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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

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saucechips

@saucechips

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

So i am back!!Finally..

and i am first!🥳

Your OS was such a pleasant read. You know, in the first half, i was like, how is ASR being so sweet to her in the first go. From a man like him, i would expect a 'mind your own damn business' when she asked if she could lean against the car..As the end was approaching i got this feeling like perhaps he knows her from before and bingo! the end was just beautiful! Kudos to you for having the interest piqued and maintaining it right till the end. 👏

'Why don't you go to her and make her remember or start fresh yourself?', Khushi found herself asking. She heard him look down towards his feet as if trying to hide the pain. 'I don't want to trouble her that way. You could say I'm scared', he chuckled but continued. 'I always believed that if we're meant to be, she'd come across me herself one day'. Khushi stared at his face, his face which showed nothing but emotions. All sorts of emotions. Pain, happiness, she could also make out he was scared. It all confused her. She couldn't help feel her heart aching along with his. She kept staring at him and Arnav could tell she was trying hard to recall something. Anything.

That was truly touching😳lovely one shot!

a big 🤗for the pm.

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SazMob1234

@SazMob1234

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

I loved it, especially the last part! 👏❤️

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farha

@farha5556

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

ohhh i loved the update.i want a second part of this plsss.what kushi say?what will be her reaction?how they fall in love?how she met with accident?what is their past,prsent and future?i want to know every thing,continue soon.

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

-Res-

On the first page ! 😎

-Unres-

I haven't unresed this post yet ?!

I am so very sorry ! Always thought I'd already given my views on how amazingly superbly awesome this OS is !

Knowing Arnav, its hard to imagine a man like him would allow an interruption , that too by a stranger that too during the moments he was vulnerable, in pain.

But then, how couldn't he ? It was Khushi, HIS Khushi

Again shows the depth with which this man loves... Heart warming yet heart-wrenching..

Absolutely LOVED it. Period. And when in the end he says "Khushi Kumari Gupta"

You just HAVE to continue ! And SOON ! And PM me. First please 😛

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Bani

@BBani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Wonderfully written! 👏

You've got a very fresh writing! 😊
Do PM me for such works! 👍🏼

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Isha

@tereliyex

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Awww it was lovely
I was smiling like an idiot at the end !

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Deboleena Chakraborty

@Deb_05

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

😳😳Awww!!! This was lovely!!! I just loved it throughout!!! 👏👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

so hse had for gotten hum huh
thats why she was attrcted towards him and she knew he was in pain
man that was sad but it is true something like this does happen
but its different from cases to case
baeutiful os though
cheers for pm