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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#561

AWWW Thanx so much for continuing!!! I realy hope ur surgery goes well....and get well soon!! Oh and btw great update!!

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jyothi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#562

hey thanx a ton 4 con on my request plztake care and hope u get well soon.

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dua

@simrin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#563

👏 MINDBLOWING 👏 PLZ PLZ CONT SOON

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Roshni

@.Roshni.

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Posted: 19 years ago

#564

i hope u feel fine after ur THIRD surgery and i don't know how if feels 2 have surgery but i think u sld talk 2 my mom she had 6 or seven surgeries y? 2 tell u the truth i don't remember

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Posted: 19 years ago

#565

that was a wonderful part..... dont worry ... ur health comes first....do take care and hope to see a next part after a great revcovery

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

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Posted: 19 years ago

#566

Chapter 77.

Dhruv is strolling in his room. He gets frustrated, he sits down to do some office work, but can't get his mind stuck down to work. He decides to go looking for Vedika. (Relax Dhruv she's only gone to watch a movie that to with her best friend) Dhruv gets ready and goes to Kavita's room.

Dhruv: ma??

Kavita: ari dhruv beta..aao?? andar aao?? kya baat hai tum kuch pareshaan lagrahe ho?

Dhruv: nahi ma, actaually main thora bored horaha tha, isliye soch raha tha ke main cinema chala jaon...vedika aur rahul ke saath film diklonga

Kavita: vo toh teekh hai beta liken mujhe nahi lagta tum film dekh paoge

Dhruv: kyun?

Kavita: kyunke time dekho beta...shaam ka show toh bas khatam hone wala hoga..you won't make it...

Dhruv: (to himself) oh god...ma yeh sbah kya kehrahe hai...main kaunsa film dekhna chata hoon....mujhe toh bas vedika....(frustrated) (to kavita) to kya huwa ma, hum dinner karlenge...ma please bataye na voh kaunse theatre gaye hai??

Kavita signs and gives in. She tells him where Vedika and Rahul planned to meet and Dhruv kisses his mom and gets off. Meanwhile, movie is over, Rahul and Vedika come out the theatre.

Vedika: wow!!! kya amazing film thi..haina?? im so glad i came...aaj maine bohat enjoy kiya!!!

Rahul: of course tum mere (straightens up his collars) saath jo aaye thi..itne achi company thi...film toh achi hone he thi...(smiles)

Vedika: (gives him a you-so-full-of -youself look) ya ya...what ever...anywayz rahul mujhe bohat bhook lagrahe hai..dinner karlen...

Rahul: haan come on let's go....

Vedika and Rahul walk upto his car. Rahul opens the car door for Vedika. Vedika smiles and sits in. Rahul then goes to driving seat and sits in. He drives off. Just as Rahul sits in, Dhruv comes in his car, he sees both Vedika and Rahul. He gets a little jealous. He then follows Rahul and Vedika. They both are laughing in the car. Rahul then stops near a restaurant. They both go into together. Vedika comes in and is a bit surprised. The restaurant is mainly empty, and just has a few people. A group of girls, sitting in the far end having their desert.

Vedika: (laughs) vah kya restaurant hai...bahar se itna shaandaar...aur andar...(laughs)

Rahul: vedu??? shurrup..chalo...(walks in and sits down on a table of two)

Vedika and Rahul sit down. Waiter comes and gives the menu. Waiter stands there. Rahul passes the menu to Vedika.

Rahul: tum order karo...(smiles cutely)

Vedika smiles and opens it and is reading the menu. Rahul looks at the waiter, and the waiter smiles and says he will come back in a few minutes. Just then Dhruv walks into the restaurant. Rahul sees Dhruv.

Rahul: dhruv???

Vedika looks up and is surprised to see Dhruv. Dhruv gives a fake smile and walks upto them.

Rahul: (stands up and shakes Dhruv's hand) ari dhruv tum yahan kaise?

Dhruv: vo....main....(Vedika interrupts)

Vedika: cricket khel ne aya hai dhruv!!! (Rahul and Dhruv look at Vedika) restaurant is the fine place to play cricket haina rahul??

Rahul: oh baba sorry...(Vedika smiles and so does Dhruv) come sit dhruv....

Dhruv: no its ok..you continue main chalta hoon...

Rahul: itne jaldi??

Dhruv: haan vo actually maine kisi ke saath dinner ka programme rakha tha (looking at vedika, who's busy deciding what to order) magar vo busy hai

Rahul: (confused) kya matlab??

Dhruv: (looks at Rahul and smiles) client ke saath dinner ke meeting thi. magar lagta hai vo nahi aaye ga...shaid busy ho

Rahul: hmmm shaid...

Dhruv: anyways you two carry on and i'll see you another time...ok??

Dhruv walks off before Rahul can say anything. Rahul then sits down and looks at Vedika. Dhruv walks to the entrance, and looks back. He sees Vedika and thinks to himself that she doesn't care about him anymore. He has teary eyes. As soon as Dhruv walks out, Vedika looks up.

Vedika: dhruv tum kya looge?? (surprised to see dhruv gone)

Rahul: dhruv nahi hai..voh chalagaya

Vedika: kya?? (shocked) ek minute rahul main abhi ati hoon ok? tum aisa karo tum khana order karlo....

Rahul: par tum jaa kahan rahe ho??

Vedika leaves without saying anything. She runs outside. Dhruv is standing near his car, looking very depressed. Vedika comes calling for dhruv. Dhruv's face lightens as he hears Vedika call his name. He then turns around. Vedika comes running to Dhruv. She comes face-to-face. It's rather windy, and Vedika's hair are blowing across her face. She takes some of her hair and pushes it behind her ear.

Vedika: kya huwa dhruv?? tum vahan se chale kyun aaye??

Dhruv: vo....(doesn't know what to say and remains quiet, he just looks at Vedika and then looks away)

Vedika signs and hugs him. She rests her head on his chest, and wraps her arms around his waist.

Vedika: kya huwa dhruv?? abhi thak naraaz ho?? (unhugs him and looks at him, with her hari blowing across her face) im sorry dhruv

Dhruv: (looks at Vedika straight into her eyes- he can see her love and melts, he gives a little smiles, pushes her hair back and hugs her) im sorry too...

Both are in a tight embrace. They then unhug.

Dhruv: come on lets go back inside.

Vedika smiles. They walk in arm-in-arm. Rahul has ordered the food. and its on the table. Dhruv Vedika walk to the table.

Rahul: kahan the tum duno...idiots...im soo hungry...

Both laugh and sit down. Waiter comes with another plate for Dhruv.

Vedika: no its ok...(looks at dhruv) hum ek he plate mein khalenge...

Dhruv smiles. Waiter then leaves with the plate. All three have a nice dinner, and enjoy each others company. Rahul and Dhruv crack jokes and Vedika can't stop laughing. They order a desert. A big desert and all three attack it. Waiters watch them and laugh.

The End.

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 19 years ago