IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Great update Navin! Loved the update! I hope on the show as well, they will focus on why Shyam IS Shyam! No one just becomes like that for no reason!

WHAT is his story? I think that will be very interesting and possibly inter-vowen with the Malliks! I hope so!

Thanks for the PM once again, and I DO want to stay part of your PM list! Love your work! Glad to hear you have recovered from Malariya. Also, hope you do another update of "How Kunal Roy Won"?? That story fascinates me! :)

"Love Story on Page 3" was one of my ALL time favourite FF's that I read on this forum! Great insight in that story into charachters & their motivations! Just like Perfection! The raw emmotions of the first 2 chapters of Page 3 just captivated me!

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Hey, Navin, welcome back. Glad to know you're alright now. Malaria is completely debilitating.

This update was well worth the wait. Insightful, regarding both Shyam and Arnav.

As parents, we often don't realize the impact our decisions - big or small, meaningful or not - will have on our children. And a single decision by Sonali Manohar changed her son forever. Was it selfish? Self-centered? Who can tell? As you said, she had known nothing but physical pain from the men in her life. But this time that pain was mixed in with love...and that was new to her and of course she would want to hold on to it for as long as she could.

And Arnav...he only remembers how his father's obsession for the "other woman" destroyed so many lives. And that is what he believes will happen with his obsession with Khushi. Whereas Anjali, she compares Arnav's love for Khushi with their father's love for their mother in the days before Sonali. And I think, in time, Khushi will help him understand the difference between the two.

Dhruv and PN...obviously Anjali knows something. Curioser and curioser...

Take care and be the obedient Indian wife and listen to pati-dev. (they are right occasionally, y'know!!)

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Welcome back...didn't know u were I'll but really glad that u have recovered and r better now...coming back to the update,it was brilliant as usual...u have arnav's intense feelings for his wife very beautifully,he is simply obsessed with her but his past won't let him accept this amazing feeling infront of Khushi...he is such a complex man and how Khushi will Khushi understands him and deal with him will be a treat to read...can't wait for the next update.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Story is getting more and more interesting...wonder if Dhruv is a half brother he doesn't know about????? Really great chapter, have missed them!!!!!

Thanks for PM

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BarunAddictSays

@BarunAddictSays

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

omg😲thank god you are fine now.but still take some more rest.😊
Just few hours back i was thinking of posting comment asking for you to update.complain actually.😉

But bravo. 👏

we saw the actual reason why Shyam Manohar Jha became what he is now.He just asked in return the love & trust from the only person he loved but failed to get it.

Arnav had the influence of his half blood regarding Love,which was a disturbing reality for him.

Only Anjali can do this...accept things with their positive & negative both aspects.

An amazing update.'Perfection'

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Thanks for the PM ... interesting twist in the story ... Dhruv and PM ...

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#527

OMG

Anjali knows where Shyam is!

I feel for Shyam.After all the emotional and mental trauma he's been through ! :O Not that that justifies his actions ofcourse ,nothing does but poor thing! :'(

Loved the update! :)

Thanks for the PM.

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#528

I was just thinking of Perfection today when I got up from sleep today you know?!!What a coincidence!!!

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pallavi

@palo101

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

👏 loved it !!

especially " Contrary to popular thought, Fate is not an absolute. Every person's ultimate fate is based on decisions taken, as some paths are ignored and others are trodden. The choice, however, once made, is engraved in stone--once a path is chosen, it is too late to change fate."

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#530

Was waiting for your update...loved this part...love your writing style and the way you present this story...
Thanks for the PM and honestly can't wait to read the next part