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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everybody, i present to u my very first OS and the very first thing I've written ALONE in my life!!
I was very hesitant on posting it but two of my really great friends "convinced" me!!
so i would like to dedicate this too Belli and Mani!!



~UNDYING~LOVE~

Khushi was out of breath, sweating, heaving in pain. But she knew this was worth it.
It took only one moment. One night to change her life forever...for good.
**FLASHBACK**
Khushi stepped out of the bathroom ravished in red from top to bottom. It was his favourite color and he loved it even more when it was adorning his wife.
She couldn't help but smile looking at the beautifully decorated room. There were streamers of roses hanging from the ceiling, circling the bed and a heart, made using rose petals, lay on the center of the mattress.
Lightly touching a string, her heart raced back to all the moments they had spent together. From the day she fell into his arms to when he forcefully married her, all she had gotten from him was hate.
But through that hatred, she realized, love never failed to shine. Love defeated hate once again and ASR had changed. He seemed like a different human being, who was bestowed with a new life to relish. He was now Arnav, her Arnav.
She broke out of her revere when she felt two strong hands grip her waist. A jolt went up her spine as she was pulled against his broad chest. He wrapped one arm around her waist and with the other he moved her long, silky ebony hair to the other side of her shoulder. Shivers ran up her spine as he nuzzled her neck.
He worked his way up her neck to her ear and whispered.
"Beautiful.."
She smiled...a shy smile.
The ground left her feet as she was lifted up in the arms of her husband and was gently placed on the bed.
He climbed up on top of her like a hungry lion and the nervousness didn't fail to appear on her porcelain like face.
"Khushi everything will be fine," he spoke.
He bent down and captured her soft lips into his. He nibbled her lower lip and slowly that gentle kiss turned into a passionate one as both ravished the moment.
He bit her lower lip and she moaned in pleasure.
In matter of minutes clothes were abandoned and desire filled the air as they both made love to each other. The night had turned magical and the stars shone even brighter.
***
She lay in his arms; her head placed on his chest as she hummed a sweet melody. Arnav caressed her arm while thinking back to the moments they had spent together. The countless moments he brought tears in her hazel eyes which spoke volumes and beheld so much emotion. The countless times he had deliberately hurt her.
"Khushi, I'm sorry," Arnav spoke.
"Sorry, for what?" she questioned.
"Sorry for breaking that pearl string on the first day we met, sorry for making you work day and night to satisfy my ego, sorry for forcing you into this marriage, sorry for not believing you...not trusting you. I'm really sorry," he chocked as a lone tear ran down his cheek.

Khushi cupped his face. "You don't need to be sorry for anything. This marriage is the best thing that has ever happened to me. You are the best thing that ever happened to me," she said as she wiped the tears away.
"I love you...forever and always."
"I love you too."
**END OF FLASHBACK**
Time had flown by. And with time, their love had augmented. Arnav loved and cherished his wife a great amount. He did for as long as he lived. His love was boundless.
Arnav Singh Raizada passed away in a horrible car accident one month ago leaving his family and an eight month pregnant wife behind. A wife who was now a mother. A mother of a beautiful child. Their son. The symbol of their eternal love.
"Arnav ji...he looks just like you. You will be just like your Papa," she giggled.
But she couldn't stop the tears, the pain of not having him by her side...it was unbearable. "I miss you. But I will be strong for Di, Nani and our son."
"I love you...forever and always. Because our love...it is undying."



I'm really sorry if this was horrible LOL!!
i tried!!

PS: if u enjoyed reading it, please like and comment!!



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Carabelli5 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES
EDIT
So first of even before i opened the OS i knew the topic since i know my Zobie so well ☺️
Second coming to the writing. NO ONE would be able to tell this is your first solo OS, it says experienced writer SO LOUD AND CLEAR. I loved the subtle sadness, yet the shear love that eminates from each and every word.I am just so porud of you Zoha and looking forward to much more amazing work by you.
And and and THEY HAD A BABY...a junior ARNAV but ARNAV DIED😭. Its so sad but i loved it cuz i am a sadist 😈
and i am first sort becuae i cheated bahahha! but still yeah
and AWWW YOU DEDICATED IT TO ME AND MINI but why? ...THANK YOU🤗
I love ya baby Zobie ji ❤️
PS. Bonus points for the blue 😳
Edited by Carabelli5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hate you Belli. You took away my first spot. *ready to wear Cat Woman costume and attack Belli*
But...I was the first one to read it anyway...*sticks tongue out*
Bahahahahahahahahahhaha...

ZO !!!!!!!

You finally posted it !
YAY!
*jumps and dances around*
*hits head on wall*
OUCH!
Bahahahahahahaha...I am so funny...NOT...

I told you it is AWESOME !!!!
I LOVE it sooo much and it is so sad yet so beautiful...*blows nose in tissue*
Wonderfully written! And you finally posted it !
And you dedicated it to Belli and me. Awww...I LOVE YOU DAMMIT !
Keep writing more ! And more. And more. And more.

Mani <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Edited by -Manal.A- - 13 years ago
-zozo- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks sooo much u two muahh i love u guys!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -zozo-

thanks sooo much u two muahh i love u guys!!


LOVE YOU MORE!
Carabelli5 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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REMEMBER
My JIGARR KA TUKRA AND MY KIDNEY ABHAHAHAHAHHA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res babe! Will edit soon! :)
--Edit--
Main sach me tujhe maar daalne waali hoon aaj... seriously. My Arnie baby... dead...? Waaahhh-hahh-ha!!! :( My eyes are moist... tu humesha mere laad governor ke peeche kyun padi rehti hai?😭 In your Betwixt os also you're hurting him...😭 not fair!😭😆 Lol! don't worry, I'm just joking!
This was simply SUPERB sweetheart! I have no idea why you were so hesitant to post it on the forum! It was just WONDERFUL!!!! 🤗 (Although yes, I wish Arnav hadn't been dead, but I guess that's what adds to the essence of the story, doesn't it?)
Continue to write jaaneman! You're fabulous!!!! And this comment doesn't even sum up all my feelings for this OS... because I simply can't! You made me blush, you made me smile and you made me cry, all in one OS!!! You really have a talent for writing dear, and you should definately explore it and experiment by writing more OS's, SS's and FF's!😳
You have all my love and encouragement for the future!
Hugs and kisses,
Sanju
Edited by -Sanjana- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES!!

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OMG Z!! You wrote an OS!! 🤗

Firstly I LOVE the title!! Amazing!! ❤️

The flashback was HOT HOT HOT!! Nice!! 😳

And aww...I LOVED this quote: "Khushi cupped his face. "You don't need to be sorry for anything. This marriage is the best thing that has ever happened to me. You are the best thing that ever happened to me," she said as she wiped the tears away."

OMG the end was so sad...Arnav died..😭 😭 😭 That was so sad!! But there was Junior Arnav!!

And the title makes so much sense now...UnDYING Love!!

Amazingly written Z! 👏

I love it!

Love you!

Tara ⭐️
Edited by -Smiles- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was sad but beautifully written...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seriously girl you killed Arnav in an accident, leaving a preggo wife...that too in ur first OS...wow...
It was going sooo well and then boom...I know life is not fair always...loved ur writing...waiting to read some more of ur creations , all the best...
Thanks for the PM..

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