pyaar ka mausam hai

This story is totally different from original story but there is no changes in the characters'

In this story maanvi and jeevika are twins but not identical and jeevika is 10 minutes older than maanvi..

Manvi : Jannu you always take 3 hours to dress up yar' I m bored here sitting alone .

Jeevika : Mannu tum bina .. I didn't take 3 hours '..don't exaggerate it OK!

Mannu: OK meri maa

Jaanu: Maa nahi Dee. ( with a smile)

Maanu: OK dee plz do quick otherwise we will reach there after party only..( with a teasing tone)

Jaanu: That cant be yar '. Party is not going to start until I reach there

Maanu: As if this party was organize for u

Jaanu: Yu hi sa maj lo ( u can say that)

Maanu: Have u already tell Viren about your feelings? '. Oh yar that's why he is giving a party

Jaanu (with a sad expression): Mannu don't tease that much '..u know very well that he like somebody else and today party is given for his brother who is coming back from London

Maanu: Don't get so excited '. Surely he will fall in love with u today coz u looking like an angel

Befor Jaanu to respond Beji come inside.

Beeji: Manni and jeevika what is taking u two such a long time.. Dabbu is waiting for u

Maanu and Jaanu together (with a shock) : WHAT!!!

Maanu : NO one is taking Dabba

Beeji: Manvi how can u be so mean .. he is also invited nar

Maanu: Beeji he will surely make us embarrass like last time

Beeji (smiling): He promise me that he wont eat too much this time

Maanu ( with an angry face): Daaba and promise ' they don't go along .. he will surely break it .. I swear

Jaanu: Maanu chor na .. Janay de na

Mannu : Jaanu bol rahi hai isliye ' I will let him come

Beeji : come quick ok

Maanvi , Jeevika and Dabbu reached the party'

Sorry for any mistakes

They reached Vadera mension '.. Mannvi was amazed by the look of the this luxurious house like palace..

Maanu: Di tera sasural ' Just amazing I will be lucky enough to be in law of this house

Jaanu (who was abit worried and excited) : maanu stop with ur nonsense

When manvi looked back to find Dabbu , he was no where to be found .

Maanu: Jaanu ' Daabu is lost

Jaanu ( smiling): Don't worry maanu he is there enjoying drinks and pizzas

Maanu(irritated): I will not forgive him this time' I told u he and promise never go along together

Jaanu: But u and ur promise will isn't it ?

Maanu: Of coz .. U can have faith on me .. I will never let Viren'

When she was telling , viren appeared..

Viren: Aham Aham ' I can hear my name' what are two talking by the way

Jeevika was scared' She was shaking ' Just then

Manvi ( with a sweet smile): Nothing viren it was just that ur house is so beautiful .. I wish I had one too..

Viren (teasing): My brother is coming back today .. so u can make this house yours..

Manvi: Viren tum bi na

Viren: Ok oK now come in '

When they were entering .. unknown voice call viren from the back' that was no other than viren girlfriend Ruby who is very fashionable and stylish '''

Viren( giving sweet smile) : you two inside ' I will be back in a while

By hearing this Jaanu eyes were filled with tears

Maanu: Us ko bhi abhi aar na tha '. Dee don't worry everything will be fine

Jannu: He didn't even glance at me ' u said he will fall in love with me '. I have a crash on him for about two years and he don't even care about me

Maanu(smiling): Stop your tears '.. instead of angle , u will look like a ghost Ok.. STOP IT ( with a high pitch voice)

Unknown voice : what and why?

That was a young man holding a guitar who was ready to sing '.

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Part8 - page 12

Part 9 - page 14

Part 10 - page 17

Part 11 - page 19

Part 12 - page 22

Part 13 - page 24

part 14 - page 27

Part 15 - page 29

part 16 - page 32

Part 17 - page 35

Part 18 (last one) - page 37

Mannu: what ????

Young man: You just said stop it when I was about to sing

Mannu: I didn't mean u … I was just saying to my dee

Young man: Your dee is a ghost ?

Mannu( with a smile): Dee I told u right u will look like a ghost when u cry ..

Young man(teasing ): NO I m wrong .. Your dee is not ghost … U r crazy .. talking alone

Mannu( angrily): What do u mean .. I am talking with my dee .. cant u see ?? R u blind??

Young man(smiling): Then where is ur dee .. I cant really see but yesterday only I check my eyes so I guess there is no problem with my eyes

Mannvi turn to look Jannu but she was no where to be found..

Manvi( worried): All these happen becoz of u

Young man : Crazy …

By saying that he went away from there and manvi went to wash room to find jeevika..

In the wash room

Mannu: Jannu !!!

Jannu (sobbing): maanu I cant handle it anymore … I guess it would be better if I go back home and I am sorry .. u couldn't enjoy party becoz of me

Mannu : Don't be stupid dee … u still need to introduce with my husband

Jannu(surprisingly): who??

Mannu(smiling): Viren's brother

Manvi and Jeevika couldn't stop their laughing … At the same time Viren was introducing his brother with his friends..

Mannu(teasing): Dee I have lost the chance to meet with my future husband as viren might be introducing him …

Jannu: Don't worry Mannu I will find a better guy for u

Mannu(smiling): no dee I m not patient like u … If u find then the guy will be like u …. He wont utter a word and I have to wait for years

Jannu gave a sweet smile …..

Mannu: Dee lets go now …. We still need to enjoy the party

Jannu: ya mannu .. You r right .. Lets go!

The hall was overcrowded with people so Jannu and Mannu don't know where to sit..

Then mannu saw empty seats in the corner of the hall…

Mannu: Jannu I have found it ..come with me

Jannu(with a smile): Jo aap char hay Master

Maanu(smiling): Jannu tumhara sense of humour toda kam hai…

They sat in the corner start to talk and eat .

While Manvi was talking with Jeevika ,viren came and took away jeevika to the dance floor but manvi didn't know as she was so much lost her talk.. By seeing an empty seat .. a young boy sit there

Mannu: Jannu don't worry I still love You ok …

Young boy(raising his eyebrow) :What!

Mannu(turning towards jeevika seat): Tum….where is my Jannu? ( he was the same guy she had an argument before)

Young boy: I know I know most of the girl fall in love with me at first look only …. NO need make an excuse dear

Mannu: Ye excuse nahi .. I was talking with my dee

Young boy: But u just said jannu

Mannu: Ya I call her Jannu

Young boy (smiling): Weirdo … I guess you came back from mental houspital right or you forget to take your medicine..

Then maanvi saw her sister in the dance floor with Viren … she felt so happy that she Jump

Mannu : Yess!!!

Then she rush to dance floor ..

Young boy (talking himself): I am not wrong she is crazy …. But why I don't want to stop when I talk with her

In the dance Floor

Jannu(with a shaky voice): Viren … I told I cant dance.

Viren(smiling): No you can and I know you are perfect

Jannu(surprising): What do u mean?

Viren :I just mean u are perfect in everything ..

Just then Ruby came and told Viren to dance with her … Viren couldn't reject her offer but he felt sorry for Jeevika….

Jannu (smiling): Its ok u can dance with her .. thank god now I don't need to dance ( but she was crying inside as she never wanted this time to end )

Viren : Thank a lot jeevika …

Then Ruby and Viren start dancing ….

Viren thinking himself : why I don't get that same intense feeling when I am with jeevika than Ruby …. And she is my girlfriend ..i should have more feeling for her than jeevika.

Viren and Ruby continue dancing and Mannvi take Jeevika with her..

Mannu: Jannu u were looking so romantic dear … By the way … u didn't let me know u were going to dance with ur dream boy … Why?? U know bcoz of u I got into a big mess…. With that stupid crazy …Arghhh

Jannu: What are you saying ? What problems did u create?

Mannu tell everything to Jannu and Jannu couldn't stop laughing at that humorous happenings

Viren who was peeking at Jannu smile for no reason …. He felt good when he saw Jannu was laughing