FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

I have read all ur FFs and u r really an awesome writer. Kudos to u

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Mish

Finally finally caught up. Sorry for not coming to this sooner but you could call it irritation with the way the serial was gong and so I kind of thought that the only way I could read about these two again would be to see the original DK again which I did.

Anyway it was nice to read the whole story in one go like reading a book.

Wonderful writing as usual.

Thanks

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Hello Mish...me back.

Loved everything in it.

Loved the take of Nidhi on the projects with her colleagues...but would have enjoyed her achievements and the acceptance of her ideas and belief she holds by one and all.

Nandini's demisal was the very emotional part...the way Nidhi held up in the most difficult phase of her life was very nice...yes certainly the roles of AshNi were reversed for that time, but always Ashu is the hero of Nidhi...and after effects was smoothly handled with you.

The characterization of Ashu is nice and loved him this way too...he is matured though with his insecurities, which are correct in its place...he being so caring to his wife (ex-wife) was worth praising.

As you said, yes Ranga's first reaction cannot be positive with him being also in somewhat same kind of situation...and loved he came to know about Ashu...the trio (Ashu, Ranga and Nidhi) convo was amazing.

Rohan's entry is unexpected, but at the same time cool too as you didn't lag it much..would have hated the jealousy😆😆.

Loved Ashu wanting Nidhi to call him with his first name, which I always wanted to see in the show...chalo at least while being alone with him she will do so😃.

Woww...Ranji got engaged...so happy for Ranga..thanks to Nidhi and of course Sarika.

Hoping that you will continue it some time or the other as would love to read how their relationship progresses and becomes strong, how the society accepts it, the masala you wanted to create making Rohan entry (not much though😆), Ranji marriage, and of course the AshNi marriage and some bits of afterlife too😉..see there are so many things I am waiting to read😆😆😆.

Please do continue it whenever you want and take how much time you want, but do continue...will be waiting for Closing the Loop season 2.

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Cathy25

@Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Mish my dear, how do you do this every single time? I mean you weave such beautiful stories that i find myself absorbed into them, losing sense of all else. Ashutosh and nidhi, characters we have seen in other ffs too. Yet there is a freshness in each story that i can never get bored but just wanna read more and more. One example being, i knew your ff consisted of 21 parts , even before reading and as i read and find myself inching towards the finale of the story, my mind shouts out, 'oh no. Its gonna be ending soon' and i just didn't want that.
Loved the character of Nandini that you had introduced in this ff. Tears were streaming down my face when you described her last stages, but i'm glad you didn't overtly stretch things.don't think i could have handled it :-P
Thank you for bringing ashutosh and nidhi back to us again, and this time in an academia setting. Loved it. Surprisingly, in my head, i was picturising sharad as ashu this time. Guess the change in profession did it. Or maybe the fact that i was not attached to the actual show, but only to your ffs. Ha ha. So it was easy to place different faces as per my imagination.
Ok long rant over. Thanks once again. Am now off to read other kltk ffs of yours, before moving on to the blog.

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Shari30

@Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Misssh we want more of Cl... we want to see ASHNI facing their colleague... want to see ashu jealous ... hehe told u nagger in chief is back buhahhahahha

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DikshaBaluja

@DikshaBaluja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: oaz30
Misssh we want more of Cl... we want to see ASHNI facing their colleague... want to see ashu jealous ... hehe told u nagger in chief is back buhahhahahha

Hi5 Shari di...desperately want the same...Jealous Ashu and then Nidhi manaofying Ashu :)
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