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With this, I am completing 2500 posts😃 Am so happy to become an IF Dazzler, so here's a new OS!!!

The rain drops were battling against the car that Arnav Singh Raizada was driving after a long and tiring day at work. He had only one wish, that of getting back home the soonest possible to have a mush deserved rest for a business tycoon like him. The rainy weather had created a foggy atmosphere on the roads, and a gloominess that was coupled by the falling night. Arnav suddenly slowed down at the sight that was offering in front of him - a sight that had the power of diffusing sunshine and warmth around him.

Spinning around, a girl, who looked in her twenties, was extending her hands in the rain, collecting the water drops and throwing them playfully. Dressed in a white Salwar Kameez which was adorned by a pink border, she was truly looking like an angel who was fully enjoying herself in the rain, and smiling profusely. Arnav could not resist staring at her – her bubbly nature, the spark in her eyes, her amusing acts in the rain – so much so that he stopped the car. He did not know what had happened but he just could not remove his eyes from that girl who left a bewitching impact on him.

Arnav had always devoted his life into working hard to meet his family's needs after his parents' death, and consequently, he had missed the little pleasures and moments that define happiness. And when he saw that girl, an overwhelming sensation awakened deep within him - she was the definition of life, the epitome of happiness. He felt the sudden urge of approaching her, asking her what her name was, and even joining her into playing with the raindrops.

His dreamy moment was soon disrupted by a phone call, which caused him to frantically switch off his phone without even looking at the number. By the time he looked back at the girl, she was gone – nowhere to be seen. Arnav dashed out of his car, getting drenched and roamed around to find her but his attempts were vain as it was night and he did not know a single thing about her. Suddenly, his eyes fell on a glittery object that was lying in the same place where she was dancing around and Arnav bent down to lift it up – her payal. He held it tightly in his hand, feeling a weird magnetic connection to it.

Once home, Arnav was scolded by his Anjali Di for being careless and not replying to her phone calls, but Arnav evaded the matter and rushed to his room. Flashbacks of the girl run through his mind at supersonic speed, which only confirmed his resolve at finding her.

"Why I am feeling so strange? Why am I seeing her repeatedly? It is the first time that Arnav Singh Raizada is getting restless for a girl, and that too a girl who came and just vanished without me even knowing her name! My mystery girl!"

The first thing Arnav did the next morning was to rush back to the same place where he had seen his mystery girl, with the hope that she must be living around there. But without any proper information about her, it was difficult to ask about her whereabouts to the neighbourhood. Frustrated at the idea of never ever meeting her again, he went back to his car when he suddenly heard a voice asking time after time:

"Have you seen a payal lying here? It is silvery and has got small stars dangling!!! No?…ok thank you"

With a feeling of hope resurfacing, Arnav turned around and to his biggest joy, found his mystery girl walking and stopping each passer-by. He moved towards her and initiated a conversation:

"Hi…I thought I would never see you again after yesterday!"

Khushi's face showed a sudden glow, and a beaming smile paved its way to her face.

"Hmm Hi…sorry but what do you mean?"

"Woh yesterday, you were here playing in the rain…and…"

"You came here yesterday? You saw me?"

"Before continuing any further, let me introduce myself first! I am…" Arnav said before being interrupted by the mystery girl

"Arnav Singh Raizada!" she uttered with confidence.

"Right, but how do you know my name?" asked Arnav.

She just smiled and ran as quickly as possible.

Arnav was left dumbfounded at the speed at which she had fled – she had once again vanished in thin air. This only deepened his thought of calling her 'Mystery Girl'. What annoyed him the most was that he did not even know the name of her mystery girl! He could not even give her back her payal! How come does she know my name, he thought, but then immediately guessed that she must have seen him in the business news.

Part 2 is just below!!! Press the like button and leave your comment!!!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Memories of the mystery girl were occupying his mind for hours and he could only see her everywhere. Yes, he had fallen head over heels in love! Trying to work on his laptop in his room, he suddenly heard a familiar voice in Raizada Mansion – it was her mystery girl's voice. But what was she doing his house? He rushed down the stairs to find out and smiled when he saw her standing in the living room.

"Bitiyaan..I am so happy to see you after so long! You have grown up so much!" Arnav's Nani uttered while giving a hug to the mystery girl.

"You? I have looked for you everywhere! Where did you disappear again?" Arnav asked.

Everyone looked at Arnav with surprised expressions.

"Chottey, you met her before?" asked Anjali.

"Yes Di, two times…but wait a minute, how come do you all know her?" a curious Arnav asked.

"If you had answered your phone call and given me some attention, you would have known!" Anjali said before giggling and prompting everyone to leave Arnav and the mystery girl alone.

"What the hell is happening here?" asked Arnav.

"The fact is that everyone here knows me and even you do!" Khushi said.

"Yeah, I know you…I mean I've seen you but I don't know much about you!"

"Of course, you do!"

"What do you mean?"

"You know me since I was five…Mr Arnav Singh Raizada, I am Khushi…Khushi Kumari Gupta"

Silence prevailed for a moment when realisation struck upon Arnav that her mystery girl was Khushi…that Khushi whom he had played with in his childhood…his best friend…the same Khushi with whom he had shared so many memories…the Khushi who he had to leave at the age of thirteen after his parents' death because he wanted to escape from the daunting death of his parents in Lucknow. Arnav wanted to bury his past which had become painful. Since then, he had never ever seen her or even heard from her.

A lone tear dropped down his cheek, which he immediately wiped before saying:

"Khushi…I haven't even recognised you! My plump Khushi has become such a ravishing woman."

Khushi blushed at Arnav's words, and let out a sly smile.

"How are you here? I mean after so many years?" asked Arnav.

"We have shifted to Delhi last week…Amma and Babuji have found out that you were all in Delhi and managed to get your home number! They phoned Naniji to tell her that we would be coming! I missed you Arnav! Why have you never contacted me? I know why you left Lucknow and the pain you've gone through…I just wanted you to know that I would always be there as a friend!"

"I was completely shattered after Maa and Paa left us…I just wanted to start afresh in a new place…I felt like escaping…I know you have always been my best friend and that you would have given me support but I don't know why I wanted to be left alone! And Khushi, I want more than just your friendship…when I have seen you on that rainy day, I felt an immediate connection to you and you can't imagine how I had become restless to meet you!"

Arnav slowly approached Khushi, and holding her hand, he revealed:

"I love you Khushi…I loved you as a friend in childhood but now I love you as my mystery girl…I want you to be there always in my life." Arnav expressed and removed the payal out of his pocket and tied it to Khushi's ankle, sealing a new bond between them.

Khushi did not know how to react…She had always loved Arnav and after he had left Lucknow, not once did she ever forget him. Deep down, she had always clutched to hopes that she would meet him again and that day came…how surprised she was to see him presenting himself as Arnav Singh Raizada. She had followed his path to becoming one of the most successful young businessmen in the headlines and that's how she had recognised him. Destiny had made their ways cross yet again.

Just at that moment, the whole family came back to the living room and announced that they had fixed Arnav's and Khushi's wedding only if they agreed of course, in that way they would be turning the friendship between the two families into a relationship. Without losing any second, Arnav shared that he was most willing to make Khushi his wife while Khushi just blushed, showing her approval.

"I love you mystery girl…hmm no…now you are no longer a mystery to me…I love you Khushi!" Arnav whispered in Khushi's ears.

His confession was soon reciprocated by Khushi who was drowning in happiness of becoming Mrs Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada while Arnav finally felt that his life was complete with all the happiness that Khushi was bringing alongside.

Done!!!😃 Likes and comments please!!!😳

Edited by tash10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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54s

EDIT**
I meant to write res 😛

EDIT***

OMG, TASHU! This was damn awesome⭐️ I am still in a dreamland, I think 😍
I still can't believe Arnav Singh Raizada would be awestruck by a girl dancing in the rain😍 The way you have described the entire scene is simply PERFECTION ⭐️ I just kept humming, 'Kabhi Baarishon mein bheegi to mehak uthi, teri meri love stories'☺️
OH GOD!! Why is di always a disturberrr!!!🥺 Awwwn, poor Arnav baby, he lost her. NEHEEE😭
OMG! He went back there. Such a despo😆 Seriosuly, Arnav being in love in the BEST thing ever😳
DAMN! Mystery girl ran again. Iss mystery girl ko kya naam doon🤣
OMG! Best friends for life. SO DAMN CUTE. Limits. #tears😭

Originally posted by: tash10


"I love you Khushi'I loved you as a friend in childhood but now I love you as my mystery girl'I want you to be there always in my life." Arnav expressed and removed the payal out of his pocket and tied it to Khushi's ankle, sealing a new bond between them.


Aww, they got together. I love these people. they make me cry even in FF's😳

DAMN TASHU, you should become a Dazzler every day. Such awesomeness? ❤️

Shrey!! I am first. BLLL😛


AND AND AND, one more thing😃

Edited by -Zana- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EDIT
Tashu congo for becoming an IF DAZZLER 🤗 I hope u dazzle on this forum now LOL 😆
sorry couldn't edit at that time .. I told u the reason 🥱
nothing could have cheered me up other than your OS ..

OMG!! see u have become a dazzler and we are getting the treat ..

arnav finally found his MYSTERY GIRL .. 😳
Arnav had LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT aww 😳 the way u described his feelings was just perfect..
and this time destiny too was with them ..she was his childhood best friend .. 😍
your OS always brings a LARGE GRIN on my face ..

this is for you 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
SUPERAWESOME OS.. 😃
you are a rock ⭐️ ...

PS: Zana don't be soo happy ... just watch out next time..today was just not my day..🤣

Edited by aaliyahassan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES After im done reading!


EDIT: My first reaction:

Saw a girl, fell in love and is now getting married all within a span of less than 2 days 😆

That was a really cute story though! I found it nice and light, and very entertaining! Your descriptions were well done, especially his thought process in the rain!


Congratulations on becoming a Dazzler! 🥳

Your story dazzled me! (yes lame joke, is lame)
Edited by Crazy_1001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all...
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have to greet you 😳
CONGO tash!!!😃😊


And nice OS 😊 ... i lliked it ...😉

thank you for the PM as well😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Awesome
Loved it😳
Edited by Muskaan.Musky - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zana-

54s


EDIT**
I meant to write res 😛

EDIT***

OMG, TASHU! This was damn awesome⭐️ I am still in a dreamland, I think 😍
I still can't believe Arnav Singh Raizada would be awestruck by a girl dancing in the rain😍 The way you have described the entire scene is simply PERFECTION ⭐️ I just kept humming, 'Kabhi Baarishon mein bheegi to mehak uthi, teri meri love stories'☺️
OH GOD!! Why is di always a disturberrr!!!🥺 Awwwn, poor Arnav baby, he lost her. NEHEEE😭
OMG! He went back there. Such a despo😆 Seriosuly, Arnav being in love in the BEST thing ever😳
DAMN! Mystery girl ran again. Iss mystery girl ko kya naam doon🤣
OMG! Best friends for life. SO DAMN CUTE. Limits. #tears😭

Aww, they got together. I love these people. they make me cry even in FF's😳

DAMN TASHU, you should become a Dazzler every day. Such awesomeness? ❤️

Shrey!! I am first. BLLL😛

Zana, you are first!!!😆 I was betting who among the two would reach here first, thought it would be Shreya because she's damn fast at reserving!!!Embarrassed
OMG Zana...how can you write such cute and awesome comments!!!❤️ I love reading them!!!😃 A squashing hug to you!!!🤗🤗
Aww, I like that song as well although I don't watch Teri Meri Love stories!!!Tongue
I think I should have titled the OS as Iss Mystery Girl Ko Kya Naam Doon seriouslyROFL
Haila:O Ask Shreya, I was meant to study today and here I am writing an OS!!!
I love you hun!!!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🥳first of all congo for becoming green tashu darling.🤗.love u soo much🤗

🥳become IF-Dazzler b keep on dazzling my cutiepie !!😊🤗
Congratulations





wow😛 what a mindblowing os? its just brilliant 👏
loved each n every part dear🤗
loved it !! loved it !!😳
really arnav 's mystery girl ll b khushi 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazy_1001

RES After im done reading!


EDIT: My first reaction:

Saw a girl, fell in love and is now getting married all within a span of less than 2 days 😆

That was a really cute story though! I found it nice and light, and very entertaining! Your descriptions were well done, especially his thought process in the rain!


Congratulations on becoming a Dazzler! 🥳

Your story dazzled me! (yes lame joke, is lame)

OMG at that reaction 🤣🤣 Yeah, I know it went quick!!! But what to do, Arnav is irresistible na?☺️🤣
Thank you dear for the comment!!!<3 Am glad you found it cute!!!😃
Aww, thanks for the congrats wish!!!🤗 Hehe, so glad to know that my story dazzled you!!!😆 And no, it's not lame!!!😉

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