** Destiny parted US **

Posted: 13 years ago
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New os ..
Hey guys I am back with a new os ...and I am defiantly sure u will like it ...
Note: plzzz no 1 line comment plzzz I took lot of effort to rite this os so plzz hit like button and comment ( long long...plzzz)... speakerss on karo

The reyansh singhania ...he was in bb court after she left and he needed few answers which he was asking to him self or to her " Universe Ji" ...
Re:Y did u do this to me baatcutter ...y ( tears wer rolling down since ages from his eyes ...his sense wer nt working even ...his eyes ver swollen due to crying ...from long time ...

Re: Y ...y didn't u feel anything ...wen in Rdx 's party I was with u?...I first touched u unintentionally did u feel the strange feeling which I felt wen I touched u ....

Re: didn't u feel the feeling of someone special wen u danced with me for the first time...in ur life I was the first to dance with you so didn't u had the feeling of a new partner...


Re: wen I saved u from falling and wen u was staring in my eyes didn't u feel the same way which I felt...the protection feeling ...y you said dat I didn't meant anything for u ?

Re: y ever time wen I came close to you ...u lowered ur lashes...y u use to blush wen I complemented you...wen u said I am nothing for u ...


Re: every time I use too see in ur big big eyes they use to piers in my heart and I fell in love more and more ...( the stock of his tears wer now increased as the pain had increased more and it grew deeper)

Re: y u fought with me for becoming gs ? why it was important to prove me dat u r betterdan me coz even u felt something for me den y u denied and said I mean nothing just step to get ur fame...
Re: y u gave me butter fly kiss in the party wen u didn't wanted me in ur life...den y did u go against ur will..
Was I so bad...


re: y always u hugged me wen u was scard from dark ...u told u lov swayam den y meee?????(he screamed)

Re: y u saved me from my friends wen they plan to have revenge with me...y u cared for me wen u didn't mean it...y u said dat I should nt take tension ...wen even my tension effected you den


y u gave me my life's biggest tension...even ... Once if I would have got the idea that u will leave me n the middle of "OUR " journey ...I would have never dare to love u .,...coz this
feeling is killing me from inside second by second...

y u every time wanted to no to whom i was talking was u nt desperate to no den y u left me


why u was so desperate to prove me that you was one of the best dancer for me...y was u jelouse wen I was dancing with Nicole
...wen i didn't even exist for u?...


Re: even karan sir said dat we look great together but ...I guess we wer nt ment to be together ...y every time i talk on phone to some one u was curious to know who it was ...y did u care


Why you took my challenge and danced with me didn't u feel anything during the dance in dance feat coz in dat song I was sure about my feeling towards you dat u r mine and only mine baatcutter ...but you didn't cared u said u love swayam instud of me...


y you wanted to prove me that ur more adventures than any other girl wen i took ur hand in mine didnt u fell the shiver down ur spine which i felt..

Wen I didn't ment anything for u den y ...y u said me "dat I am more dan a friend to you..." I was on top of the world wen u said me dat but wat I knew the next day will bring a havoc in my life...

Rey couldn't handle the pain and he screamed in agony...y...
"if I close my eyes forever could it ease the pain..." which u have given me...

Could I breath again ...without u ... He was so shattered dat even the tears stock was drained out and he was like a dead body ...


KASH MAI TUM SE NAFRAT KAR PATA ..KRIYA ...PAR YE PYAAR TUMAHE MUJHSE DOOR JANE NAHI DETI ...

Now he was swayam came in search of him...
He sat beside him and rey asked him...
Re: was I so bad dat she left me in middle of no where ...( looking into his eyes and den a tear escaped from swayam's eyes and he nodded in a no...)
why she use to stare at me in front of every 1 wen she loved u?

Re: was I so mean ...dat she hate me to the core...( now he didn't had an answer to Reys questions he just cried )
Re: was my love so week dat she even didn't wanted our names to be taken in one breath ...plzzz swayam bring her back . .
She is the drug dats keeps me from dying...Aab sirf uski yaade he baki hai ...par vo bhi sirf dard he deti hai...

Sw: rey tujha uski yaado ok bhool na hoga ... Uski yaade tujha dard ke Alava aur kuch nahi degi...
her smile ,,make me go insain...
her eyes talk to me but not her lips ...it creats a havok in me wen i remember...her..


sw: i guess some love stories r nt ment to be completer
re: I guess our loverstory was one among them not ment to be completed...
thats why destiny has sepreted us...shyad ye lovestory ...ki kismat mai yahi likha that...


Now swayam took him to his home and the a beautiful story was uncompleted
Sorry for mistakes if u liked hit like button and please comment plzzz


continuation on page 9
destiny bought us together
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
awesum OS 👏
u made me cry agn 😭
last mere aur nimmi k OS k baad agn i cried fr dis one 😭
it was so heart touchin nd overwhelming
i culd relate to evrything u said
nd all da flashbacks u reminded me of kriyansh 😭
ab woh bhi yaad karke rona aata hai
bt luvd it 😊
u expressed rey's feelings soo well👏
u described evrything so nycc 👏
i was crying while reading each nd evry scene 😭
sad endings *sigh* 😒
i always say i hate dem
i hate crying
nxt tym happpy endings maggie okie
Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry dont have words😭😭😭😭😭
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

awesum OS 👏

u made me cry agn 😭
last mere aur nimmi k OS k baad agn i cried fr dis one 😭
it was so heart touchin nd overwhelming
i culd relate to evrything u said
nd all da flashbacks u reminded me of kriyansh 😭
ab woh bhi yaad karke rona aata hai
bt luvd it 😊
u expressed rey's feelings soo well👏
u described evrything so nycc 👏
i was crying while reading each nd evry scene 😭
sad endings *sigh* 😒
i always say i hate dem
i hate crying
nxt tym happpy endings maggie okie

yes off course for u next time happy ending wala os pakka
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res😊
unres

ohhh such a bful os,,,,,,it was jst wow srsly dear i luv it,,👏👏👏,,u describe kriyansh moment so bful
i was crying which reading each n evry prt😭😭
n all d flashback u reminded me kriyansh moment,,,,awww i miss dem lyk hell😭😭😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was just awesome...i can not describe the way all this have been put up to one forum...

all the memories one by one from start to end...rey remembering all the sequences one by one and really sad about kriya leaving him like this...

i can feel the pain of red...and his demand for answers of this...and the way he asked swayam how all this happened to him...was the moment i really felt crying...but as far as writing and pics chosen were just amazing bang on...great work done...

thanx for PM...do write more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
beautiful OS.. while reading i was getting Kriyansh flashbacks.. u potrayed Rey's feelings so amazingly.. perfectly.. i hope its just a Destiny Intermission n not Completion (n both Kriyaansh and Arsha Stories)...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS👏
it was very emotional
i want kriyansh back :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice and beautiful os...u have depicted n described kriyansh jouney very beautifully...that to from rey's pov
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVEEED IT...❤️❤️❤️
beautiful...hearttouching...u gav me goose bumbs thoughout d journey of Kriyansh...picture choice...wrds dat u used...were more den perfect...ur wrds brought tears to my eyes😭...hats off to u...⭐️👏

p.s; i hope Kunwar & Shakti sees dis...😊

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