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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

Since they have decided that the show should end, i would suggest :


The pandit comes and says that there is a good date only after 6 months for the wedding and all of them are relieved as they have more time to get prepared and find grooms for themselves. In the 6 months which can be shown in quick mode where they could show the business that Pratibha and her bahu's started is blooming. Thakur on the other hand opens factories from his business together with Raghav mama and all are happy.

*6 months later*

The wedding day and all of them have found good looking and nice grooms. Among them is Viren for Shelly as he says 'Thanks to Abha for making me understand that my children's needs a mother and Asmi needs a father too. Together we shall fill in each another's void'. Raj enters the wedding hall and everyone asks Raj where is Lata? Raj says she is admitted in the hospital as she is due for giving birth anytime and even then, Lata made sure i attended the wedding. All the three wedding takes place and while the wedding taking place, the soul of the Jagmohan, Vimal, Veer and Prakash comes and Pratibha, Karan, Abha, Shelly, Kanika and Priyanka sees them and are in tears as the soul blesses them. Then Raj gets a call that Lata have given birth to twins and everyone is happy as Thakur, Abha and Raj leaves to the hospital. Thakur turns and looks back at the Swarn Bhavan mandir and says 'Thank you Bhagwan for giving us this happy day again after all we have went through' and Thakur closes his eyes and prays. The screen blanks as Thakur closes his eyes.

*5 Years Leap*

Yahan Main Ghar Ghar Kheli theme song plays as the camera brings us from out of Swarn Bhavan and Swarn Bhavan door opens and the camera enters and the house is being decorated very grandly and Sanskar says make sure nothing is less and Saniya comes saying don't get stressed, all will be fine. The scene cuts to Raj's house and Raj is in the hall calling out 'Lata, are you and the kids ready? We are getting late for Swarn Bhavan's Jayanti. Lata comes down the stairs looking beautiful and Raj keeps looking at her. Lata says arey, where are the childrens? Lata calls out their name and both their twins, a boy and a girl aged 5 years old comes down the stairs and Raj says shall we leave? Aruna says wait a minute, where are you all leaving without me? Raj says where will we leave without you maa and all laugh and leaves.

At Swarn Bhavan, everyone is happy celebrating Swarn Bhavan's anniversary and Paavni (7 years) Asmi (8 years) are running around playing with Nishant and Abha says to Lata, 'Didi, don't they remind us of how i, you and Prakash bhaiya used to play in this house?' Lata says yes i do and i am really missing Prakash bhaiya today. Abha says don't worry didi, he is always watching over us and they hug. Karan comes and says 'These two days always get sentimental whenever they meet, time for some fun' and they all start dancing for songs. Thakur is happy to see all this and says to himself 'Chandra Prabha, how children's are so happy with their family today and i wish you were still around to see all this'. CP touches Thakur's shoulder and says where have i gone? I am always with you and Thakur wipes his tears and smiles and the show ends showing everyone happy and dancing together 😊

**Pardon me since its too long 😆

THIS MUST BE INCLUDED IN YOUR COMPILATION TO RAJSHRIS. BEST ENDING. THEIR CV'S LOST OF SPACE. 🤗
Sorry for late reply but I was admitted into hospital on Tuesday 17.7.12 at 8.00 (had to call ambulance home) and just been discharged 19.7.12 p.m. I am having trouble typing so will be not commenting as much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Kavita and Zee TV facebooks should be bombarded with our disappointment. More people send then only they will take notice for future and might make Rajshris to come out into open as to why not all living characters were part of the show.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
d killer sud really hv been a male assassin sent by sheetal to finally hv sb in her name...she exposed by abharan, ranchod, shelly, kanika n priyanka wid d help of viren n family who vl also help them n happen to see sheetal giving money to d assassin to run away...then a final set up to catch sheetal red-handed n she vl slapped by most of d family members...before being taken away by d lady cop n co., viren vl enter n sheetal vl go mad calling him names using kanika incident to which kanika vl slap her hard again teln her he is just like her vimal bhaiyya n he can't do dat n vl also tell dat she came to know dat it was she n priyanka who framed him so dat he won't treat karan bhaiyya...priyanka vl confess all her misdeeds n turn positive permanently...then nilu's parents, karuna, pratibha n thakur vl decide to get viren n shelly married to each other to which both vl take time to agree n v vl see more kid bonding specialy between mayank, mishti n asmi...then pri vl her match of a good looking guy who vl be (enter ur fav tv actor)...n finally, a handsome young guy(enter ur fav actor) even knowing abt kanika vl fell for her n bring proposal to pratibha n thakur but kanika vl not agree as she don't want to betray prakash...then CP's spirit vl approach kanika n convince to agree as evry1 wants to bring back colours to her life n even prakash vl also want d same...then d wedding vl take place dhoom-dhaam se...all d widows vl see d spirits of der spouses n vl hv emotional talk wid them...sanskaar-saniya vl also come wid der twins, a boy n a girl...nilu's parents vl do shelly's kanyadaan, pri's parents vl do pri's n abharan vl do kanika's...after 6 months, laaj vl hv a boy; abha n shelly vl get pregnant...ranchod vl marry karishma or albeli...after another 6 months, tanvi vl be adopted by laaj finally n ranchod's wife, kanika n pri vl get pregnant...after a couple of years, ymggk vl finally end wid sb samarambh wid evry1 including d kids hvng a good time n final goodbye 4m everyone...
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
That's a nice ending too. Wow, Ranchod marries Karishma and Abha pregnant again. Hope its a baby boy this time 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Yeas we all have so many different ideas for the ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Visha,your ending was perfect! 😃
I really wish that you were the writer for ymggk...you would have satisfied alot of fans.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Have you sent this ending to rajshri visha?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_karanabha

Have you sent this ending to rajshri visha?


I agree, do send this to them!

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