my first os: mujhe see shadi karo(based on precap)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok guys this my first ever os or any sort of writing so please forgive me for any mistakes or if it is bad

plot: arnav brings doctor over to check buaji and khushi opens the door...

khushi:arye arnavji ap phirse a gaye ab kaya dene aye hai aur yeh bahi kon hai.
arnav looks at khushi with his powerful brown eyes filled with love,and he says in his style khushi nani bata rahi thi ke buaji unko teek nahi lagi isi liye mai doctor ko lekar aya ho buaji ko check karwane.
khushi:par woh woh...ar...arnavji buaji soh rahi hai unko aram chaheye. Arnav turned toward the doctor and asked, doctor blood pressure check karne ke liye patient ka utna zaroori hai,
docotor: no we can leave the patient sleeping.
arnav; thats great khushi yeh sirf bauji ko check kare ge, inko andar ane do
khushi was out of excuses she had no other choice but to let the doctor in now for sure her secret would be out and but all she could do now was pray to davi maya to take care of everything.
bauji came rushing out of the kitchen shouting,hai re nand kishore kon hai sanka de...
damadji app yaha kono kam tha baubwa beto nah.
arnav looking a bit surprised asked, buaji ap tho sorahi thi app uth gaye
buabwa hum kaha sorahe the hum to ei sanka devi keliya pakore banarahi hai.
magar buaji khushi ne to kaha apki tabbeyat teek nahi hai app aram kar rahi hai.
hai re nand kishore, shanka devi yeh kaya howat hai tum arnav buabwa se jhoot kahe boli.
woh buaji ji ... woh much ..em...woh arnav interrupted khushi saying bauji shahid mujhe kuch galatfami howi hai khushi jhoot nahi bolti. khushi looked into arnav eyes thanking him for saving her. arnav told the doctor to go and dropped him of to the door.
buaji: haire nand kishore buabwa tum khushi ke sath betho hum pakore bana thie hai
and buaji left leaving arnav and khushi alone in the hall, khushi felt a current going down her body.arnav...ji ..woh hum arnav moved foward and put his index finger on her pink lips shhh...khushi mujhe sab pata hai, hamare dakhan ek hai to kaya mai itna bhi nahi apni jaan ki problem samajhe sakta.jaa...n...arnavji app abhi abhi kya bole. meri jaan haan khushi tum meri jaan ho tumhare bina mai ek second bhi nahi rahe sakta aur tum mujhe chod kar a gayi, tumhe ek bar bhi mera kyal nahi aya mai tumhare liye kuch nahi ho. khushi kept qiuet looking down, arnav softly got her hand and asked her to come with him as they enter khushi room arnav shut the door and made khushi sit on the bed. khushi tumhe meri zara parwaha nahi hai, tum chahti ho ke mai margaho...kushi quickly moved forward and put her hand over his mouth and started cry.arnavji ajj ke baad asa kabhi nahi kahiye ga hum app ke bina nahi gee sakte.she started cry even more putting her head on arnav chest.arnav got up wiped her tears and bent down on his knees and said khushi mujhse shaadi karo gi...

guys i have too rush now but if u like it i will write more comment plz

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zabo123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No one liked it or hated it 😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sweet and well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sweet dear...nice..u shud def contonue this n do pm me if you continue...thnx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kitzdoll

very sweet dear...nice..u shud def contonue this n do pm me if you continue...thnx...


sure if i carry on i will pm u for sure
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its ok but this is not ASR style :)

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