entire Walia family. They say "Aju Bhaiya?"

Jai looks at them and says, "Rano, tum Ajay ko janti hoo?"

Rano - Ha, Mr. Walia, yeh hamare Aju Bhaiya hai. Hum teeno baheino ke muh bole bhai. Mr. Walia, Ajay Bhaiya, Dushyant Singh Rathore, ke bade ladke hai, Aap jante hi hoge ki woh Hotel and Media Magnate, He is a multi-millionarie businessman. Ajay Bhaiya, Mt. Abu ke hain. Unke phele hotel waha per tha. Unki Maa bachpan mein guzar gayi thi. Woh hamari maa ko apni maa mante the and hume apni bahein. Jab hum Mumbai aa rahe the tab woh chahte the ki hum unke saath London chale. Lekin Di nahin chahti thi India chodkar janaa. Uske baad hamare unse contact toot gaya. Mr. Walia, Aju bhaiya, di ko bahut maante hai, aur woh unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

This stuns Mr. Jai Walia to no end. Before he can say anything. A voice comes from behind him and he is sees Ajay Singh Rathore standing in front of him. Ajay says,

Ajay- Tum ne teekh kaha rano, yeh bahi apni bahein ke liya kuch bhi karega.

Rano and Pia turn around and run to hug their brother Ajay and he hugs them. It is a tearful reunion. He is happy to see them and but also Bani's absence hurts him a lot. He is happy and sad at the sametime and is worried about Bani. He looks at them and tells them not worry he will not let anything happen to Bani and will apprehend her attacker no matter what it takes. He then looks at the Walia family and places himself right between Jai and Jigyaasa Walia. He looks at Jai Walia and then Jigyaasa and then says-

Ajay- Mr. Walia, aapse case ke bare maine baat karoonga, lekin phele apni bahain ke bare mein kuch kahaine chahta hoon. Bahut naam suna tha maine appka aur apke Walia khandan ka, lekin choote muh yeh bhi nahin ke sakta ki aapse milkar ko mujshe kushi hui. Aapne and apki is bahain ne meri bahein bani ki zindagi maut ke dwar par lakar kadi kar di. Itni nafrat di apne usko Mr. Walia, kya kusur tha uska? Apki is bahaein ne usko kya -kya nahin kaha, lekin Mr.Walia, aapko meri bahaein ke aaso ka hisaab toh dena padega. Aapki is bahaein ko uski kimat chukani hogi. Agar meri bahein ko kuch bhi hua toh apki si bahaein ko mujshe koi nahin bacha payega. Yeh Vaada hai mera.

He looks around and continues-

Ajay- Rahi apki case ki baat, toh hum ne taftish shuru kar di hai. Intial investgation se ek baat saaf hai, ki aapka dushman koi apna hi hai. Jise aapki har movement ki khabar hai. Aapke hi ghar mein koi aasthen ka saap hai. Maine nahin sirf uske chehra se parda hataoonga par uske hi jabani uske gunaah kaool kar wahooga. Aur hai Mr. Walia, ek baat aur interesting is case ke karan aayi hai. Yeh kahi na kahi aapke attit se is case ka vaasta hai. Aur maine jaanta hoon, yeh aapke attit ke kis raaz se chuda hai. Mr. Walia, jis wajah se aapke aur bani ke beech mein darrar aayi hai, woh apne kabhi kiya hi nahi. Aur maine is baat ko waqt aane par sabit kar doonga.

The entire family is baffled only Jai Walia is confused and relieved at the same time. He looks at Ajay and the nod confirms his suspision that he was not responsible for Bani's mom's death. Then who? Many unanswered question comes to his mind. He is stunned at the relevation and is wondering how does Ajay know so much since he has just been assigned the case. This is getting more complicated.

Ajay looks around the family members and says nothing and he calls his team and starts giving them instructions like-

Ajay- dubey, tum, sinha and three officer bani ke room ke bahar rahooge. Barkha tum Sheetal jaoo aur crime scene investigate karo. I want all the evidence to be tagged, bagged and no screw ups. Aur hai, tiwari aur mehra tum log mere saath rahoge.

Ajay looks at Rohit, Anu's husband and says- Mr. rohit, mujhe aapke papa se baat karni hai, unhe phone lagaye and unse kahiye ki roshini aur woh isi waqt hospital aaye. Agar une problem hai to hum waha aaja the hai ya phir unhe police station aana hoga. And Mr. Rohit, I want them there now. Thanks.

Jai Walia and the entire family is worried now. Why does Ajay want to speak to Roshini and Ranvijay? What is the reason? Is it connected to him or Bani? Answers to questions for which he will not get answer.

Time is just passing through. Bani's condition has been said to be stable but critical. She has still not regained consciousness. Ajay is worried sick. 36 hours has passed. The investigation has not revealed any major breakthrough, but in his heart he knows he will get them. He curses himself on not being there for Bani. Tears are just not stopping for him. He has to be strong but he is tense. If anything happened to Bani he will never be able to face himself. He is lost in his thoughts when Rano and Pia come and console him. The entire Walia family is watching this. Ranvijay and roshini have arrived and have been waiting for more than 10 hours and still have not been able to meet with Ajay. They have been told to wait.

Meanwhile Ajay tells Rano and Pia- Mai aaj fail ho gaya, apni bahein ka kasoorvar hoon main, agar bani ko kuch bhi ho gaya, toh yeh bahi jeeta ji mar jayega. Main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paooga.

His eyes fell on Roshini and she is stunned to see him. She cannot believe it is Ajay and he is the lead investigator. Ranvijay's face looses colour when he sees Ajay and he is worried.

Ajay- Ah!!! Ms. Roshini Chopra, kya baat hai, hum phir milenge is dil ko itna tho pata tha.Lekin itni jaldi mujhe yakeen nahi hota. Aaj roshini chopra main boolonga aur tum sonoogi. 5 saal tumhare liya ek lambha arsa hoga lekin mere liya to yeh kaal ki baat hai. Kyu Ranvijayji?

Ajay looks at the stunned Walia family and his two sisters. And smiles-

Ajay- Mr. Walia, aap to chook gaye, ki maine ine jaanta hoon. Aur phir roshini cheez hi aisi hai jise bhulana aasne nahi. Aur phir Mr. Walia, jo ladki aapko mandap mein choogkar chali jaye use bulna namumkin hota hai. Roshini ne mere saath kuch aisa hi kiya. Kyu roshini main kuch galat to nahi keh raha hoon.

This news shocks the entire Walia family to no end. Jai Walia is shocked and cannot believe this is happening.

Ajay tells Roshini and Ranvijay now - Maine sirf itna bolna ke liya bulaya hai ki agar bani ya Mr. Walia ko marne ki saazish mein yah phir aaj se saat sal phele ke hadse se agar koi bhi saboot agar mujhe aap logo ke khilaaf mila to phir aapko is janam me mujshe koi bhi nahin bacha payega. Agar bani ko kuch bhi hua, agar meri en dono bahein ko koi bhi taqlif pochi toh apni baki ki zindgai jail me bitna ke liya tayar ho jana. Aur hai is saher ko choodkar maat jana. Warna.... aage tum kud hi samjdhar hoon. Aap ja sakte hai. Bye now!!!! Nice meeting you.

43 hours have passed and bani's condition is now much better. She has regained her consiousness and has is murmuring only two words Mr. Walia, Mr Walia........

The doctor comes out and informs the family that Bani has regained consicousness and the entire family is now overjoyed. The family wants to see her. He also tells them that the baby is alright but just for precaution they will take the sonography test once Mrs. Walia is in a better condition. But the doctor says only one person can go besides Mr. Walia. So Ajay goes with Jai Walia to see his sister for the first time in 7 years.

The scene now shifts to the Bani's room. Machines are attached to her. A glucose and other drips are going in her arms. She looks pale. He can barely open her eyes due to the heavy medication she is under. She can barely understand her surroundings. She sees her husband Mr. Walia and smiles for the first time after a long time.

Jai Walia- Bani, sab theek ho jayega, tum phikir nahi karo. Bas aaram karo. Maine yahi hoon, main kahi nahi jaa raha hoon.

Bani justs nods and asks- Aap theek hai Mr. Walia? Mera bachcha theek hai na Mr. Walia?

Jai Walia- Maine theek hoon. Baacha bhi theek hai. Bus tum achi ho jayo. Bani dekho tumse kaun milne aaya hai?

Just then Ajay comes in Bani's full view. Tears are in his eyes. He can barely see anything clearly. He wipes the tears and looks at his sister for the first time. Bani is surprised and overjoyed to see Aju Bhaiya.

Bani tells him- Aju Bhaiya, aakhir aapko is bahein ki yaad aahi gayi. Kahan the aap? Mujhe aapse baat nahi karni?

Ajay smiles - Hai, bandariya, aaj tumhari yaad aahi gayi.

With this he goes and hugs his sister and both have a tearful embrace.

Jai watches and can see the love between them. And just enjoys the moment. The nurse comes and tells them that Bani needs to rest. They leave and come to the waiting area and tell them she is doing well. The doctor comes and tells them that they need to keep Mrs. Walia under observation for the next few days and then will decide upon her recuperation when she can be discharged.

Just as Ajay is smiling and happy that Bani is fine. Barkha and Sheetal come in and look at Ajay. They look at him and he looks at him. They walk straight to him and he walks away from the Walia family.

The Walia family is looking at Ajay and his two investigator. And they see Ajay smile. He has got the first break in the case. He comes to know who the shooter is. He nods. Now he knows how he will play his cards. It will be very close to his heart. The shooter is in custody.

With the first breakthrough in the case and his sister Bani now out of danger and recuperating. He looks at the Walia family who are looking at him. He nods towards Bharka and Sheetal to bring the shooter. And when the shooter walks and comes to face to face with the Walia family and Ajay.

The Walia family is shocked to see the shooter but Ajay is not. He knows he has taken a gamble here. If his plan fails then things could get nasty.

Well, until next time......

How does Ajay come to find out the shooter's identity in such a short time? Why is the Walia family shocked to see the shooter? What secret does Ajay know about Roshini and Ranvijay chopra that has them worried? What will Ajay's next game plan will be? Will Bani return back to Walia house for good? Will Jai Walia realize his love for Bani?

Thank you very much for your earlier comments. Your comments are always welcome. Thank you for your encouraging words. Hope you like this as much as the first part.

Will return with the III part soon. Until then........

Part-III

Ajay smiled looking at the shooter. He was taking a huge risk and he knew it. Before even revealing anything further all of a sudden he started to walk further away from the shooter. Everybody was completely confused as to what he was doing. What is the point of going if the shooter is right in your sight.

The gun was pointed at the man who had been hiding at the hospital corridor for sometime, wanting to make another attempt on the life of Jai Walia. The gun was being pointed by Ajay with a smirk which said everything. With gun trained on the man , Ajay made his trip back and infront of the Walia family. And smiled at the man-

Ajay- Kya soocha tha, ki tum mujshe baazi jeet loge, mere samne tum Mr. Walia pur hamla karoge aur bach jaoge. Paagal ho kya!! Meri nazar aur akal dono hi bahut teez hai. Dekh to maine tum thodi der phele hi liya tha, lekin agar us maqt padhakne ki koshish karta tho yahan par kohram much jata aur tum mere haath se bach jaate. Lekin ab aaisa nahin hoga. Yeh jo aadmi hai na, jise hum shooter keh raha the woh koi aur nahin hamara hi admi hai. Aur Walia family ka chookna sirf tumhe gumraah karne ke liya tha. Tumhari khatir toh ab hum karenge.

Then he directs his people to arrest the man and take him into custody and start interoogating him. He also tells the Walia family to go home as he and his men have not only surrounded the floor where Bani is admitted but have taken over the security of the hospital. The Walia family does not want to go but finally agrees. Jai Walia is not willing to let his wife out of his sight and decides to stay back. Ajay tells him to get some rest and if there is any development he will inform them. A relunctant Jai Walia leaves with the family.

The scene is shifted to Bani's room, where Ajay is sitting there and watching Bani sleep who is under heavy medication. Childhood memories and fun he had with the three sisters keep coming to his mind. How lovely and enjoyable those times were. How alive and carefree they use to be and now things had changed so much. Bani his sister had gone through so much and have survived to see another day. Slowly, sleep start taking over him and soon he doozes off.

Next morning, Bani slowly regains her consicousness and sees her brother sleeping and just keeps looking at him. He has changed so much, he is now wears glasses, is gradually getting bald, she is happy to see her brother but not the circumstances of their reunion. She is thirsty but does not want to wake her brother up.

Just as she is trying to get water, a hand comes and assists her. It is Jai. He pours the water out of the jug into the glass, helps Bani to drink water and then wipes her mouth. The touch of her husband on her lips sends current in Bani's body and she remembers her special night. It has been such a long time that she has seen her husband. She smiles and Jai smiles back at her.

Meanwhile, Ajay now fully awake is pretending to sleep so he can watch these two lovebirds, as different as they are, they seem to be completely in sink with each other. There is a spark, a raw attraction between them that can be smelled from a mile. He smiles and says-

Ajay- Maine kuch nahi dekha, kya maine apni aakhe kol lo. Aap log bhi jidhar dekho bus shuru ho jaante hai. Aisa mat karo, baccha ki jaan loge kya!!

Bani smiles and says- Aju Bhaiya, aisi koi baat nahi, aap bhi na? and she blushes.

Ajay tells Jai Walia- Mr. Walia, aapke mamla yahan set hai, hasi to matlab phasi. Aapki to naya par ho gayi. Ab mera kya hoga.

Just then walks in a beautiful looking women and looks at Ajay and says-

Aapke liya maine hoon Na?

Ajay turns around and smiles and says- arre, tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? By the Bani and Mr. Walia, meet my wife Shikha.

Bani smiles and says- Arre yeh kya hua, langoor ke haath maine hoor. Aap bhabhi inki baat main aa gayi. Kya aapko isse defective piece nahi mila tha kya?

And everybody starts laughing besides Ajay and he looks shakes his head and walks away. Damn he says I hate mornings.

Bani and Shikha have long chat and get along well from the start and they are happy to find each other's company. Jai is happy to see Bani in such a light mood after a long time.

Meanwhile back at the hospital corridor, Ajay looks around and decides it is time to disclose some startling facts to Bani and Mr. Walia and decides to do it now since there is no one around.

He walks back into the room and sees them chatting with Shikha. He looks at them and is torn whether to reveal this information now or keep it for later when Bani is better. He decides he has to reveal now otherwise he will not be able to plan his next move.

With a heavy heart he decides and tells them-

Ajay- Ek baat kahnee hai aapse. Lekin samaj main nahin aa raha ki baat kaha se shuru karo. Baat bahut hi confidential hai aur aap dono se jodi hai. Lekin is baat ko jaane ke baad aap logo ko wohi karna hoga jaisa main kahoonga. Baat yeh hai ki.............

What is the relevation that Ajay wants to make that can change both Jai and Bani' s prespective? Will Bani go back to the Walia house once she has recocvered? Will the relevation make Bani's decision more easy or difficult? And will Ajay unmask the conspiracy to kill Jai Walia?

Until Part IV.........

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Part-IV

Ajay- Ek baat kahnee hai aapse. Lekin samaj main nahin aa raha ki baat kaha se shuru karo. Baat bahut hi confidential hai aur aap dono se jodi hai. Lekin is baat ko jaane ke baad aap logo ko wohi karna hoga jaisa main kahoonga. Baat yeh hai ki.............

Jai- Kya hua ajay, baat ko aisa beech mein mat choro!! Mujshe batao akhir tum kehna kya chahte ho.

Ajay now looks at Jai, Bani and his wife Shikha. He looks concerned and is not sure to tell or not. But he has already said too much. No time to retrace his step. He curses himself, me and my big mouth. He takes a deep breath and says to himself, here I go.

Ajay- Mr. Walia, yeh baat jitna mere liya bolna mushkil hai, usse jayda aapke liya sunna mushkil hoga. Baat yeh hai ki.... main jaanta hoon ki Park road ka asli gunagaar kaun hai? Main yeh bhi jaanta hoon, ki usne aisa kyun kiya? Mere paas uske khillaf kafi saboot hai, lekin main usse giraftar nahi kar sakta. Kyunki usne aapke samne apni kuch aisi image banai, ki aapko meri baat par yakin nahi hoga.

Jai, Bani and Shikha are shocked. More importantly, Bani is stunned to know that Jai is not responsible for her mother's death. She says-

Bani- Ajay bhaiya, yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Agar aap meri maa ka maut ke asli gunagaar ko jaante hai, aur aapke paas unske khilaaf saboot hai, toh phir problem kya hai? Aisa kya hua, jiske karan aap itne parshaan hai? Poori baat bataye.

Ajay is now even more concerned. He looks at Bani and shakes his head and says- Bani, tumhari maa ki maut dar asaal, ek hadsa tha. Lekin woh plan Mr. Walia ko marne ka tha. A foolproof plan!! Lekin isse phele ki woh aapne plan me kamyab hote. Tumhari maa ne unki baat sune li. Aur isliye unhe raaste se hataya gaya. Jab Mr. Walia, ki car park road par aagyi thi. Tab Mr. walia ko yaad hoga, ki ek car achanak se unke samne aagyi thi. Aur usse bachne ke liye, unhone apni car ka control koya tha. Aur tabhi tumhari maa jo ki raaste par padi thi. Fortunately or unfortunately, Mr. Walia ki car wahi par aakar rukhi. Uske baad kya hua yeh to aap jaante hai na Mr. Walia.

Now Jai Walia is even more shocked. Who would want to hatch a conspiracy against him. He is too stunned to speak. He cannot believe what he is hearing. I mean who would want him dead 7 years back and now again attack him. Now after 7 years and why? and more importantly who?

Bani is completely numb. Shikha is pretty stunned herself.

Jai stammers but still speaks - Ajay, agar jo tum kahe rahe ho, woh saach hai. Toh phir aaj 7 saal baad muj par attack karne ka matlab? Kuch samaj nahi aaya? Aur aab kyu? Main bahoot confused hoon?

Ajay looked directly at Mr. Walia and said- Mr. Walia, park road ka raaz, jo ek atit ka hissa bankar rahe gaya tha, usse Bani ke aane ka baad aapko phir se zinda karna pada. Ab agar, asli baat samne aagayi toh Mr. Walia, aap kud sochiye, jo log iss raaz ki asliyat jaante hai, jis ke khul jaane se woh barbaad ho sakte hai, toh woh log aapne ko bachna ke liya kuch bhi kar sakte hai. Aap to sirf ek mohra hai unke liye. Roshini ko unhune aapke paas b paas beja, yeh sochkar ki roshini aapko Bani se alag karne maine safaal ho jaye to unka yeh raaz hamesha ke liya dafan ho jayega. Aur Bani aapko apni maa ki maut ka zimmedar manti rahegi aur aap hamesha usi aag mein jalte rahege. Lekin, unhone sirf ek galti kar di, jaldi jaldi main, apne ek khas aadmi ko apko marne ke liye bejh diya. Aur ab woh hamare hirasaat main hai. Aap phikir mat ki jiya, main kud ja raha hoon, usse baat karne. Aur ha, aap log kisi bhi surat main, yeh baat kisi no nahi batayege. Bani, tum waise hi Mr. Walia se saat behave karogi, jaise phele kar rahi thi. Tum Walia house jaogi, tode din ke liye, aur uske baad pushkar ke guesthouse. Aur aap Mr. Walia, aap kuch bhi nahi karege, aap aisa koi bhi kadam nahi uthahege, jise kisi ko bhi yeh pata chale ki aap par asliyat zahir ho gayi hai. Aap dono phele ki tarah, alag alag rahege. Aur Shikha, tum bani ke saath saye thi tarah rohogi, agar koi bhi khatra lage toh mujshe contact karne. Bani aab tum aaram karo.

This relevation stunned both Jai and Bani, they decide in order to catch the real culprits they will do as they have been told by Ajay.

The scene now shifts to outside Bani's room, where all the family members have come to see her. Jigaaysa asks Jai to see Bani alone, she wants to go first.

The scene inside Bani's room. Bani is lying down quietly. Her eyes are just wondering around, until she her gaze meets Jigaaysa's eyes. The two look at each other for a moment. Jai is also present with his sister as he is not sure what to expect from her.

Bani says- Jigaaysa aunty aap?

Jiggs - Hai main, kisi hoon bani?

Bani- Theek hoon, aur aap theek hai na?

Jiggs- Bani, aaj tak maine tumhe hamesha galat samajhe, aisa koi mauka nahi chodda jahan par main tumhe neecha dekha sakhoon? Aur aaj tumhne mere Jai Bhaiya ke liya apni jaan ke parwah tak nahi ki? Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to ?

Bani too stunned to hear Jiggs actually aplogizing has tear in her eyes.

Bani says- Jigaaysa aunty, aap mere liye meri maa ke samne hai. Aur maa apne beti se maafi maangte hua acchi nahi lagti.

Jiggs is too stunned to say anything. Jai is completely taken aback from Bani's statement. Only Bani can be so nice and show no malice to the person who has been brtual and has been responsible for so many troubles and humilation in her life. For the first time Jai realizes that he is lucky to have someone like Bani as his wife. And he has to make sure that it remains that way.

Bani and Jiggs are having a tearful union as they are hugging each other for the first time. Jiggs being Jiggs has a huge evil smile when she is hugging Bani. She as usual has a hidden agenda. Only thing this time she has to be careful. Jai who is seeing the reunion is happy that finally Jiggs has changed. Since Jiggs has her back to Jai he cannot see her evil smile.

The entire family has assembled to meet Bani and they are happy to see her alive and well. They thank god for her safety and hope she is back to herself in no time. They are just joking around when the doctor comes and informs them that Mrs. Walia is recuperating well and if she continues to do so he will discharge her in no time. Everyone is happy to hear that.

The scene now shifts to Ajay who is on his way to Kandivali Police station where the suspect in the Walia case is being held. He is 10 minutes away from his destination when he recieves a call that completely stuns him.

Next thing, Ajay is shouting and barking orders into the phone, the suspect who had been arrested in the Walia case had escaped. He had done so while he was being shifted to his cell from the interrogation room. He had managed to take a revolver of a police officer and ran on foot.

Ajay asks for the direction he is heading and decides to take matter into his own hands.

The chase is on............

Will Ajay be able to apprehend the escaped suspect and the only link to finding the real culprits? Will Jai take any action against Roshini for the deceit and pain she put him through? What is Jiggs new hidden agenda? Are Jai and Bani safe?

Until Part V........

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Part-V

The chase is on though Ajay has no idea where to look. The back-up is already on the way. He thinks to his talk with Mr. Walia, he is glad he has told him almost everything, except one major fact, Ajay is definite someone in the Walia household is responsible behind Jai Walia's attack and somehow is linked to the Park Road mystery.

Ajay is now chasing a phantom, he has no clue where to look, he knows the people behind this game but he also knows if he does not provide himself with a airtight case, he will be the one with egg on his face. He knows in the world of money and power, true justice and stopping crime are a thing of past. With a person of the reputation of Jai Walia, a businessman, it is easy to have enemies because with success comes trouble and Mr. Jai Walia is no exception.

Well, sometimes people do get lucky, such was the case with Ajay as he spotted the shooter running admist the traffic with the raingods pouring like hell. Ajay saw the shooter but to do anything to catch him in a public place any wrong move and this would turn out to be a total chaotic situation.

With so much traffic Ajay decides to chase on foot. But as they say, sometimes your luck runs out, just as Ajay thought he would be able to gain some lead over his suspect. The worse happened. He saw Ajay and panicked, if he had only panicked, it would have been fine, but he fired two shots in the air and then for Ajay would became blur, with people running around. Ajay started to run, cutting through the people who were running wild, thinking something bad had again happened.

With the bomb blasts in Mumbai, a few weeks back, this seemed like another attack on Mumbai, Ajay started running towards his suspect, the man, the shooter, the most important lead in the case was again putting a lot of distance between Ajay and himself. And the it was getting huge.

Ajay started running again, this time he had one objective to catch the suspect before he disappeared again. He took out his service revolver and loaded it. It had been a long time that he had used his revolver and even longer that he had been on the field chasing a criminal. He was breathless, goddammit he said to himself, why does this have to happen to me? The rain was unrelentless and it was just impossible to look ahead.

But then he thought of Bani, his sister and the aderaline and the energy of her just propelled him to hunt and rearrest the suspect. And the chase continued. Ajay thought, once he caught this man, he would unravel the mystery and keep Bani safe. Getting Shikha into the Walia House to take care of Bani was a masterstroke and Bani's return to Walia House will give him enough leverage to take care of his gameplan.

His moves had already been planned, now he had to wait and watch where it would lead him to. He cursed himself for being lost in his thoughts, and for a moment, he had lost the plot, his suspect was still visible to him and he was gaining on him. But Ajay being Ajay always had few tricks up his sleeves decided enough is enough. And ran towards the smaller street, which will cut halfway through and he will be if not in front of the suspect already waiting for him , he will not be far behind him.

The rain was lashing on his face, his clothes completely drenched, Mud covered his new shoes and mud spots all on his trousers. What a lovely way to start the morning !! Amazing he said to himself, how he could see the lighter moment of every tense situation.

A few minutes more and then he grabbed the suspect with his both hands and literally leaped in the air so as he could not break Ajay's grip. And then started the hand to hand combat. The suspect was also a well-built man, he knew how to put up a fight and Ajay knew this would not be as easy as he thought. Wait a minute!! where the hell was his gun? And where was the suspect's gun? Ah!! wait a minute!! the leap and the guns had left both their hands and now were nowhere to be seen.

The fight was happening, Ajay hit him in the stomach, with a left jab across the shooters face. The shooter to his credit, quickly recovered and gave a right jab and kick in the stomach to Ajay. Ajay went down like a sack of potatoes. Though he tried to recover, but the shooter now had the upper hand and the tussle continued until a gun was placed on the head of the shooter leaving him with no choice but to give up and surrender himself or be shot at.

Ajay was fully covered in mud. He thought his back-up team had found him. But he was in for a surprise as the man standing in front of him was none other than Jai Walia!!!!!!!!!

Ajay was shocked and stunned at the same time. He looked at Jai and was unable to comprehend what he was feeling. He wanted to thank him for saving his life at the sametime, thousands of questions were buzzing his mind. He looked perplexed unable to understand how Jai Walia knew where to find him?

He looked at Jai Walia and said- Mr. Walia aap, yahan kasa?

Now, it was Jai Walia's turn to be worried and as much as he wanted to hide his expressions towards the question posed by Ajay, he knew he would have to come up with an answer. And any answer will not do, he had to give his reason and more importantly tell Ajay how come he knew where to find him, which also meant giving away a secret that he had been hiding for such a long time. He knew he had not done anything wrong.

Jai Walia looked at Ajay and said- Baat yeh hai ki...................

What is Jai Walia hiding? Is it anyway related to the attack and more importantly to the Park road raaz? Will Ajay be able to find out Jai Walia's mystery? Who is Shikha in reality? And more importantly, What will happen once Bani goes to Walia House?

Part-VI

Jai Walia looked at Ajay and said- Baat yeh hai ki...................

Ajay puts his hand and says - Bas Mr. Walia, main soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki aap mujshe kuch chupayange. Ab aur nahi, aap se main sach jankar rahoonga. Lekin phele esa wapas eska sasural bheej doon.

Jai Walia is completely stunned. He knows he has explaining to do. The rain is still falling hard and Jai can see for the first time everything beginning to fall apart, his world beginning to crumble and he was right in the eye of the storm not knowing how to stop it or to change its path. From everywhere he could see it was heading straight towards him and he had to do something quick to get the control and stability back in his life before the storm destoryed everything that came in its path and with it Jai Walia stood to loose everything including the people he loved and cared for. He had to either slow down the clock or change time, both of which was not possible. He decided he was left with no choice but to confess to Ajay and he had no clue how Ajay would react.

While Jai was lost in these thoughts, Ajay gave his team the exact location to of the suspect. He told Mr. Walia to leave the scene as he did not want anyone to know that Mr. Walia was involved so close to the case. He told him once everything is cleared here. He will come and see him at the Walia House. Ajay said that he cannot explain everybody how you came to know where the suspect was heading and if his team came to know it will give birth to a lot of new questions and this was not something he was equipped to deal with. He said as much as this was iilegal to let him off the crime scene, he had Bani to think off. But at the sametime he warned Mr. Walia if he did not come up clean with him then all bets were off and all hell will break loose.

Jai left the scene. Ajay's other team members came and took the suspect back into custody. Ajay asked his team to seal the crime scene and look for two revolvers which had been misplaced during the struggle. He told his team to take him back to police station and this time keep a revolver on his head while interrogating so even if he thinks to lie he will think twice. He looked at the suspect and said that he better be careful, if he pulls another stunt like this, this time he is going on his two legs but nect time he will go in a bodybag.

The scene now shifts to Walia house. It is almost 10 days since Bani had been admitted. Today, she is coming backl to the Walia house. The entire Walia house is buzzing, Jiggs is getting everything ready, she is directing everyone to get the house decorated. While everyone is happy to see a change of heart in Jiggs, Jai is still not convinced but decides to give her benefit of the doubt, for now, but reminds himself to keep a close eye on her. Ranveer is stunned to see this tries to talk to Jiggs but Jiggs snubs him and goes on doing her things. This stuns Ranveer even more.

Well, Bani finally comes home. Jai comes to recieve her. Shikha is with her. Jai comes close to Bani and helps out of the car. They look at each other and for a brief moment they are lost again in each other eye. Shikha clears her throat to give a sign like come on get on with it. They both back in reality smile and Jai holds Bani by putting his hand around her and in his arms Bani melts and they walk together towards the door.

At the door Massi with the entire family is ready with aarti so she can thank god for bringing Bani back in their lives. The festivites have just started at the Walia House. Bani is taken into her room and Jai follows her with Shikha being escorted to her bedroom.

The scene now shifts to Jai and Bani's bedroom. Jai is tucking Bani in her bed and covering her with a blanket. She looks tired. Jai has refused a 24 hour nurse to take care of Bani as he wants to do it himself. Jai asks Bani to rest and sleep for sometime. Just as Jai is leaving Bani, she surprises him by catching his hand.

Bani says- Aap thodi dar mere pas bedege, mujhe akele rahne ka maan nahi kar raha hai.

Jai looks back at her and says- Theek hai bani, main tumhare paas hi rahooga.

This comforts Bani to no end. She sleeps now knowing Jai is near her. Jai is now sitting next to Bani on the bed. Bani shifts in her sleep and in doing so her hand now lands on Jai's hand which was placed on the head of the bed. She futher shifts and has her head now completely placed on Jai's chest and her hand placed near his heart. Jai looks at this sweet turn of events and looks at his wife Bani who means the world to him. She looks like an angel and Jai loves her so much. Jai hopes this instant, this moment will never go but he knows this is too good to last.

Ajay now is at the jail and the shooter is sitting in front of him. It has been long time since he has interrogated someone much less make someone confess. He knows he has a tough job at his hand. His mind still unable to untangle so many twists and turns this case was taking and now with Jai Walia turning from nowhere right in the middle of the case took the turn for the worse. He was totally unprepared for this type of situation but he was in the middle of it and he had to deal with it. Like he use to tell himself in life you have to roll with the punches.

He looked at the shooter and said- Bas, ab aur sawal nahi, ab ya tum mujshe jawab dooga ya upar wala ko.

Then Ajay takes out his spare gun and places it in between the shooters eyes and says "OK Goodbye!!"

The shooter looks worried now as he sees Ajay in a such a role reversal and when he looks into Ajay's eye, all he can see is pure terror.

Ajay now puts his finger on the trigger and is about to pull it when the shooter reveals who had sent him.

The name sends shiver through Ajay's spine. The case has once again taken an unexpected turn a twist which even Ajay had not counted on.

Ajay now knew in order to understand what he knew he had to find what Jai Walia was hidding. Now the time had come to take his game of cat and mouse to the next level.

So,

What will happen now? Who is the person the shooter has revealed?

Part-VII

The scene shifts to the Walia House, Ajay has come to meet Jai Walia. The stunning discovery and relevation from the shooter had just given this case an unexpected turn. A turn that Ajay did not want. He would have to change his mode, from one of cool composed personality to a cold hearted investigator with no morales and highly unpredictable. One who says something, does something, means something, sees something and actually is doing something even more divergent.

Ajay knew that the nice guy act would have to stop. He enters the Walia House. Everyone is sitting and relaxing. Bani is there too and so is Shikha. Shikha sees Ajay and smiles. Ajay returns her smile. Ajay walks up to Bani and talks with her for sometime. While he is talking to Bani, he sees that Bani is more relaxed now, has started to smile more and even is laughing on his most silliest jokes this pleases Ajay to no end. As the banter and jokes with Bani continue. While all this is going on, Jai and Ajay are staring each other. Each trying to understand what the other is looking for. Jai Walia is really uncomfortable right now. Too many things are happening too soon for him. He is in a Catch-22 position. But he has no choice.

Finally Jai nods to Ajay and they both get up and speak in the corner. The sudden turn of events make Bani really uncomfortable. The thought of Jai's life still in danger is not going down well with him. But she knows as long as her Aju bhaiya is there. Both Jai and Ajay are aware that Bani's eyes are following them and will be also looking at their expressions. They cannot have this conversation here in front of the family.

Ajay looks at Shikha and she nods, they have an understanding and signals where each knows what to do when they cannot communicate openly. Shikha asks Ajay to come and see her room and also she wants to talk to him. Everyone is smiling thinking hubby-wifey tallk. They were themselves not aware how far this was from the truth.

Jai understands the signal and tells he will be back as he has to make an important business call. Bani looks unconvinced but Jai smiles at her and that puts her to ease.

The scene now shifts to Shikha's room. Here Ajay tells her of the latest development in the case and the unexpected twists. Now Shikha is worried as she cannot believe what she has just heard. And at the same time she cannot believe how right Ajay was all along. Shikha is stunned that for the first time Ajay is lost and cannot understand how to proceed on a case. But she also knows this case has hit too close to home or rather too close for comfort for Ajay and this has Ajay in two minds. While they are tossing various ideas, strategies and pros-cons of the case. Jai walia enters.

The person responsible for the Park Road and the recent attack on Jai Walia is very upset. With Ajay coming into the scene all his plans are not going to work. This person also known as " The Catcher" is one of the most dangerous opponents of Ajay and is aware of Ajay's skill as a criminal profiler and investigator.

The Catcher knows anything can go wrong and he knows one mistake and game would be over. The Catcher is a perfectionist and has been able to decieve the entire world. So close to Jai Walia yet so far. The Catcher has been a close friend of the Walia family for so long. I mean he was there when Jai was in the hospital and was not happy when he had survived. He hated Bani as Bani was always a thorn in Catcher's eyes. How she had changed Jai Walia? How Jai could only think about her?

The Catcher knew that the time had come to put his final plan into action. He cursed as instead of Jai Bani had taken the bullet. How he had hoped that the gift send to Bani - that white sari would scare her and ensure that she does something stupid and she had come and saved Jai's life. If she had died, that would have made him happy. As the Catcher knew Bani was Jai's biggest weakness.

Jai Walia enters the room both Shikha and Ajay look at him. And without anyone saying anything. Jai narrates them what he has been hiding. As he narrates the world comes crashing down for Ajay he cannot believe what he is hearing. He cannot understand why did Jai Walia did what he did? Shikha is just about had it, she may collapse anytime. She looks at Ajay and knows from his expression that nothing could have prepared Ajay to take the shock of his life after what Jai Walia had just revealed.

The picture was starting to get clearer now. The pieces were beginning to fall in place. Ajay just walked up to Jai Walia and told him not to worry he will take care of everything. Ajay was now sure of one thing that Jai Walia was not safe even in his house. Someone from the Walia house was working with the enemy. But who?

Until something struck Ajay and he knew who in the Walia House was working with the enemy. Ajay decided time had come to meet the person. He looked at Shikha and walked away. Leaving Jai Walia and Shikha staring at each other and then Jai Walia also walked. Shikha just sat down for few minutes she had to regroup herself before she went back to Bani, if Shikha showed even a ounce of worry or fear Bani would read it and then she did not know how long she would be able to keep the truth away from Bani?

Ajay walked straight into the betrayerer' s room he looked and said- "Aapko nahi lagta, ki ab waqt agaya hai, ki aap apna asli chehra duniya ko dekha de. Aakhir sabko pata to chale ki aapne aisa kyu kiya?"

The person turns around and Ajay looks straight into the eyes of Jai's mother like figure Maasi, the woman who hates Jai Walia.

Maasi looks at Ajay and says- Beta, yeh tum kya keh raho ho. Mujhe samaj main nahi aaya. Yeh kaisi baat kar raho ho. tum?

Ajay looks at Maasi- Waisa hi jaisa mujhe karni chahiye? Mr. Walia ki Maasi ki body hume aaj se 10 din phele bahoot hi karab halat me mili. Aap to Mr. Walia ki maasi nahi haan. Yeh to plastic surgery ka kamal hai. Waise mana padgega aapko, kitni saafi se aapne yeh kaam kiya hai. Bhai wah!!!!

The woman impersonating to be Maasi is stunned she tries to reason but to no end. Ajay further threatens her and she confesses. Now he knows the real person behind this, also known as "The Catcher".

Just then he walks back into the Walia house hall and is stunned to see the Catcher talking to Mr. Walia. The catcher causally looks Ajay's way and smiles Ajay smiles in return.

The way Ajay looks at the Catcher sends chill down his spine. He senses maybe Ajay knows maybe he does not.

Catcher decides it is time to increase the stakes in the game and smiles as the next surprise is about to come to Walia house in the next 15 minutes and then ...............

Until next time......

Part-VIII to continue soon......

Until then......keep reading!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gr8 stuff 👏 👏 👏
too many questions!! don't keep us in suspence too long!!
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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absolutely amazing
i can't wait for the next part
pls cont soon
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WOW..you are one hell of a writer...just Fantastic..keep up the great work...and plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Whoa!!!!

awesome story!! plz do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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no u cant leave us like this........
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Posted: 19 years ago
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New Part added would love to know ur comments.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part!! 👏 👏 👏
the suspence is still building, and i just have more and more questions in my head!
brilliant stuff
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz
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part 6 rocked! well done!

plz do continue~~!!

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oh man...that was awesome! 😃

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