FF: kissa Jai Bani kaa (Parts 1-5 update)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi,

I would like ot thank everyone for thier patience and support..had to reload all the parts and that took some time...but with your encouragement have managed to complete the fanfic till part 5 ...so keep your comments coming in ..enjoy!!!!

ATTN: Just read a couple of requests to keep all the parts together...so have edited my 1st post and added the parts just to keep them together.....

ch1 :pg 1

ch2-5: pg 6

Sunshine

Hi,

This is my first attempt at writing a FF.....but looking at the way things are going...I could not resist writing one...this is in both english and hindi.....please excuse any mistakes and typos....all comments are most welcome....though just be a bit gentle on me........

My FF begins at the episode when Pushkar goes to Baani after being kicked out by Jai out of the outhouse......

Part 1 Summary: Baani confronts Pia about her decision. Pia retorts that its herpersonal decision and Bani has no rights to question it as she has taken apersonal decison herself regarding her child without consulting Mr Walia....Baniis forced to stay the night at Walia residence ...Jai makes a startlingproposition to Bani to help solve both their problems... Pushkar enters the guesthouse and shows Baani the report. He tells Baani aboutPia getting the baby aborted .Baani is stunned and sits down speechless. Pushkarthen goes on to tell her that everything is over.... Pushkar: ek raat mein meri saari zindagi badal gayi .....Pia ne mujhe barbaadkar diya Baani.Meine uske liye kyaa kuch nahin kiya...har baar maine usse khushrakhne ki koshish ki. Uske liye maine Jai sir se dushmani mod li...meri jobchali gayi..mera parivaar mujhshe bicchad gaya....lekin har baar meine yahichahaa ki mein Pia ko khush rakhoo... usse pyaar doon.... aur aaj usne mere ussipyaar ka galaa ghot diya..... haa Baani .....yahi meri sabse badi galati thi.......mai hamesha yahi sochta tha ki mein Pia se kitna pyaar kartaa hoon....lekin meine ye kabhi nahi socha ki kyaa Pia mujhse pyaar karti hain??? Bani: Naahi Pushkar...tum aise mat socho...dekho mein jaanti hoon ki Pia tumsebahot pyaar karti hain..... Pushkar:Nahi Bani, sach baat toh yeh hai ki Pia ne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya hinahi....arre... woh kissi se pyaar nahi kar sakti...woh sirf ek insaan se pyaarkarti hai...behad pyaar ...aur woh insaan hai- Pia....haan Pia sirf apne aap sepyaar karti hai....naa usne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya aur na Jai sir se....usneJai sir ke paise, shaurat aur naam se pyaar kiyaa.....lekin jab usne dekha kimain bhi usse bahot pyaar karta hoon toh usse lagaa ki shayaad...... mujhse bhiwoh sab kuch haasil kar sakti hai jo woh Jai sir se karna chahatithi.....issiliye usne mujhse pyaar ka naatak kiyaa....lekin main Jai Walia kibaraabari kabhi nahi kar saktaa......aur aaj isilye woh mere pyaar ko thukraakarussi Jai Walia ke paas chali gayi..... Bani: Pushkar ...aise mat kaho..dekho sab kuch theek ho jaayega...thehro meinPia se baat toh karti hoon.... Bani calls Walia house and Jai picks the phone.... Jai: Walia house...Jai Walia speaking..... Bani: Mr Walia...mein Bani bol rahi hooon...kyaa Pia aap ke yahaa aayi hai? Jai: Ohh Bani....accha hua tumne phone kiya...mein kab se tumhe call karneki..... Baani: that's ok mr Walia...aapne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya....kyaa Piaaap ke yahan hai? Jai: Haan ..woh woh yahi hai lekin Baani... Baani: thanxs Mr Walia...and she cuts the phone abruptly... Baani goes to the outhouse and Mr Walia opens the door....she asks for Pia andPia comes out..... Pia : Di, aap? mujhe pataa hai aap kyun aayi hain.....lekin mein is baare meinkoi baat nahi karni hai....yeh meraa nijee phaislaa hai aur mein isme kisikiinterference nahi chaahati....har insaan ko apne personal decisions lene ka hakkhai aur ye meri zindagi ka sab badaa personal decision hai.... Bani: haa Pia.....tumne theek kahaa..yeh tumhaari zindagi hai....yeh tumhaarapersonal decision hai....aur isme mujhe kuch kehne kaa koi hakk nahi....theekussi decision ki tarah joh tumne Jai Walia se shaadi karne kaa liyaa....aurwoh decision jab tumne mandap se bhaagkar pushkar ke saath jaane parkiyaa....woh saare personal decisions tumhaare the Pia.....aur mujhe koi hakknahi milaa kuch kehne kaa.. Pia looks a bit guilty....and lowers her eyes .... Baani: sirf un decisions ka natijaa mujhe bhugatnaa padaa.....tum toh mandap sebhaag gayi aur bina pyaar ki shaadi muhje karni padi...Jigyaasa aunty ke kehnepar meine shaadi kaa jodaa pehnaa....yahi sochkar ki tum jaroor vaapas aaogi aursab kuch theek ho jaayegaa.....woh din jo har ladki kaa sapna hotaa hai....jisdin ka har ladki bachpan se khwaab dekhti hai.....woh din mere liye meri zindagikaa sabse udaasi bharaa din ban gayaa...mujhe aise aadmi se shaadi karni joaadmi meri bahen se pyaar kartaa thaa.....aise insaan ki patni banana padaajiski aankhon mein maine sirf nafrat dekhi.....jisne har pal mujhe beizzat kiya,taane maare .....lekin meine kuch nahi kahaa.....yahin soch kar ki tumhaarikhushi ki kimmat isse kahi jyaada hai....Pia koh uska pyaar milaa.....uskikhushi mein hi meri khushi hai....tum dono ke pyaar par koi aanch na aaye isliyemein us ghar mein ...us insaan ke saath rahi ...jo tumse pyaar kartethe..... Pia: I am sorry Di, mera ye kehne ka matlab nahi tha...mein jaanti hoon aapnemere liye jo kiya hai, shaayad hi koi apno ke liye karta ...lekin Di..aap meribaat samjhane ki koshish karo....aap hi ne mujhse kahaa tha ki pyaar se badkarduniya mein koi khushi nahi hoti...insaan pyaar se sab kuch jeet saktaahai....aur isiliye meine Pushkar ke saath bhaagkar shaadi kar li... jaise aapne apni shaadi ke khwaab dekhe the..theek usi tarah meine bhi dekhe the....meine ek badaa aalishaan ghar dekha jisme mein apne pati ke saath poore aisho aaraam se zindagi bitaaoongi...lekin sacchai mein mujhe jo mila,.... woh that sirfcompromise, jhoote vaade, insult aur taane....ek din bhi main chain se nahin rehsaki....meri ek bhi khwaish poori nahi kar sakaa Pushkar....har baar muhjhe apnearmaon ka galaa ghotnaa padaa...har cheez mein compromise karnaa padaa....mainejo khwaab sajaaye the woh saare bikhar gaye di...arre baaki sab toh door Pushkarne aajtak mujhe ek dhang ka gift bhi nahi khareedaa....aap kehti hai ki aapkotaane sunane pade, insult sehni padi lekin phir bhi aap Mrs Jai Walia bangayee....Jai Walia ki patni ...... Baani gives a sad almost sarcastic smile ..... Baani:haan Piya...mein Mrs Jai Walia jaroor bani...mujhe Walia mansion jaisebade ghar mein rahne milaa....lekin jaanti ho....us ghar ke ek bhi kone ko meinapna nahi keh saki, mujhe designer saris aur diamond jewelry mili, lekin ek baarbhi apne pati ki aankhon mein meine chahat nahi dekhi....luxury cars hai lekinek baar bhi hum long drive par nahi gaye....Pia cheezon ki koi importance nahihoti jab tak unme pyaar ki bhaavna na bandhi ho....woh cheeze sirf cheeze rehjaati hai....agar do logon mein pyaar ho toh kutiyaa bhi mahal lagne lagti hain...... Pia: Di, mein jaanti hoon ki aapne mere liye kitne dukh uthaaye hai... lekinmeri galati ki sazaa sirf aap ne nahi balki maine bhi paayi hai...jiske liyemeine saare aaram saare sukh thukraa diye ...use rishte se mujhe kyaa milaa??? kuch bhi nahin.....ek din bhi main chain se nahin reh saki... mere saath meineaapki aur Rano ki bhi zindagi barbaad ki....sab kuch kho diya maine..mera atmasamaan...kal pushkar ne mujhe dhakke markaar ghar se nikaal diyaa.....mein wohinsult kabhi nahi bhool sakti hoon.... Baani: Pia mein sirf itnaa jaanti hoon ki har riste mein highs and lows hotehai....aur rishte sirf kehne se nahi bante...unhe sambhaalna padta hai...pyaarse aur dheeraj se.....agar mein tumhaari tarah sochu.... toh mere liye merishaadi ka koi matlab nahi rehtaa...mere aur Mr Walia ki beech sirf tanaav aurphaasle the....lekin mein unke baare mein nahi sochti hoon...mein un palon koyaad karti hoon jo humne saath saath hasi khushi bitaaye....us ek raat ko yaadkarti hoon jab mein, sach mein ,Jai Walia ki patni bani.....jab meine socha kishaayad ..shaayad kahi unke dil mein mere liye pyaar hai....lekin aisaa nahihua.....unke liye woh raat sirf ek raat thi....ek galti......jo woh phir sedohrana nahi chahate....lekin mere liye woh raat meri aane wali zindagi ki saariraaton ki liye kaafi hai....us raat ne muje bahot kuch diya...mere pati kaapyaar aur us pyaar ki humaari nishaani....mera baccha ...yeh baccha ab merizindagi kaa sab se badaa sach hai.....mera sahara hai...meraa hai....woh mereliye Mr Walia ka sabse badaa gift hai....jo mein hamesha sambhaalkarrakhoongi..... Pia tumhara baccha bhi Pushkar kaa diya hua sabse bada giftthaa....woh tumhaare pyaar ki nishaani thi....aur tume ussi ko mitaa diyaa?tumne aisa kyun kiyaa Pia? Kyaa tumhe ek baar bhi Pushakr kaa khayaal nahiaaya??? Pia: wah Di....aap ne khoob kahaa....Pushkar kaa gift....jaanti hai Di...giftwoh hota hai..joh khushi laaye....naa ki dukh...Pushkar kaa baccha mere liyegift nahi...musibat thaa...aur mein us musibat se chutkaara chahati thi...aurisiliye meine us gift koh mitaa diyaa....aur rahi baat Pushkar kaa khayaal karneki....toh aap mujhe ek baat bataye Di...jab aapne ghar chodne ka phaislaa liyatoh kyaa aapne Mr Walia kaa khayaal kiya? Kyaa aapne ye socha ki Mr Walia parkyaa beetegi jab aap unse unka baccha alag karengi....aapne bhi toh yeh decisionapne aap hi liyaa hai...toh phir aap mere decision par kyun aitraaz jataa rahihai??? jo baat mere liye sahi hai woh aap par bhi laagu hoti hai.... Bani is stunned and remains speechless and Pia walks away... to herbedroom.......Bani feels as if the floor is coming up to meet her..everything ismoving at a very fast pace and then gentle darkness subsides on her and shesinks into oblivion..... Bani opens her eyes and finds herself in a strange room ....at first it feels abit strange...there is no light in the room but the light in the bathroom is onand peeking through the almost closed door.....she looks around trying tounderstand where she is ...then she sees someone sitting right next to the bedin an armchair....ohh...Mr Walia.....he is in his night robe and has fallenasleep.....she then realises she is back in their bedroom ....at the Waliamansion.....suddenly she felt very thirsty .She looks around and finds thefamiliar water carafe on the side table......she tries to take the glass butsomehow it slips from her hand and falls down on the floor .....the sound wakesup Jai..who sits up rubbing his eyes and immediately comes next to her.... Jai: Bani...bani tum theek toh ho.....? tum.... tum leti raho...thehro meintumhaare liye aur ek glass lataa hoon. He gets up and leaves the room to get her a glass of water......Bani sinks backinto the pillows and starts to wonder..... Bani(to herself): yeh kahaa aa gayi mein....mujhe yahaa kisne layaa ...aur yekyaa....mere kapde? mere kapde kahaa gaye?....yeh shirt..yeh meine Mr Walia kishirt kyun pehni hai.....ohh mera sar....meraa sar itnaa ghoom rahaa hai....meinbahot thakk gayi hoon.... Just then Jai returns with a glass of water....and sits down next toBaani.....Jai: Baani....thodaa paani pi lo aur ye goli le lo....dr ne kahaa hai tumheaaraam ki zaroorat hai aur isliye unhone ye neend ki goli di hai...darna mat,isse bacche par koi assar nahi hogaa...lekin its very important that you getlots of rest....isliye please tum ye goli le lo\par Baani: lekin.... lekin....mujhe Pia ki paas jaana hai, usse samjhanahai.....Pushkar bhi mera intezar kar rahaa hogaa...nahi... nahi mujhe jaanachaahiyee..... Baani tries to get out of the bed but Jai holds her by her arms and prevents herfrom getting up.... Jai: Baani ...Baani please understand....baat koh samajhne ki koshishkaro..dekho ab tum kahi bhi jaane ki haalat mein nahin ho...meri baatmaano..Pia kahi nahi gayi hai....woh yahi outhouse mein apni bedroom mein sorahi hai....aur rahi baat Pushkar ki ...toh woh tumhaari koi baat sunane kisituation mein nahi hai....he was drunk when he came here....isiliye meine usseghar bhej diyaa....tum un dono se kal baat kar sakti ho...lekin abhi tumhe meribaat maanani hogi....mein tumhe aisi haalat mein kahi jaane nahi doonga.....tumaaj raat yahi reh rahi ho...mere saath mere saamne.....and that's final!!! Baani: Aaap aap... mujhe rok nahi sakte.....mein jaaoongi....jaroorjaaongi..... Bani agains attempts to free herself and get out of the bed.... Jai: Well Baani, you leave me no choice........ And saying that Jai with one smooth move takes Baani right into his arms andstarts kissing her.....Bani is shocked and speechless.....at first she just sitsstill and tries to grasp what is happening .Then suddenly realising .... triesto push him away..Jai deftly pulls her back in his arms and places her hand onhis chest..... Jai: Agar tumhe apne haathon ka istamaal karna hi hai toh aache kaam ke liyekaro.... Baani: mein..mein...aap meraa haath....aap chod ....again she is silenced byJai's expert mouth..... Bani feels a familiar heat growing in her body......ohh Mr Walia....how much Imissed u.......she first tries to resist but then she slowly starts torelax....the familiar sense of longing takes over and unconciously her handsstart to reach for Jai's collar..she feels his hands on the buttons of hershirt.....he tries to open them but somehow isn't able to..... Jai: God....ye buttons....ye kaise....Baani smiles to herself and thinks ye aaphi ki shirt hai....aap nahi jaante??? Jai tries once again and then pulls thebutton out in frustration.....he goes out to pull the next one but Bani stopshim and starts to unbutton herself.....Jai trails a lenght of passionate kissesdown the lenght of buttons and Baani loses herself in the passion of hislove....... The morning sun peeps thru the windows and the grey light of dawn sweeps in theroom...Jai is sitting on the armchair.....looking at Bani....he wonders howrelaxed and innocent she looks ....sleeping so peacefully....her arm tuckedunder herself and the other one flung across the bed ..right where he wassleeping....as if seeking him even in her sleep.... God how he loves her.....yes.....at last he can no longer hide it fromhimself....he loves Baani.....he tried as much as he could but cannot deny thefact that he loves her......he didn't know how and he he didn't know when butsomehow she had wormed her way into his heart....he needed her.....wantedher....her presence seemed to fill the very essence of him...this was somethinghe had never felt before..something so primal ..so simple.....yet socomplex....she filled his every thought .....and every pore of his body.....herhold over him was overpowering...almost frightening....and yet he had never everfelt so safe and relaxed as he did when he was in her arms.....he could live inher embrace for ages and not want for anything.....the last few days had beenhell....being away from her....their child.....God!!!!.she looks so young...andshe is going to become a mother...mother of his child.....ohh godd..she ispregnant and we!!!!.....I hope I didn't hurt her in any manner....I must speakto her dr..at the next check up..... Jai stands and stretches himself....yawning and rubbing his eyes....he walks tothe window....still thinking to himself.....I must do something about this.....Icannot let Baani out of my life again....hell... I won't let her out of thisroom if I can.....not now....not when I know that SHE LOVES ME!!! yes....yes sheloves me.....I shouldn't let her know that I shamelessly overheard herconversation with Pia..but I could not help myself....I wanted to know thatBaani was ok....lately she's been under a lot of stress and needs someone totake care of her...all the while she thinks of others....someone should be thereto think about her....for her sake....I cannot lose her now....the dr also saidthat she needs a lot of rest and lots of care.....there has to be away.....thank god for sending Pia...... Pia....god....how wrong was I about Pia....I never imagined she could be soshallow so selfish .....all she talked about was her needs, comforts ,gifts..all she can think about is money and parties.....how can she be soo cold andcalculating....so different from Baani....Baani was always so understanding andpatient....undemanding....happy in all the simple things....always trying tomake the best of every situation....thinking abt others ..spreading love....andPia.....well the fact is she never loved me ....all she wanted was what shecould get from me....but somwhere I had known that all the time....it wasthere for me to see and know ....deep in my heart.....and I chose to ignoreit... the truth is I didn't really love her either ..well not in the real sense....not in the way I love Baani.... Baani.....I must thank Pia.....thank you forchanging your mind at the last moment and giving me the best gift of mylife...thanxs Pia..I will defintely make it up to you..... Jai turns back and gazes at Bani...and thinks....god how I love her....but sheshouldn't come to know right now....nor should she know that I know how much sheloves me....no she should not find out....its too early....anyways she willnever believe me...she will only think i'm doing this to get her back in mylife....no ..think Jai ....think...there has to be a way....this is the biggesttakeover of your life and you cannot mess it..... Just then Baani stretches in her sleep and wakes up....she opens her eyesdrowsily and tries to get up...then quickly slides back into the bed rememberingshe has nothing on her except for the bedsheet....she looks at Jai withimploring eyes Bani: Mr Walia....please...kyaa aap....mere kapde......Jai:Ohh....tumhaare kapde toh meine laundry ke liye de daale...ek min....Jai removes his robe and hands it out to Baani....Jai: Philaal tum issi se kaam chalao.....in fact..mere khayaal se tumhe iski bhijaroorat nahi...afterall tum meri biwi ho...i mean you still are my wife....aurwaise bhi us bedsheet ke undar aisa kuch bhi nahi jo meine pehle nahi dekhaho..... Jai gives a very arrogant and smug smile.....seeing that Baani gets furiousand all riled up...She again tries to get out of the bed. saying MrWalia..aap..and then realises that she's still not wearing the robe...so shejust grabs the robe and slips into it and flounces off to the bathroom...Jaismiles to himself and goes outside the bedroom and calls out for Tony Jai:Tony...Tony..... Tony : Yes Sir.....Tony comes up the stairs and stands in front of Jai\par Jai: Tony..aaj tum kuch accha sa vegetarian breakfast banao..dyaan rakho kihealthy ho....nothing oily and Baani ki saari favourite dishes honichahiye...haan aur saath mein freshly squeezed orange jiuce bhi bhejnaa....aurdekho....yeh sab mere room mein bhejo....aaj hum room mein breakfastkarenge.....koi aaye toh bhi mujhe disturb mat karna....aur haa ..Pia madamouthouse mein hain unko wahi breakfast bhej denaa....unse kehna ki hum lunch parmilenge..... Tony :Ok sir....Tony goes away smiling to himself ..... Jai enters back into the bedroom and finds Baani standing by the window.....hershoulders set in a firm stance.....Jai thinks ( welll....now the fightbegins..) He walks up to Baani and smiles at her. He gently tries to hold her arm but sheflings it away and glares at him....Jai: arre...mein toh tumhe baithne ke liye keh rahaa thaa.....dekho itna gussakarnaa thik nahi..isse bacche par assar hota hai... Baani(her voice loaded with sarcasm): mujhe pataa hai .....dariye mut...shayaadaap bhool rahe hain ki yeh baccha mera hai aur mujhe uska poori chintahai...utnni hi... jitni aapko.. Jai( in a soothing tone): haa... haan.... meine kab kahaa ki kissi aur kaahai?..yeh baccha tumhaara hi hai Baani..lekin tum baith jaao aaraam se...dekho ,kal hi tumhe chakkar aaye aur tum gir gayi...agar mein wapas nahi aataa meracell phone lene, toh pataa nahi kyaa ho jaata... Baani: Ohh toh aap wahaa nahi the....aap yahaan waaapas aa gaye....ohhh... Baani lets out a sigh of relief ...she thinks to herself ..thank god..Mr Waliadid not hear my conversation with Pia....ohh godd.....I just got so carried awayyesterday...Pia....oh goodd...I completely forgot about her...I must see her assoon as possible.... Bani then turns around and glares at Jai.. Bani: Mr Walia...please aap mere liye kissi aur kapdon kaa intezaamkijiye....mujhe abhi aur issi waqt Pia se milnaa hai..waise bhi Pushkar bhi meraintezaar kar rahaa hoga..mujhe Pia ko lekar jald se jald ghar jaana chaaiyewarnaa Pushkar kahi kuch kar na baithe...kal raat woh bahot upset thaa... Jai: haan Baani tum theek kehti ho....Pia bhi bahot upset thi... bahot ro rahi thi....isiliye meine usse outhouse mein rehne ke liye kahaa Bani: Usse outhouse mein rehne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi...uska apna gharthaa...jab Pushkar usse lene aaya toh woh uske saath kyun nahi gayi?? Jai: Baani, Pushkar jab yahaa aaya toh he was drunk..usse kissi baat kaa hoshnahi thaa....upar se un dono ka phir se zhagdaa hua aur usne Pia par haathuthane ki koshish ki..aur mujhse ye dekha nahi gayaa .. isiliye meine usse gharse bahaar nikaal diyaa.... Baani: lekin aap ko aisa nahi karnaa chaahiye thaa..usse bahot buraa laagaa kiPia aapke guesthouse mein reh rahi hain aur usse aapne whaa se nikaaldiyaa... Jai: lekin mein aur kyaa karta Baani? Usse Pia par haath uthaane detaa....yaaPia ko uske saath bhejtaa..us haalat mein jab woh nashe mein tha????tum bataonBaani ...kyaa tum aisaa karti????... Baani remains silent..... Jai: nahi Baani...... isiliye meine Pia ko outhouse mein rehne ki jagahdi.....meine jo theek samjhaa meine kiyaa....aage tum jaano aur Pia.... Bani: Sorry Mr Walia...aap theek kehte hai..aapne bilkul theek kiya..aap kijagah mein hoti toh shaayad mein bhi wahi karti...isme dosh aap kaa nahi..doshPia ka hai....kyaa jaroorat thi usse aap ke yahaa aane ki....kyaa yahi ghar rehgayaa thaa uske liye.....woh mere paas bhi aa sakti thi.... Jai: Haan ....jaroor aa sakti thi....lekin shaayad usne socha hogaa...ki tum bhitoh aakhir Pushkar ke diye huye guesthouse mein rhen rahi ho...aur issilye wohyahaan aa gayi..In fact woh yahaan actually Rano se milne aayi thi lekin Ranobhi Mandwa gayi hui hai.....Aur waise bhi Piya kissi aur koh kahaa jaanti haiis shaher mein humaare siwaa???? Baani: haa yeh sab theek hai lekin phir bhi... usse yahaan nahi aana chahiyethaa.....balki usse aap ke yahaa naukri bhi nahi karni chaahiye thi.....aapneusse naukri kyun di Mr Walia.....aap aakhir chahaate kyaa hai? kyun aap un donoke bech mein aur problems create kar rahe hain???\par Jai: Baani ...Baani pleeaseee....yeh tum kyaa keh rahi ho.....mein un dono kebeech kyun problems crearte karoonga? usse mujhe kyaa milegaa? meine tumse pehlebhi kahaa thaa ki meri ab unse koi dushmani nahi hai...mein sab kuch bhoolnachahata hoon....in fact I don't care what happens in their lives...meine ussehire isliye kiya kyunki woh ek acchi ladki hai ...she's got greatorganizational skills and she can contribute a lot to my company....uska merisis in law hone se koi sambandh nahi....you know that Baani...meine kabhiekissiko meri business mein mere naam kaa advantage lene nahi diyaa ....for methe only way to rise is to prove your mettle ....... Baani: Nahi Mr Walia...mere kehne kaa matlab woh nahi thaa....mein jaanti hoonaap Pia ko uski kaabiliat par appoint kiyaa hai..lekin iskaa Pushkar par kyaaasar hogaa iske baare mein aapne kabhi sochaa??? Abhi aapne kahaa ki mein Pushkar ke diye guesthouse mein rehti hoon aur mein jaanti hoon ki aapko is baat se kitna dukh ho raaha hai...theek ussi tarah Pushkar ko bhi burra lag rahaa hai ki Pia aap ke yahaa kaam kar rahi hai...ye aap bhi bhool nahi sakte aur woh bhi bhool nahi sakta ki ek zamaane mein aap Pia se pyaar karte the aur usse shaadi karnaa chahate the......buraayi aapki soch mein nahi hai Mr Walia ....par jaise aapka ego hurt hua tha jab Pia Pushkar ke saath bhaag gayi...theek ussi tarah Pushkar kaa bhi ego hurt ho raha hai aaj Pia ko aap ke saath kaam karte dekh kar.... Jai: haa Baani...shaayad tum thik kehti ho ....lekin mein is baare mein kuchnahi kar sakta....kyun ki Pia khud apne aap se meri company mein job karneaayi..meine usse nahi bulayaa thaa..aur woh ek acchi employee hai...bahotmehenat se kaam karti hai...mein usse yun hi comp se nahi nikaal saktaa...therehas to be a reason to sack her.....aur agar mein usse job se nikaal bhi doon tohbhi kyaa guarantee hai ki woh Pushkar ke paas waapas jayegi....kal toh usne saafinkaar kiyaa vaapas jaane se....nahi Baani...in fact agar woh meri comp meinkaam karti hai toh mein uspar nazar rakh sakta hoon aur agar woh yahaan rehnaachahati hai toh mere ghar se safer jagah uske liye aur kahi nahi Baani: nahi ...nahi Mr Walia...yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hai? Pia yahaa kaise rehsakti hai? Log kyaa kahenge? kyaa sochenge? usske baare mein...aapke baaremein....aur logon ki chodiye...aap ke khud ghar ke log? Jigyasaaunty...maasi..daadi? yeh sab kyaa sochenge? nahi Mr Walia..Pia koh yahaa sejaana hi hogaa....mein usse apne saath guest house le jaaoongi.... Jai: haa zaroor leke jaao ...lekin mujhe nahi lagta ki woh vahaa aayegi.....usnethaan li hai ki ab woh Pushkar se yaa uski kisi bhi cheez se koi sambandh nahirakhegi.....lekin ek raasta hai Baani..... Just then there is a knock on the door and Tony enters with the breakfasttrolley.....Jai motions him to leave the trolley by the door...he leaves thetrolley next to the door and leaves.....Jai brings the trolley to the smalltable and motions Bani to join him...Bani pours tea for Jai and hands over theteacup to him ..... Jai: tumhe abhi bhi yaad hai ki mein 2 tsps letaa hoon sugar ki ......mujhekabhi bhi tumhe yaad dilana nahi padaa....thanxs Baani.... Baani looks up surprised and a bit akward and then goes on to pour tea forherself.... Baani: aap kuch keh rahe the.... Jai: Haan ....mein ye keh rahaa thaa....ki ek raasta hain...un dono koh vaapaslaane kaa...aur woh tumhaare haath mein hai.....agar tum chaaho toh un dono kimaddat kar sakti ho.... Bani: Woh kaise? Jai: Tumhe waapas ghar aana hogaa....yahaan Walia mansion mein......rehne.. Baani: Kyaa? Yahaan rehne? Walia mansion mein? Aap din mein khwaab kab se dekhne lage Mr Walia?? mein yahaan kabhi nahi aaoongi...aap ne mujhe samajh kyaa rakhaa hai? mein aapse koi sambandh naahi rakhna chahati ..... Jai: Mein jaanta hoon Baani ke tum yahaa vaapas nahi aana chahati ...lekin meintumhe apne aap ke liye nahi aane koh keh rahaa hoon...mein tumhe Pia ki khaatiraane ko keh raaha hoon...soch lo Baani....agar Pia ne yahaan rehne ki thaan litoh tum kyaa karogi? tum usse zabardasti toh Pushkar ke ghar nahi le jaasakti....aur agar woh yahaan akeli rehti hai toh log tarah tarah ki bateinbanayenge.....lekin agar tum yahaa rehti ho toh koi kuch nahi keh sakta....aurphir tum Pia ko samjha sakti ho..uspar dhyaan de sakti ho.....aur rahi Pushkarki baat toh woh mein sambhaal loonga....mein pehle toh unki life mein interferenahi karna chahata thaa lekin mein ab Pushkar ki maddat karne ki liye tayaarhoon...of course without his knowledge.....lekin iske badle mein tumhe mere liyekuch karna hogaa.... Baani looks at Jai with a question in her eyes.... Jai: tumhe mere saath mere ghar mein meri biwi ke tarah rehna hogaa.....tab takki jab tak tumhaari delivery nahi hoti..... Baani : Kyaa ???? aap ke saath ? ek hi ghar mein? ek hi chhat ke neeche? Jai: Haan Baani ...mere saath..mere ghar...mere chhat ke neeche....mere kamremein.... Baani: nahin ye mujhse nahi hogaa....mein apne maa ki hathyaare kesaath..... Jai:Stop it Baani!!! mein tumhaari maa ka hathyaara nahin hoon....haa unki mautmere haathon jaroor hui hai lekin woh ek accident tha....hathyaa naahi...mujheus baat kaa abhi bhi utnaa hi afsos hai jitnaa saat saal pehle thaa...lekin meintab bhi kuch nahi kar payaa..aur aaj bhi kuch nahi kar saktaa....us sacchai kolekar mein har roz jeeta hoon lekin woh sacchai mein badal nahi saktaa...theekussi tarah aur ek sacchai tum nahin badal sakti ...aur woh hain ki tum meribiwi ho aur mere hone waale bacche ki maa ho......aur mein nahi chahata ki meribiwi yaa mere aane wale bacche ko koi bhi takleef pahuche.....isiliye meinchahata hoon ke tum yahaan mere paas mere saamne mere ghar mein raho....tumhaaridr ne bhi kal yahi kaahaa ki tumhein stress bilkul nahi lena hai..tumhein aaramki bahot jaroorat hai....Bani mein beeta hua kal toh nahi baddal sakta lekinmein aane vaale kal ko bhi khonaa nahi chahataa..... Bani: lekin...lekin mein ab aap par bilkul dependent nahi rehnaa chahati....muhje apni pehchaan khud banani hai... Jai: haan toh mein kahaa keh raha hoon ki tum mujhpar dependent raho....tumchaho toh abhi bhi kaam kar sakti ho...lekin mere liye aur ghar se...dekhoBaani...tumhe aaraam ki bahot zaroorat hai....agar tum yahaan rehti ho toh meradriver tumhe roj kaam par chod sakta hai...aur pick up kar saktaa hai...mein tumhe khaana bhej sakte hai....tumhaari dekh bhaal kar sakta hoon .....mein sirfitna chahata hoon ke tum mujhe tumhaari care karne kaa maukaa do.....aur kuchnahi..... Baani: Mujhe iske baare mein sochna hogaa..... Jai: isme kuch sochna baaki nahi hai Baani...agar tum abhi haa kar do toh meinPushkar ko bhi uski job mein help kar saktaa hoon...Mein meri contacts use karkeusse ek acchi post dilva saktaa hoon , naya ghar, gaadi all the perks....bas tumhaa kar do..... Bani: Meri kuch samajh nahi aa rahaa....mein kyaa karoo? meraa sir mein bahotdard ho rahaa hai....she clutches at her forehead\parJai immediately goes by her side and holds her close to him ..... Jai: Please Baani....please just listen to me this one time....believe me youwill not regret it..... Baani : thik hai.....I agree......
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OMG what happens next? 😕
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that was long and good.... You are a really good writer 😛
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👏 👏 awesome FF, please continue...
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MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!.. 👏 that was gr8888.. luveddd every single bit of it .. 👏 cont soon
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That was amazing!!!! can't wait till the next part.
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great part
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Awesome work! loved the length and everything!!

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can't wait til the next part....... 😛
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Really beautifully setup. Really nice. Can't wait till the next part. 👏

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