#2 ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 13-19) - Page 40

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i love muah!!!

u made my day...

i was smiling by reading ur comment...

mujhse acchha toh tu likhti hai...

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awsome...love bth da chapter
hahahahaha kriyaansh hv to mrg wid each other...wow
n sharey scene was too good
sharon prepared pasta n dat to yakk...hahaha
love whole update

n sry 4 short cmnt coz xams

Originally posted by: sukanyaa

nice updates...

Originally posted by: Gaveshni

great ff...CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD!

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Originally posted by: Anindita91

hiii chetna...i read all the parts from the beginning..i loved this ff...u have done an amazing job...👏 this ff is really outstanding...👍🏼 really i loved every bit of this ff...

u have handled all the characters so well...u have given space to all the characters in equal way...to swaron, kriyaansh, viha n others characters also...keep it up...

u know when chapter 15 came i thought oh no there is no more chapter being updated...i can't wait to read more...

i am really curious to know whats gonna happen next..what this shivam is going to do...i am waiting for swaron's bonding getting more n more strong...n also a cute n adorable kriyaansh wedding...

i am adding u to my buddy list...plz pm me next time when u update...n plz plz plz update soon...😃

Originally posted by: aditi061

di do that fast me waiting for it...
and for sure this time also will be first one to comment... opps i mean reserve...

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

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sharon was standing in the balcony looking at the sky, kria was in the washroom & maria was having sleepover in their
house,she was reading a book in the room, neha came n asked maria "where are all ??" maria pointed her index finger towards balcony...neha stepped in the balcony,seeing sharon so quiet n lost somewhere,she decided to approach her...neha patted on her shoulder n sharon jerked n turned back...

" kuch soch rahi ho??"

" hmm.." Sharon nodded in yes

" kya??" neha said standing beside Sharon and looking forward

" yahi ki kria ke saath itna sab kuch hogaya n mujhe pata bhi ni chala..."

" sharon she is kria...THE KRIA GHAI...who never bothers to tell anyone whats going on inside her.." neha explained

" then how did u came to know so much about our life??" Sharon confronted

" well neha, it was 31st dec the same day when kria's engagement was held..but i couldnt come to the engagement as my flight got delayed,although i knew who is abhishek as kria already emailed me his picture.vicky & me came home from a long trip but no one was there at home as all went to celebrate new yrs eve..so we decided to surprise everyone when they came back home.

I was feeling hungry so we went for dinner in a restaurant which had hotel upstairs, we were sitting n having our dinner peacefully but one drunk voice drew all other people's, sitting in the restaurant, attention.the man was heavily drunk n was arguing with the manager for not having vacant room..the manager was continuously apologizing for not giving room to him but the drunkard was not ready to listen a word...he slapped the manager..vicky went into the matter he tapped on the drunkard's shoulder n made him to look back...we both were shocked to see the drunkard's face..he was none other ther than abhishek...just then a room was emptied.. last we saw him taking a girl in the room..

I immediately called kria to come in the restaurant...n after that u know what happened next..." neha sighed recalling the events of that day

" but how do u know so much about will..n that i transfered it to dobriyals...??" Sharon asked in confussion

" well sharon u r forgetting i am a lawyer ... next day there was a conference of lawyers...when i was generally talking with one of my colleagues...he consulted me about a property case...he was none other than dobriyals lawyer...then what i almost managed to take out all the confidiential information from him...u see thats the lawyers influence.." neha smiled

" but didnt he doubt..?" Sharon asked

" no sharon , the dobriyals lawyer is a good friend of mine n vicky, he is really a good person but its just that he had to bear those dobriyals for the sake of his job..."

"oh!! and one more thing neha i didnt get!!" Sharon asked

" what??"

" that what if dobriyals try to destroy the property that i transfered to them..."

" they cant do that...because they need kria's n urs both of ur signatures...they donot have the authority to destroy anything without both of urs signatures..."

(hope the question asked in the comments are answered..)

" umm...sharon , can i ask u something??" neha asked

" yes??"

" well what do u think about rey..??"

" well he is a nice man n suitable for kria...but y did u asked me...??"

" actually vicky n i were not sure whether u r comfortable with our decission or not??"

" off course neha..am ok infact happy with it as rey n kria makes a perfect pair as during these days i lost my kria ..." sharon explained

" i know i know she has become more mature n liveliness is missing in her..."

" yes ...exactly i felt this..u know what only rey can bring this liveliness in her again...the way she used to retort back n the talent to comment back to people is somewhere missing in her..."

" yes i agree ..u know what i noticed she only retorts back to rey...n i love that..."

" even me...!!" sharon said giggling

just then kria stepped in ..not knowing what they are talking about...

" whats up guys??" kriya asked them

" oh nothing n just gossiping..." Sharon smiled

"oh...!!"

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rey's room

rey came out of shower n swayam stepped into his room...

" hey rey toh tune kya socha??" swayam asked lying on rey's bed

" kis baare mein...??"

" kria ke baare mein..." swayam said in obvious manner

" kyun use kya hua..??" rey said taking out a t shirt from his wardrobe

" rey tune apne aur kria ke baare mein kya socha hai??" swayam asked getting irritated

" kyun hame kya sochna hai..." rey shrugged his shoulders carelessly and wtarted wearing shirt

" dude u r irritating me now...tune kuch socha hai ?? kria se shaadi karne ke baare mein??"swayam sat up

" kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha yaar...ek taraf toh dil keh raha hai shaadi kar lu aur dusri taraf lag raha hai ki sab kuch thik se ho paayega ki nahi..." rey sighed

just then martin n vicky entered...

" rey kria bahot acchi ladki hai..." Vicky said sitting on a couch

" acchi hai toh kya karu ...?"

" sweet bhi hai..." martin smiled

" sweet hai toh kha jaun usse...??" rey said in annoyance

" tu itna hyper kyu ho raha hai..." swayam asked

" yup !! ek baar soch kar toh dekh..." martin reasoned

" haan yaar ...soch kar toh dekh uske baare mein..." Vicky too pessed

" guys i dont wanna talk about it now..i am feeling sleepy now..." rey said dropping the topic

" ok then take ur time...gud9t..." all sighed getting out of his room

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girls side...

" kria rey ke baare mein kya socha...??" neha asked handing her a mug of coffee

" neha mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.." kriya said truthfully

just then maria stepped in the balcony..n said "samajh mein toh tab aayega na jab tum uske baare mein sochogi"

" can i have some sleep guys am feeling very sleepy..." sharon said yawning

" sure..its already late kal sabko kaam par bhi toh jaana hai..." maria said

" haan warna woh khadoos mujhe kaccha kha jayega..." Sharon said dramatically

" no sharon! i'll suggest ur 'SWAYU " to first fry u then eat..." maria laughed

" someone is talking like martin..." neha teased poking her

maria blushed n seeing her blushing , all girls burst out laughing..

" kria i wanted to ask u something..." Sharon said suddenly becoming serious

" yes??kiddo!!"

" can i get my old naughty kria back ?? " Sharon said with a hope in her eyes

hearing this kria hugged her n said " u already got ur old kria back sharon..."

" n one more thing..."

" dont u think ur demand list is growing too much??" kriya taunted
seeing this all smiled

" just promise me u'll always trust me ..."

" offcourse i trust u sharon...n i promise..."

" ok now lets go to sleep...n let see who sleep in the left side of bed first..." kriya said playfully

and kria ran towards her bed while sharon ran after her to grab the bed first...
seeing them maria n neha smiled at eachother...n neha went to her room while maria towards krisha's bed..

kriyansh slept peacefully not wanting to think about each other...

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morning...
all went to their respective works...

swaron n kriyansh went to office...sharon was in swayam's cabin.. waiting 4 swayam to come...kriyansh both went office alone but ended up with eachother at reception , but never said a word to eachother...

rey n kria greeted pinky...n both went to lift...the lift started...n their silent talks began...

rey making puppy face n said in his mind..

"mujhe goodmorning wish bhi nahi kiya"

"mai kyu karu?? pehle tum bhi toh kar sakte the..." kriya made face

"waise to meri har baat cut karte rehti ho...aur aaj baat bhi nahi kar rahi..." rey frowned

" tum bhi toh hamesha ladte rehte ho...aaj ek goodmorning bhi nahi keh rahe!!" kriya too frowned

" mai nahi bolunga" rey narrowed his eyes

"mai bhi nahi bolungi" kriya crossed her arms and stomped her foot

"uff tum chup reh kar bhi kitna bolti ho...tumhara naam toh baatcutter hona chahiye..." rey looked pointedly at her

"baatcutter??" kriya looked at him with confussion written on her eyes

"haan haan baatcutter" rey smiled in mocking

"yeh kaisa naam hai?? kitna ajeeb hai..." kriya rolled her eyes

"tum bhi toh ajeeb ho..." rey looked at her from head to toe

" tumne mujhe ajeeb bola..." kriya made an O' face

" haan bola toh??" rey raised his eyebrows

"what?? main ajeeb hu??" she glared at him

"aur nahi toh kya??" rey nodded

just then kria broke the silence...

" tum mujhe ajeeb kaise keh sakte ho?? She yelled with hands on her hips

" ajeeb ko ajeeb nahi kahenge toh kya kahenge??" rey retorted audibly in equal tone

" tumhe toh mein..." kriya said audibly while making fist to puch him

" tumhe toh mein kya??" rey too came closer

they didnt realized wen their silent talks changed to audible talks...just then lift came to halt n lights went off...

kria ran to rey n hugged him tightly..she dugged her tiny head into his masculine chest while rey embraced her ..

" reyansh...reyansh tum yahi ho na??" she stammered

" haan kria main yahin hu..." rey said softly

he couldnt understand why she was behaving like this...he felt her sobbing...but then kria broke her silence..

" reyansh mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai..."

" its ok kria ...main hu yahi hu tumhare paas..."he began rubbing her back n caressing her hair...

he cupped her face n said...

" kria... stop crying... main hoon na... i am here..tumhare saath...just thodi der mein light aa jayegi..."

he wiped her tears...while kria noded like a small kid...

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swayam entered in his cabin panting...
"uff aaj toh hadh hi ho gayi..."

he saw sharon standing n looking out of the window glasses of the building...

" ummm miss ghai..." he said putting his briefcase on the table

sharon came out from her thought...

" oh!! tum kab aaye??woh am sorry...i was just thinking..."

she looked down avoiding to look towards him...

" hey its ok..waise yeh jaan kar khushi hui ki tum sochti bhi ho..." swayam taunted while taking out a file

sharon just smiled n was going...but swayam caught her wrist n pulled back her towards himself...

she landed towards him with her hands on his chest n his hands on her slender waist...

" kya hua kya soch rahi ho??" swayam asked

unaware of their position, she for the first time looked towards him n tears rolled down from her eyes...

swayam wiped her tears n asked
"kya hua sharon??"

" yeh sab meri galti hai...sab meri galti...na mai woh property un dobriyals ke naam karti na kria ko abhi ko jhelna padta.." sharon burst out crying n hugged him..

" sharon listen to me...its not because of u ok get that straight...so stop blaming urself...now stop crying ..ok??"

sharon thankfully looked at him ...she came out of the hug n said "thanks.."

" its ok...now smile..."

" u r so sweet swayu.." sharon teased him by wiping her cheeks

" sharon!!!" swayam shook his head

they both laughed...

" btw y r u panting so much??" Sharon asked coming out of the hug and taking a step back from him

" oh thats because the lift is not working...& i came up by climbing stairs.."

" have some water swayu.." sharon said handing him a glass of water

" sharon stop calling me that..." swayam frowned
" ok ...baba now have some water..." Sharon smiled


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kriyansh were in same position holding eachother...
just then light came back...kria sighed in a relief...

" are u ok...??" rey asked

kria just nodded n loosened her grip on rey's shirt...rey also loosened his grip from her waist...the lift's door opened n kria was about to move but rey stopped her...she looked at him questioningly...but instead of giving her explanation.. he just swept her off n carried her in his musculine arms n took her towards cabin...

" reyansh yeh aap kya??..." kria asked in shock

rey kept looking straight n proceeded towards his cabin...

" reyansh koi dekh lega..." kria said looking here and there

" koi ni dekhega kria..iss floor pe koi nahi aata..."

he kept her in the couch of his cabin...moved towards the table n brought a glass of water...

" yeh lo ..have some water..."

kria drank some water.. n said "thanks"

he knelt down till her height as she was sitting on the couch...

" ab theek ho...?"

kria nodded...just then rey's office phone rang... he picked the phone...

" ok"

he kept down the receiver

" kria get up abhi is coming..." he warned her

she took a file n faked to see in it..

while rey acted to do something while sitting in his chair away from the couch...

abhi knocked at the door...

" come in..." rey said in professional tone

while entering the cabin...

"hello mr. singhania..." abhishek saw kria n smiled ..

"hello mr. dobriyal.."

they both shook hands...

" hey kria"

abhi was going to hug kria ...but rey spoke in between...

" mr. dobriyal can we finish this meeting soon ...see i've to hurry up for a meeting.." rey said in stern voice

abhishek stopped in the midway n kria looked at rey with confusion as there was no meeting today...

abhishek n rey discussed something about the project ...
n soon abhishek was going to leave...

but rey asked him..."mr. dobriyal are u coming to the bussiness party tonight??"

" sorry mr. singhania actually i've to go out of the town today..so cant come...waise may i know y r u asking??" abhishek excussed

" well nothing as u can spend some time with kria.. she really miss u these days...kria shot an angered look at rey..." rey taunted

"is that so darling...??i am so sorry..actually i also miss u but i am really busy with business these days.."

kria faked smile ..n said "its ok abhi!!" n hugged him...n said "bye"

rey was thunderstuck when kria hugged abhi...after abhi left

" what do u think of yourself haan??" rey asked in anger

" why what happened??" kriya looked at him in confussion

" u r asking that??" he gritted his teeth

"y did u hugged that bastered...??"

" he is still my fiance ..." kriya reasoned

n she was about to move but rey held her wrist behind her back n twisted...
kria was scared n was so much in pain..she could see anger in his eyes...

" reyansh leave me..." she cried in pain

" why... pehle batao.. why did u hugged him??"

" reyansh plz mujhe dard ho raha hai.." kriya said in her meek voice

as soon as she said these lines , he left her wrist...
kria looked at her wrist which became red...rey saw her wrist n felt guilty...

" kri..."

before he could say anything she ran out of the cabin...n entered her cabin...

[authors note: rey's n swayam's cabin were in between whereas kria's cabin was adjacent left to rey's &sharon's cabin was adjacent right to swayam's..like this...

k | r | sw| sh

rey 's n kria's cabin was differentiated by two way mirror ..due to which rey can see what his assistant is doing...n one more two way mirror just adjacent to the door to see who is gonna come next...n same was with swayams cabin...but there was a difference that both swayam n reyam cant see each other as their cabin was divided by a wall as a divider.. kria was unaware of the fact that rey can see her as he always covered that mirror wall with the curtains blades...she knew there was only one 2 way mirror in his cabin...that is adjacent to door...]

kria ran into her cabin n caressing her wrist.. rey shifted the curtains blades and saw her face, tears running through her eyes down to cheeks...he felt bad n guilty...

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at home

neha was in the kitchen ...just then vicky hugged her from behind n placed a peck on her shoulder...smile crept on neha's lips knowing who he was...

" kaagu kya kar rahi ho??" Vicky said

" vicky dont call me that..."

she turned back n engulfed her hands on his neck...

"kyu??"

" i dont like it ..it doesnt make any sense..."

" arey but we are lawyers n hum har senseless baaton mein sense dhood lete hai..." Vicky smirked

" baabu plz chodo mujhe..." neha said getting annoyed

" accha ek baat batao tum mujhe baabu kyu bulati ho??" vicly asked

" woh toh main tumhe pyaar se bulati hu.." neha smiled

" toh main bhi pyaar se hi bulata hu.." Vicky said

" accha???" neha narrowed her eyes at her husband's useless excuse

" aur ni toh kya??accha yeh batao kya bana rahi ho..??" Vicky scratched his head sheepishly

" main khana bana rahi hu..." neha said picking up a utensil from the counter

" no way tum khaana nahi banaogi..." Vicky said snatching a utensil from neha's hand

" but kyu.." neha asked narrowing her eyebrows

" welll umm..." Vicky gulped on seeing furious neha

" what??"

" tum khaana bana ne mein bilkul sharon ki behen ho..." Vicky said while running away from kitchen

" what..." neha stood in shock whenthe realization dawned upon her

she chased him...vicky was running but sensing neha was not coming to catch him..he turned behind...n what he saw flabbergasted him...he came running down to neha who was lying down unconsciously on the floor...he hurriedly picked her up n went to put her on his bedroom's bed...not knowing what to do...he called everyone...he tried to wake her up n even sprinkled water on her face.. she opened her eyes a little bit but again closed it..

soon everyone arrived...maria also arrived n asked everyone to move out..she examined her...she checked her pulses & called everyone in...neha was now fully consious she opened her eyes n vicky hugged her..he made her sit on the bed..

" what happened to her..??" swayam asked

" yes maria.." rey worried

" all of a sudden??" Sharon asked

" is everything is fine now...??" martin tensed

" maria y r u mum..plz say something.." kriya begged

maria looked at all n said " will all of u let me speak??"

all noded like small kids..

maria looked at neha n smiled while neha just blushed...

" there is some good news people...neha is pregnant.." maria informed

" what??" all asked in unison

vicky was just shocked n stayed numb ..rey, swayam n martin started dancing while kriya and sharon started jumping...all were hugging n jumping like maniacs..

accidently... kriyansh hugged ,swaron hugged n martin and maria also hugged ..martin even kissed maria on cheeks in excitement...
as soon as he did that all stopped n looked at him...

" woh excitment mein ho gaya..." said scratching his head and smiling sheepishly

all burst out laughing..
seeing all of them happy, tears filled in neha's eyes...while vicky just hugged her , wept her tears n kissed her on
forehead..n muttered "thank u" in her ears..she smiled through her tears..

swayam came near her gave her a side hug ...while rey jumped on the bed...n hi fived with her...sharon hugged n chirped congrats to her..kria also hugged n congratulated her..

" partner, u see i'll teach ur kid all my secret pranks n..." rey said animatedly

" u r going to spoil our kid mr. rey.." martin glared at him but neha smiled as martin called her baby as "our" kid

all looked at rey...while he sheepishly scratched his head...
all burst out laughing..

" ok ok let her take rest...she is weak now.." maria intervened

" what happened to her..??" all said abruptly at the same time

" relax!! she just need extra care..now all of u leave.." maria explained
all left except vicky...all were happy...

rey, swayam n sharon were getting ready for going to the party whereas kria was not going...she wanted to stay at home...
reyam n sharon left to the party...they sat on a round table..

swaron were stealing glances of eachother...while rey was feeling leftout...

"if ur look-look session is over then can u please give attention to me also..." rey asked getting bored

" tujhe kya hua..??" swayam asked

" tum dono apne mein hi itna khoye hue ho ki mujhse bhi baat karlo..."rey teased

" attention seeker..." swayam and Sharon said in unison

" kria kyu ni aayi??" rey asked

" she said she will be staying at home to take care of neha.." Sharon informed

" tumhari sis bhi na sabke baare mein sochti hai but khud ke baare mein bilkul bhi nahi.." rey shaked his head

" waise rey tujhe ya hua ?? tu kria ko itna miss kyu kar raha hai??" swayam asked suppressing his smile

" who is missing her?? am just..."

" just what??" swayam smirked

" i am getting bored here with both of u...just this..." rey shrugged while taking three glass of orange juice one by one from waiter who came to offer them

swaron chuckled at seeing rey..

" rey dont get annoyed ..i'll just call her.."

sharon called kria n asked her to come n deliberately took shivam's name...

"what was that??" rey asked confussed

" shivam is abhishek's younger brother..kria dont like him he always tries to impress me n kria but fails terribly.."

" whats new in that?? kria ko impress karna mushkil hi ni namumkin hai..." rey taunted

all trio laughed ...
just then sharon saw shivam approaching her...

" hey sharon!!" shivam said checking her out

sharon smiled weakly..

" hey shivam!!" Sharon faked smile

" so whats up??" he said taking up a glass of wine from a waiter who passed by

" everything is fine !!"

swayam was fuming with anger...

" dance??" shivam asked forwarding his hands towards her

" ok!!" Sharon said

they were on dance floor...

" chill ek dance hi toh hai..u go n ask her 4 dance..." rey said to swayam
swayam went n asked 4 dance to sharon..

sharon nodded n started dancing with swayam soon shivam was out of the sight...swaron were ruling on the dance floor...

rey smiled seeing them...just then he felt cool breeze around him..he turned back n saw kria standing n searching 4 them...he was awestruck to see flawless beauty of her..soon she spotted him n went near him..n sat beside him..

"ab tumahara haath kaisa hai..." rey asked

" thik hai.." kriya answered searching for shivam

" am sorry" rey looked at her

" reyansh... swayam n sharon..??"

rey pointed to the dance floor..

kria smiled n seeing her smile he was lost in her smile..

" reyansh mai washroom jaa kar aati hu..."

rey just nodded..she left..

rey was looking here n there but soon spotted someone which glued him to his chair..he saw abhishek taking a chic at backyard...he followed him n saw him getting into a room...he came back n waited 4 kria..kria came back n sat near him...

" kria come with me..." rey asked holding her hand

" but kahaan??" kriya asked

rey didnt said anything just grabbed kria by her hand n took her in front of the room..

" reyansh yahan kaha??"

he knocked at the door..n same thing happened abhi came only in trouser heavily drunk n lipstick on his chest..kria once again slapped him n threw the engagement ring on his face..

this time abhi was also going to slap her but rey caught his hand in the mid air...n slapped him hard...
hearing the commotion ..all nearby people's attention drew towards the voice...the room was backwards the party hall..seeing reyansh singhania involved media flew like bees towards them...

seeing media coming towards them...

rey warned him "ab ek shabd bhi bola na kria ke baare mein toh kal ke newspaper
mein sab kuch chap jayega..samjhe tumhari photos k saath..."

soon media reached there..
" mr. reyaansh singhania...u here?? n who is she?? n who is this man??"

kria was numb...she didnt know what to answer
rey held kria's waist n pulled her slightly n said "well guys one by one..."

" what r u doing here??" another reporter asked
all reporters started bombarding kriyansh with questions

"isnt it a bussiness party...??" rey answered calmly

" who is this man??" one reporter pointed towards abhishek

" well he is a gentle man who forgot his ring in the party hall so we came here to return it.."

" who is this gorgeous lady beside u??"

" well she is my fiance..." rey smiled

all reporters shouted "WHAT??"

it was the biggest news for them..they sidelined the abhishek n started asking various questions to rey..after all he was the business tycoon...

" well people thats it 4 now..we have to leave.." rey said firmly

he was still holding kria by her waist protectively...

reporters took some pics of them n kria was out of shock state till now..

" reyaansh plz mujhe yahan se le chalo..." kriya almost whispered
swaron already reached home...they were waiting 4 kriyansh...

soon kriyansh reached home...n went to their respective rooms..
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next morning...

" HEY BHAGWAAN!!!"

martin shouted at top most of his voice...n this was enough to wake up everyone...all gathered in the living room..this was the first time they woke up before their alarm rang...

" what happened martin??" all asked him

precap: not thought yet...



ps: so two chapters back to back...phew!! this was hell writing...so long n mind u i want long comments...i know this is lame chapters..
critisicm is invited.. any suggestion...??

Res

Unres

I loved both the chapters..

Starting from Neha n Sharon convo..to d lift scene everything were amazing.

Girls really rocked.

Their silent convo was superb..

The way they broke out the silent convo to an audible one was amazing..

Lift scene was marvellous..

Loved 2 see Rey jealous when Kriya hugged him..

He left her bcoz she was feeling pain..

Loved d cabin arrangements...u xplained it very well.

Rey was missing Kriya..

Good dat Sharon called Kriya...n Swayam's jealous was also gud.

Abhishek is such a bas***d he got wat he deserved.

Rey confirmed Kriya as his fiance..wow!!

Waiting for the ultimate Kriyaansh scenes.

Gr8 work Chetna...kudos!!👏👏

N thanks for the back to back chapters.