OS - 'Ek Anjaana Ehsaas'

Don_theEvil thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
"Ek Anjaana Ehsaas"

shiv in looking thought his files but have no concentration on it. His mind and thought are fill about her. What was happening with him? He is in this village from past days and even from start his thoughts always remain around her. What was happening shiv?. Why you are so concern when she get hurt? why you feel you need to protect to her from everything why do I feel she is the one who is from me.. last time when you went stop to marriage ceremony your last and first thought only to save anandi. Why this feeling only centered to one person anandi.

Why do you need to find a reason to meet her. to see her. shiv get a grip on your emotions. What is so special that you feel drawn towards her. her smile her courage everything. You never feel for anyone like this then why her.

He don't like that she is married ya surely. He hate that whatever person who left her but something a selfish side of him is happy. If he is still in her life where your position in her life shiv. Now he realizes he is thankful to him whatever his name is.

He cannot name that feeling as he feel about her.

In this past time he try to find several reason to justified his attraction towards her but no use. There is something between them he feels. He reaches towards her school in to trance and saw her teaching to students. No one looking at him..

He absently walks in middle of session of annadi lesson to students. Aanndi look surprise to see him there..

She said to him " khani khama collector sahab aaj kaise aana huva yaha " , hamne to socha tha ki aapko waqt hi nahi milta apne kaam se to aaj achanak yaha kaise padhare aap"

Shiv come back in sese to listing her voice and found himself standing in front of her. what mai yaha tak aagaya soche shochte.. shiv you are mad ab kya bateyga..

He replied " hmm anandi ji wo kuch kaam tha jiske bare mia muje baat karne thi , wo aaj school ka inspection ke liye inspector aanewale hai wo batane aaya tha"

"dekhne aay tha ki wo abhi ta ki wo abhi taka aye bhi ya nahi"

Bach gaya shiv.

Anandi smoothly replied to him "dhanyawad aapka, jo aap hame khud yaha par batane chale aaye" .,, "waise bhi aapka yaha par aana sabko accha lagta hai..sab yaha par aapke fan ban chuke hai"

Aur appko? shiv almost replied immediately

Anandi look surprise to his question

Jee? Mai samji nahi'..

He laugh nervously "are mai to ye keh raha tha ki.. aapko yaha par mera anna pasand hai bhi ya nahi.. varna kahi teacher ji gussa na ho jaye. Ki mai unke baccho ko disturbed karne aajata hu"

Anandi replied to him "asie koi baat nahi collector saha sach mai, yaha par aapka aana mere sath sako pasand hai" .

"waise wo inspector ka tak aanewale hai.. abhi taka aye hi nahi.. bus sab kuch shanty se nipat jaye aur in baccho ke bhavishya mai uska koi fayada bhi ho"

Aate he honge aap chinta mat kijiye." " aapne aapka school bahot acche se sambhala hai isliye sab kuch thik hi hoga. Apki mehnat is school mai hai.. isliye is school ko sarkar ki taraf se madat milkar hi rahegi.. " shiv give her assurance..

Shiv always like her honesty she never try to hide her fear but she never let fear take over her. but then when he give her assurance her face turn in to smile that smile is not less then diamond.

a small smile come his lips to seeing her smile he realize that today.. What he feeling about her.. thats love' he try hard to find meaning behind all this before but know his heart feel that breathing and special feeling about her. her smile made him happy.. her hurt her tear give pain to his heart and now when she fear of something he wanted to protect her. now he will stand for her always. His love realization for her. Well he will wait for her until she realizes any feelings for him he can wait'. But now his circle of love will complete very soon..

The end


(this is my first attempt to write os.. i never write os before.. i hope everyone like it..)


Note : ye os maine khushi ki dhamki se darkar likha tha.. ye uske dhamki ka natija hai.. 🤣.. varna mai nahi likhti.. par khushi madam ne dara diya muje isliye likhna pada... 🤣 🤣

Edited by DonIsback - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

41

Views

9k

Users

16

Likes

133

Frequent Posters

Rashu1505 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Patu patu that was lovely ...
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
khusi_* thumbnail
21st Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
so sweet...i want this thing exactly in BV..lovely prati:)
-Serene.Rose- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Oh lovely OS yar..

You must write more.. 👍🏼 Would love to read another OS from you... ye dil maange more😆
bluerobin thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
prati, loved shiv's silent romance :) ... keep writing :) . waiting for more :)
Suchi- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
It was sooo sweet

LOL
OK I think I should write one too now that everyone is writing

ANSH

payalibm thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
oyyy mast likha hai
lovely...write more...plzzz...dont stop writing... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
jyoti.l thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Lovely OS..👍🏼 hope something like this happens in BV too.

preity_d thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
nice OS 😊... realy the high time for shiv's realisation
Ritushree_Nadal thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
lovely OS prati.loved it.u should write more yaar.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".