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oopsi double posted 😆
Edited by Gabriella - 13 years ago
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Thanx 4 all lovely shovely comments guys….. Here is the next chapter…. Hope u liked it & enjoyed it…. happy reading

Recap: All member happily met with each other's n party was over

Chapter-3

Another meeting

Next day Vadhera mansion

6 o'clock morning

Viren & virat get ready for jogging and went to the park

CS Mansion

Sujal, Kashish, Jeevika, Manvi are also get for jog and we3nt to the park

6:30 am

Viren& Virat Saw Kashish & Jeevika are also there so they towards her

Vi & Vt: hiii Jeevika Hiii Kashish

K: what a pleasant surprise bro & says hiii

J: hi viren & hi Virat

They all are jogging together……….. Sometime later they stopped and start talking on the random topic…. To know each other's very well….for VI & VT they wanna know Kashish who is their sister or more important she is Swamini bua's daughter… kashish is also too excited to know her brothers…

K: introduce Jeevika to her brothers and told about their life in London….

Vt & Vi : also tell her about themselves..

K: she is very comfortable with them, she doesn't feel she met with them first time & Talk a lot about herself n relationship she shared with them (m,j,s).

(kashish knows about each and every family member but she never meets her brother coz when she 1 year old Sareen's were settle in Chandigarh moreover, VT &Vi also went to America for studies & they are back since 2 Year ago in the mean time she to London for her college or studies……)

Jeevika feels uncomfortable coz she doesn't know them also some she caught vi, who is staring her with corner of his eyes…

Jeevika phone rang, kashish (with her eyes ask her who is calling, jeevika say its Angad)

K: jeevs loud speaker on kar

Jeevika put her ph on loudspeaker…

J: hiii Angad

A: Hiii jeevs

A: aur ho gaye jogging, kaise ho. Tom log pahuch gaye aur kuch bataya bhi nahi..

J: are yaar kal thak gaye they to aur subha jog par aa gaye…

Vi: thinks who is he( mujhe kya farak padta hai hoga koi friend but he feel different aur bit jealous, but Why he also didn't know)

A: aura ur kashsu aur maan kaha hai…..

J kashsu ki kash yaha hai aur maan aur bhai, yeh baat tum puch rahe ho ke kaha hai…

K : haan bolo angad me yahi hu mujhe laga tum mujhe bhool gaye….

A : haan mein ek din mein sab ko bhool gaya

A: hesitantly ask…. Jeevs… yeh maan ka ph swtich off kyu aa raha hai.

J:vo………. Cut by Kash, haan tabhi mein sochu humme ph kaise kiya ph to maan ke paas aana chahiye tha…(in teasing tone)

Vt: (now its virat turn who feel jealous, no he is not, how could he but he is manvi ke close friend hoga tabhi maan bula raha hai…)

A: oye but said haan yaar maan ki aadat ho gye hai.. uske masti baate, antics everything I miss her a lot..

J: says aa jao phirse hum bahut masti karenge…

J & K: aur sab kaise hai aur Ru…

A: jeevs mein baad me baat karta hu. I have to go take care...

Cut the call

Virat: Hesitantly ask… vaise kya baat hai aap akele aaye ho jog par aapke bhai or behan so rahe hai kya…(indirectly ask about maanvi)

J & K: both together said kyun aapko shanti (peace) nahi pasand..

He didn't understand what's her meaning… kash:p cleared his doubt& told him they were with us, par jab ap hume mile the use pehle they went for a race… it's a daily routine business for M & S…

As Kashish says it A sweet sound came...(kash stands beside jeevika & boys are in front of them).she was none other than our maan who says 'Bhaiya'… I'll win this race as she was drinking water from the sipper and looked back to his brother, In the no time when everybody understand what is happening, she comes between the two & lost her balance n tripped on virat & fall on him, they rolled over one another (he fixed his gaze on her)…And she is on the top of virat.. coz of jerk viren also lost his balance & falls on jeevs & they fell on ground & viren was on the top of her(their eyes was locked)……sujal was also so fast as he wanna stop himself but it is too late & he stumble over Virika & fall on Kashish(they were lost In each other eyes)….(nobody understand what was happened in a couple of seconds)

M: she is the first who came back from the trance & ran towards the tree and said I win... I win… I win…

Yipeee………. I win the race

All of them came back to their sense & saw their awkward position and get up N stand properly… feel awkward, so they didn't eyes contact with other…

(Virat lightning the atmosphere n blame manvi)

Vt: oye tumhe dekhta nahi hai kya , God gives you 2 such a beautiful eyes but u can't see a 6 feet person in front of u….

M: so… sor…sorry…. No no no why I should say sorry… its ur fault why u were standing in the middle of the track…hmmm

S: Oh you cheater, tumne cheating ke hai, tum intentionally giri ho….

M: oh ho…ho… ho… I'm not cheater….ok…aur vaise bhi it not my fault…. Aur vaise bhi aap mujhe bahut peeche the so… cheater kehne ka koi faida nahi hai…u loose & I win this race… just admit it… hamesha me jeet ti hu phir bhi aap mujhe challenge lagate ho ab to haarna bhi sheikh lo… ok…. Aur haan ek baat aur bhi ek treat deene ki baari aaye to me cheater ho gaye …not fair bhai… itni kanjoosi bhi theek nahi hai….ek ice-cream hi to khilani hai…

S: I'm not kanjoos ok..me to….

Jeevika cut off & said: Bhai maan is right she won the race… so; you have to give us treat…

K: (shyly) say yes Jeevs & maan is right…

Now manvi is cloud nine and just start dancing & says (in teasing tone) I won. I won…

(virat pulls manvi's legs again as he is enjoying to tease her again & again)

V: Kanjoos Sujal nahi tum ho...itni rich family se belong kate ho aur ek free ki ice-cream ke liye race lagati ho…apne paise se ek ice-cream kha (eat) sakti…

M: oh hello (made a face) says Mr. Virat Vadhera right…. So, Mr V2tum mere life me interfere kyun katre ho… As for ur information I'll explain… tumne kabhi dusre ke paise par aish mari hai…, I dn't think so,….I know I belong to a very rich family but dusre ke paiso se treat lena ka maza kuch aur hi hai….

Virat just say something which is interrupted by Viren

Vi: Hold on guys, vaise manvi akele-2 khane ka maza nahi aata, agar hum bhi tumhare saath chale…

M: I have no problem aur vaise bhi mujhe aapse koi problem nahi hai aur mujhe kaunse paise dene hai, bill to bhaiya ko pay karna hai…(in teasing tone)…haina bhaiya

S: He gives look to maan & politely says to viren, I have no prob with this I'll give it in evening vo aaj maan ka sirst day hai office main and we have an important meeting , if u don't mind viren…

VT: nahi Sujal, bhaiya is just kidding…

VI: yes bro I didn't mean it cut by Sujal

(Manvi pass signal to her brother,acha hua khud man kar diya, and Sujal say don't, which is not unnoticed by virat)

S: plz we all liked it, if both of u joined us in the evening… we also got a chance to make new friends…

Vt: ok if u insist then (pass signal to viren and say yes)

Vi: stammered o…k...ok …that a good idea, we'll joined u in the evening

S: ok we'll waiting for u at 17 sec hot mealan sharp 6pm

Vi: fine... catch u in the evening…

(for virat he met a gal who is just like her bold, daring, he wants to know her more, viren agree coz of jeevika, for Sujal they are kashish's brother)

S: chale kash

(Maan & jeevs never left a chance to tease them)

M: haan haan kash ko saath le jao… jab gf saath ho th baheno ko kaun puchta hai(teasing tone) kyun dee

J: haan maan (also pull his leg) & says par.. maan humme bhi samjhna chahiye two love birds ko privacy chahiye to hum itna to apne bhiya ke liye kar sakte hai…haina… koi nahi bhaiya hum aapko bilkul disturb nahi karenge…

M: haan di theek keh rahe ho.. koi baat nahi …Ab akele jaana padega... bechari do ladkiya ko… but u don't worry we'll manage.. aapke pyaar ki khatir itna to kar sakte hai..

J: maan aisa nahi hai koi na koi to hum massom jaan ko lift de dega… hum ghar pahuch he jayenge…

(viren & virat was hell shocked after hearing them)

S: gives them a kill u look(wanna pull their ears) but doesn't say anything coz of Viren & virat who are smirking on hearing the convo between them…and kash also blushed very badly coz of bro who just staring her….

Viren; jeevs oh sorry jeevika ho sakta hai aapko bhi na pasand ho mani ki taraf ki koi aapka pet name le... aap kaho to hum aapko drop kar sakte hai..

Jeevs: no problem u can call me by this name aur nahi viren hum to Mazak kar rahe the bhai aur maanbike se jayenge aur me or kash car jaise hum aaye the…

VI: ok then bye….

All says bye to each other & take leave from the park… went towards their houses….

CS bullions Pvt. Ltd.

It was a big organization, today manvi joined the office... all the family members & staff was too happy N cordially & whole heartily accepted her as a new member(Sujal, kashish, jeevika prepare a luxurious cabin as per her taste)… she super excited for her very first day… whole organization firstly celebrate n give her warm welcome…

All of them help her and make her understand how, when, what she will do… some moment later all were gone to their work….

5 pm office was closed n all are left…

6 pm S,J,M,K all are ready for treat given by Sujal as well as celebrating her joining….

S: jaldi karo yaar vo log hamara wait kar rahje honge…

M: bhai unhone khud ko invite kiya hai mujhe viren se koi prob nahi hai par virat pata nahi ky a samjhta hai… mujhe kajoos keh aha tha mauka(chance) mila taiyar ho gaya free ki ice-cream khane ko..

S: chod maan… acha bike se hi chalna hai na

M: haan bhai..

J: aap bike nikalo hum car se aate hai… chalk ash…

Hot Mealan

All were reached there at the same time….entered & take their seats…greeted each other except Virman…

Waiter: put water on the table…

S: take the order

M: excitedly one chocolate, 1 black current, 2 butter scotch 7 look at viren she says… sorry guys I don't know about ur taste so…

Vi: it's ok look AT WAITER N SAYS 2 BLACK FOREST PLZ…

Waiter: take their order & leave

Vi: aur manvi kaisa raha tumhara pehla din

M: baat acha meri saath meri family thi bhai, dii, kash the to mast he hona tha… vaise aap bahut sweet hai kuch log jaise nahi jinhe kisi se baat karna bhi nahi aata hai…& mummered aur free ka khane aa jate hai

S: heard this looks at her & rasise his elbow… pass a signal no

M: sorry in low voice which is hear only by him

Vi: Thamx manvi… u r also so sweet…. Cut by virat

Vt: vaise sahi kaha maaanvi…. Ab kuch log arrogent hote hai aur kuch log bahut sweet..(viren pinched him)

M: aapne mujhe arrogant kaha

Vt: nahi meri itni himmat… me to jeevs ko sweet keh raha hu

J: thanx

M: vo to hai, meri di sweet hai vo puri duniya me ek unki jase aur koi nahi9 hai.

(virat was amazed…& thinkshe is sweet & innocent…. Use pata bhi nahi chala me use he… his eyes was fixed on her again…. )

Waiter came & put ice-cream on the table….. All of them enjoying their ice-cream n talking with each other…..

CS mansion

Swamini, Pankaj, Madan, Pinky, Beeji, Daar Ji all are seating in the garden area & talking with each other (it was a daily routine, when Daar Ji, Madan, Pankaj came back to home, they gave some time to their family n talking about day they spend in office n female member talking as well..)

Today Swamini & Pankaj was decided to share something with chaudhari….

S & P: gives hint that they like Sujal very much as a son and they are interested to make their 'Damad' (son- in -law)…

After hearing this all chaudhari was tensed & pinky was pale at the moment &

(all of them known very well about the relationship they share with each other, both were liked each other since childhood and now they are in love….Sareen were happy coz Sujal is best for her daughter.. & this marriage helps in making strong bonding between them…)

Pinky cleverly moulds the topic & talking about manvi… today was her first day…etc….some time later they all were goes back to their room…. All chaudhari directly goes to Daar Ji's room to discuss about Sujal & kashish… why she changed the topic…. All chaudhari also like Kashish very much but…as a daughter or as Bahu also… but be'coz of Sujal's past they keep quite at that moment…

Daar Ji: beta humme unhe sach batana padega…. Shayad humme unse yeh baat kabhi chupani chahiye the… hum to sab pehle se jaante ki Sujal aur kashish ek dusre ko pasand karte hai…

BeeJi: tumhare Daar Ji ek dum sahi keh rahe hai ab job hi ho yeh baat khul gaye hai to unka ye jaanne ka pura haq hai…

D: haan aur phir vo job hi decision lenge hum unki puri respect karenge….ok

P & M: agree with them…par is bare mein bacho ko nahi pata lagna chahiye…

D & B: haan…. To theek hai hum kal he unse is bare me baat karenge personaaly milkar Sareen aurVadheras ke sath…

P: she is scared now what happened 2morrow… she knows her son couldn't lived without kashish…

At hot Mealan

Sujal phone rang

M: beta tumhe aor maan ko aaj ise waqt delhi ke liye nikalna hoga…

S: kya hua Dad.. hum kal he aaye hai aur aaj jana I mean.. koi aur bahi ja sakta kya

M: no beta tum logo ko hi jana paega... badi deal hai & I cann't trust anybody else… u understand na…

S: yes dad… don't worry

Madan says keep the on loud speaker & Sujal do it the same…

M: beta vo client ek baar contract dekhna chate hai… samples varega… aur hum chate hai maan tumhare saath jaye vo tumse kuch sekhege…aur haan kash or jeev ko mumbai ke liye nikalna hoga vo london wale client aa rahe hai.. aur vo unhe ahce se handle kar lenge yeh dono unse deal kar chuke hai to unhe bhi koi prob hogi…

Maan interrupt n sat Dad (in teasing tone) mein aur Dii chale jaate hai London wale client ke pass I mean Mumbai aur bhai or bha… I mean kash Delhi chale jayenge…

M: (sternly said) no have to leave at this moment… (All of them shocked)

S: dad is there any prob

M: firmly says sorry maan humara matlab tha ki vaise to tum hamesha kehte ho bhaiya se kaam sheekunge aur aaj chalo agar aise baat hai to tum chali jao jeevs ki saath(madan knows her)

Maan: no why u say sorry hota hai we do't mind…. Very sweetly aap pareshan ho koi nahi ab hum aa gaye hai sab theek kar denge ab aap business ki tension mat lo hum sab hai na…

M: beta pareshan tha par ab nahi hu…tumse baat arne ki baad koi pareshan reh sakta hai.. acha tum log nikalne ki taiyari karo tumhara luggage or passport or ticketairport par bhij va diya hai… aur kash or jeevs private plane jayenge to unka waha…ok…

All of them ok

J: maan sahi keh rahi haiu don't worry

K: haan uncle we'll handle this… trust us'…

M:I trust all of u beta…phir nikalne ki taiyari karo… all the best…

S,K,J,M: thank you….

(Viren & virat again impress by them once again)

All of them bit good bye to each other viren & virat says all the best guys… & see u later…& left the place…

Sujal & maan goes by bike and kash & jeev by their car & viren & virat also by their car…… all of them reached their destination…

Precap: truth revealed in front if everyone…excluding all children….

Thanx 4 reading it guys…. Hit the like button if u liked it N give ur comments as suggestion or criticism…both welcome... sorry 4 making it too long spare me guys...

Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago
yipee...me first😊
it was an awesome update...
i like race scene very much...
hope that serene will accept sujal
continue soon😊😛😉



Edited by avika26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update..loved every part of it...continue soon n thanks for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this part. Virman fight is always so nice. Waiting for the next update. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update So Cute
VirMan Nok Jhoks Aww So Cute
Sujal's Past???? Curious
Updte Soon And PM Me Please
Thanks x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for the pm😃
So worried about the secret they are going to reveal...😲 Really worried for Sujal and Kashish I really like them, they are so sweet together!!!!!!!!!!😃
Omg..Virat and Manvi passing hints at each other..they are never going to grow up😆
Virat already bugging Viren about Jeevika..sooo sweeet😃
The scene at the park was fun😆 Everyone one top of each other😆
Eagerly waiting to know the secret about Sujal's past, hope it won't affect their relationship
Hugzzz❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update, continue soon!

pm me when u do pls...
.YaJuShI. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for being late dis tym
it was as usual mind blowing 👏
keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
tat was really awesome update:)👏
manvi is really sweet.😊..nd virat...he dont leave any chance to tease her:)😉
the park scene was really lovely:)😳
plzzz pm me as u update:)🤗

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