YuvReen FF : Jab we Met Update pg9 dedicate 2 ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello everyone here me Asiya here... I n Isnat aka zinat wrote this together yesterday night. so we spent a whole night writing do read it n comment it.



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YuvReen FF - Jab We Met
The train was lurching towards its destination making its passengers jerk
every other second. It whistled loudly almost every 10-15 minutes. Most of the
passengers who were going to Kathgodam were fast asleep for more than 3 hours.
Someone around 19 in cabin 6A tried hard to sleep but the whistle and jerk were
disturbing her sleep. She looked besides her finding a stubborn lady working on
her laptop. She tried to approach the woman for little chat but the look on her
face was a good sign of disapproval. She felt irritated and switched on her
phone to check out messages. "Darn it! No network!" The grumpy lady
beside cleared her throat and narrowed her eyes at her making the girl feel
more like a damsel in distress who's suffering in this train. She cursed her
stars for having such a boring co-passenger. She wished for the presence of her
full gang right now. They would mock this grumpy lady out of the train.
Unfortunately, all of them were back in Delhi. And here, she was going to
Kathgodam alone. She noticed the young man with freckles come back to their
cabin. He sat right in front of her and before he could put his earphones back
the girl called out, "Excuse me. Aur kitni der lagegi..Kathgodam pohchne mein?"
"Do you think I am an enquiry
officer?" asked the guy sarcastically which obviously made himself look
rude. Suvi shook her head and rested back on her seat murmuring, "Another
grumpy..waise yeh enquiry officer ki tarh bhi lagta hai..yeh cap aur yeh formal
kapde..haha" She chuckled inwardly and turned to her right where the window was located. The window, the only good thing about her cabin. She looked
outside the window and saw that it was getting dawn as the sky started to
lighten up slightly. She sighed and pictured how happy her Mumma and Puppa will
be after seeing her about 6 months later. When she'll enter her house in
Kathgodam, they must be screaming, "SUVREEN!!"



The situation in cabin 7B was completely different. A guy around 20-21-years-old
was having pretty good time with some other guys who were fun-loving and young
instead of stubborn and old. He had his headphones on and the songs added more
to his beautiful train journey. He seemed to be comfortable with his black
Levis jeans with white shirt and black jacket with a pair of converse shoes
perfectly matching his personalities. While listening music on his iPod , he
didn't fail to entertain his co-passengers with his jokes. Well, no. He's not a
joker. He just has this sense of humor, looks and personality that always made
girls in his Delhi college go gaga over him. But little did he look at them.
According to him, all of them are drama queens. He thanked Mata Rani that he'll
get a break from them in Kathgodam. Kathgodam, that ravishing place where his
grandma resides."Yuvraj!!" shouted out Sameer,
one of his co-passengers, because he knew that his loud music was on. Yuvraj
heard him turned to him and raised his eyebrows."ek kaam karega yar...mere liye
panty-car se thoda juice le ayega?" pleaded Sameer. Yuvraj being a helpful
buddy proceeded for pantry-car which was right next to cabin 6A.

Here, Suvreen got frustrated on her co-passengers. She decided to vent out her
anger on some pastries. She too proceeded for pantry-car and asked,"bhaiya
mujhe ek chocolate pastry dena plz." The attendant gave her a chocolate
pastry and she asked about the cost, She was busy in removing money from purse,
she didn't noticed a handsome hunk come next to her and order for two juices.
He paid his money and opened one can for himself. He was about to take a sip
when suddenly, the train gave a big jerk resulting in Suvreen falling. She
gasped getting ready to collide with the ground when that handsome hunk caught
her on time, but resulting to all the juice spilling on Suvreen. Yuvraj's iPod
fell down and the earphones got unplugged leading the music to be audible in
the surrounding. The song "Woh dekhne mein" was on. The train entered
a tunnel and darkness spread across the cabin. As a result, both could not see
each other. They could only feel each other's touch, their first touch. Yuvraj
was still holding her by her waist and she clutched his collar tightly for
support. They could feel each other's breath on their skin. Yuvraj was eager to
see the girl in his arms and Suvreen wanted to see the person who was strong
and quick enough to save her. The song was still playing making the atmosphere
more romantic and as well as filmy. The train left the tunnel. The weak rays of
sunlight beamed on them. That's when they saw each other's face. Both of their
hearts skipped a beat at the very first sight. They were lost in each other's
eyes.



so how was it guys??? should we continue... all scar-ism welcomed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by pinkgal - 13 years ago
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Kya baat... kya baat ...kya baat!!!!!
Well done mere pyare doston!!!
Toh kal raat aap dono yahi kar rahe the kya??!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res...startng was gud...i will complete it later..thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ritu_Cool_2197

Kya baat... kya baat ...kya baat!!!!!
Well done mere pyare doston!!!
Toh kal raat aap dono yahi kar rahe the kya??!!



ya ritu.we were working on the FF after all we r nighty birds na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww asi and zinat:):)

Fabulous start dears:):)

I Luvd it:):)

Do continue:):)

And thanx for d pm:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one dearies:)..cute tunnel scene..the dark nd light(ignorance nd enlightenment) play was a vry nice touch...
Just one slight thng..the word iz umm pantry car nd not 'panty' car!roflmao
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveAngel21

Good one dearies:)..cute tunnel scene..the dark nd light(ignorance nd enlightenment) play was a vry nice touch...
Just one slight thng..the word iz umm pantry car nd not 'panty' car!roflmao



thank u dear... sorry abot the mistake i have edited now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!! pls contiune yaar..very intresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏Hi zinat n pinkgal...this was awesom...u guyz should continue it ...i would like to see their reaction

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