Bye bye Anjali, was nice knowing you *edit* - Page 15

Ben, this is it - short and sweet.

Let's see-

1) We are waiting a year for the love of iss PYAAAR to take off and it gets shafted by the family coming to the door - I mean really - do the CVs not understand that the moment where Khushi accepts ASR as her husband is HUGE? Not only to have it gleekawat'd but to have the worst gleekawat of all time with mami as a side kick does not for a sympathetic (oh no the cursed word) make.

2) What is Anjali feeling? One day she wants to kill baby, next day she is naming baby Shyam the 2nd, one instance she says Chotte you thought of me and that's enough, next second you liar why are you romancing your wife instead of coming to the satsang...and no i will hear no explanations because how else are the CVs supposed to drag out this forced drama so they can bring their most prized character in the serial - the twitchtacular Shyam

3) Is there paralleling? Everything is hanging in midair with bad execution.

Again - no one disagrees that Anjali needs to be shown because her life is hugely impacted by shyam being thrown out - but her reactions are nonsensical and manipulative and therefore when inserted in between the climax of the love story leave the viewer...hmmm, for lack of a better phrase, reaching for the remote.

I don't care about wonderful symbols in the story if I can't see the story.

Hi Puja,

She is absolutely clingy by nature. She was always the unstable one. The issue here is not that. The issue here is how to handle her track in a manner in which they maintain her character without sacrificing the saccharine sweetness that also defines her.

What has he done that is so horrible. He went after her in the hospital. When he was with his wife in the privacy of their own room, she had a problem. That is over the line with the clingy. He allowed her to keep the flowers and she threw them to the floor - that did not translate at clingy, it translated as disturbing. I 100% would understand if she felt neglect because yes, besides Shyam, her brother is the most important person in her world, but the execution is horrible. And if he is one of the most important person in the world to her, where is her concern for his kidnapping...shyam left and poof, that left too? I pitied her situation and always did because she was so dependent on everyone and everyone handled her with kid gloves because of her mental instability (THE PAST SHOULD BE SHOWN NOW SO WE UNDERSTAND WHY SHE IS LIKE THIS - I would have loved for the family to discuss how maybe Anjali has tried to kill herself before marriage after her broken wedding but nooo, that is too forward probably) but now, I don't pity her because she is hurting her brother and she on some level knows it.

kidnaping had to be dragged ... n wen it execution i think ... the actors i pretty good to execute stuffs ... n if u complain abt cvs now ... then dude . they keep on writting one story of one serial for lyk everyday wich continues till 1 or 2 years (till the serial runs) ,... wat do u expect they cant run outta idea ! then y bash anjali for no reason .. she is i find very realistic ... ladies in real life u wont find so sacrifising bla bla ...but indeed shes hurt .. and she being pessimistic i dont find anything wrong in it