DOTW : How it should have ended?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear All,

Hope all of you are doing good. Now that our serial has ended and we all know that many of us disliked the ending of the show. So lets discuss and post your own idea/view on how do you think that the show should have ended instead. I shall try my best to compile it and send to Rajshri to let them know that we were disappointed with the ending and we have better ideas than them. So start putting on your thinking cap 😉
Edited by Visha_Dhami - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes definitely a stand alone ME .where even people from past like sanskaar and saniya would be present . everyone else should have been there . Laaj and ranchod too. then something along the lines of a typical rajhshri movie wedding situation. and celebration.

all this overlooked by the presence of jaggu and sons and prakash and also CP

at the end a big portrait shot of everyone
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Since they have decided that the show should end, i would suggest :

The pandit comes and says that there is a good date only after 6 months for the wedding and all of them are relieved as they have more time to get prepared and find grooms for themselves. In the 6 months which can be shown in quick mode where they could show the business that Pratibha and her bahu's started is blooming. Thakur on the other hand opens factories from his business together with Raghav mama and all are happy.

*6 months later*

The wedding day and all of them have found good looking and nice grooms. Among them is Viren for Shelly as he says 'Thanks to Abha for making me understand that my children's needs a mother and Asmi needs a father too. Together we shall fill in each another's void'. Raj enters the wedding hall and everyone asks Raj where is Lata? Raj says she is admitted in the hospital as she is due for giving birth anytime and even then, Lata made sure i attended the wedding. All the three wedding takes place and while the wedding taking place, the soul of the Jagmohan, Vimal, Veer and Prakash comes and Pratibha, Karan, Abha, Shelly, Kanika and Priyanka sees them and are in tears as the soul blesses them. Then Raj gets a call that Lata have given birth to twins and everyone is happy as Thakur, Abha and Raj leaves to the hospital. Thakur turns and looks back at the Swarn Bhavan mandir and says 'Thank you Bhagwan for giving us this happy day again after all we have went through' and Thakur closes his eyes and prays. The screen blanks as Thakur closes his eyes.

*5 Years Leap*

Yahan Main Ghar Ghar Kheli theme song plays as the camera brings us from out of Swarn Bhavan and Swarn Bhavan door opens and the camera enters and the house is being decorated very grandly and Sanskar says make sure nothing is less and Saniya comes saying don't get stressed, all will be fine. The scene cuts to Raj's house and Raj is in the hall calling out 'Lata, are you and the kids ready? We are getting late for Swarn Bhavan's Jayanti. Lata comes down the stairs looking beautiful and Raj keeps looking at her. Lata says arey, where are the childrens? Lata calls out their name and both their twins, a boy and a girl aged 5 years old comes down the stairs and Raj says shall we leave? Aruna says wait a minute, where are you all leaving without me? Raj says where will we leave without you maa and all laugh and leaves.

At Swarn Bhavan, everyone is happy celebrating Swarn Bhavan's anniversary and Paavni (7 years) Asmi (8 years) are running around playing with Nishant and Abha says to Lata, 'Didi, don't they remind us of how i, you and Prakash bhaiya used to play in this house?' Lata says yes i do and i am really missing Prakash bhaiya today. Abha says don't worry didi, he is always watching over us and they hug. Karan comes and says 'These two days always get sentimental whenever they meet, time for some fun' and they all start dancing for songs. Thakur is happy to see all this and says to himself 'Chandra Prabha, how children's are so happy with their family today and i wish you were still around to see all this'. CP touches Thakur's shoulder and says where have i gone? I am always with you and Thakur wipes his tears and smiles and the show ends showing everyone happy and dancing together 😊

**Pardon me since its too long 😆
Edited by Visha_Dhami - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good visha. like it a lot 👍🏼


infact that is just superb.
Edited by sahil70 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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but end our show..soo sad to thnk it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have been just thinking of this since the show started around Swarn Bhavan anniversary, so why not end it on the anniversary with a big happy family instead? 😉 And to keep in mind 'Yahan Main Ghar Ghar Kheli', now Abha's daughter Paavni is running and playing in the same house she did and Asmi, Paavni and Nishant would reflect Lata, Abha and Prakash 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ie's true..really disappointed they ended show like this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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They should have took advice from me and i think i could direct better than them 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha..if i produce a serial, i surly appoint u its director
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I would gladly accept it 😉

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