Virman SS: Pyaar mein dard..(Pt 4 added!)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ain't I crazy! Cos, I am back with a new story!! I hope you like it! Please excuse me for this insanity! I completely blame Virman for this!


She was lying in her bed, extremely weak, and exhausted... The chemo therapies had eaten her up... Slowly she opened her eyes, and the bright sunlight fell on her eyes... She said in her almost unhearable and frail voice:
Virat... Virat...

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This is the prologue! I am going to make many chapters to this, only for you guys!!
Leave your comments for me!
Edited by Sruthi_Virmanli - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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YAY!! You are back!! I am super excited!! And I am first one to comment!! Continue soon please!! :D x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woowww a new SS from you...very excited...plz continue t soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ! interesting prologue! pls continue!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz plz tell me what is the tune and song in the background of promo when virat confess his love for manvi and give her a flower bokey in that promo what tune is use plz tell me the name
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love the proluge!!
cont asap nd pm me
thanks fr the pm
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Originally posted by: 1234hhoe

Plz plz tell me what is the tune and song in the background of promo when virat confess his love for manvi and give her a flower bokey in that promo what tune is use plz tell me the name


What? Which tune? Which promo?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it please continue fast I am curious to know more about the story...
You know even I am mad because of virman😉 I think every virmanian is mad.
Ok thank you for the pm and once again continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here it is, Part 1...
I personally was emotional while writing this... So tissue boxes may be needed...
Enjoy!
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Mai bhi tumhe aaj promote karna chahta hoon... Kya tum mere life partner banoge?
---Flashback ends---

Recalling this, she shed tears... How they both had fallen in love.. It was all going perfect, until her cancer took a deeper dig into her... Though she was being treated, the pain she had was worse than being stamped by an elephant...
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It was already 2 months since they started her radiation and chemotherapy... Manvi's cheeks were sucked in and her eyes that captured everyone's attention were red as blood...
She did not lose faith, because she knew she had to live, for her Di and Virat!

Manvi: Virat... Virat...
She called for him with great difficulty and pain.. But she did not go unheard... Virat heard her and appeared right in front of her..

Virat: Manvi! Manvi! Kya hua?!? Phir se dard ho raha hai? Doctor ko bulaaun??
After seeing her side effects, Virat would get scared even if she sneezed...

Manvi: Chill maro partner... Mai theek hoon.. In fact, mai Bahut better feel kar rahi hoon.. Mai bas tumhe dekhna chahti thi... Yahi baitho na thodi Der ke liye.. Mujhe accha lagegi...

Virat: Tum chaho to mai yaha apna pura zindagi Yahi pe bitaunga...
He held her hand and put it against his cheek...
I love you Manvi... Kuch nahi hoga tumhe...

He gently touched her forehead... And his touch made her feel like heaven...

Manvi held his hand too...

Manvi: I love you too partner... Apne aap se zyaada...

Virat caressed her forehead, and she went to sleep... He kissed her forehead and sat right there..
He shed tears, of pain and love.. He could not bare to see her in so much pain..

Virat realized what true love was.. It was not always like a dream.. It included pain, soreness and tears... A lot of it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sruthi!!!!!!!U r back with another 1!!!🤗
Interesting yaar!!
Continue soon and PM me when u update.

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