Mohabbat ka safar {walk into history}virman ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello sneha here again with a new idea for virman 😉
i know i know i haven't completed my last ss
Virman ss pyar hai ya sajabut kya karun virman made my mind with new idea 😆
i'll update that one also
so here is new one it is a kinda of historical epic love story and merged with new modern virman {kind of reincenation}
ok guys one most important thing i love kings and queens their style pricess princess thier language but at the same time i am poor at that point i mean at history so adjust with that.
and i wanna make sure there is no realtion to real history or any story its all my imagination and fictional so dont relate it
and hnyou can help me with historical things and rajkumar rajkuamri stuff.
leave ur comments if you want me to continue this after reading part1 scroll down for that
introduction: this is a fiction about the eternal love of a princess with enemy's sainapati's son and how they fight for their love how her love change him, how they fight for thier love and with whom,
to know who is real who is fake.?
will they survive till end or die??
or will their love also die? or they came again to become one ??
what's the mystry of this past and present?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part1

This is from the time of 16th century when Mughal emperors were ruling the country. Maharaj maharana pratap is the king whose emperor is extending from Afghanistan to bay of Bengal. He is a king who loves his people and has a good rapport among the janta of his kingdom. He has many enemies who have an eye on his emperor and his one and only princess Rajkumari Manvjyoti'Rajkumari manvjyoti is the most beautiful princess of the time. Everyone has heared a lot about her, her beauty, her innocence her intelligent, her veerta {bravery} yet her politeness everyone wants to see her once in life'she is a true princess but with some naugtyness always at her mind which his father grandmother maharani gayatri devi was not aware about this. She has friendly relationship with her dasiyan {servants} but nandiniis like her sister both love eachother and nandini always protect her from bad eyes. Rajkumari manvjyoti have one younger brother and sister from her stepmother maharani kamolika who are not at all love her or infact say hate her as she is an apple of Maharaj's eye and maharaj always wanted manvjyoti to be on his singashan to be next maharani after his death as maharaj very well aware about that his younger son rajkumar bheem is not at all efficient for this and rajkumari bhoomika {step siblings} and stepmother are jealous of this they wanted bheem to be next king but maharaj maharana pratap was not aware of this and not manvjyoti she just know her siblings not like her much. One more reson of bhoomika not liking rajkumari manvjyoti was she is not beautiful as her, no one likes her everyone just praised elder princess. Princess manvjyoti was an apple of everyones eye but no one is aware about her naughtiness.

Maharani gayatri devi was standing in a huge kaksh {room } infront of Maa durga's murti praing for wellness of her family. She was praying special today as her son is coming back after beating nearby king who tried to attack them from back. She was not all alone but her favorite granddaughter rajkumari manvjyoti was not there well she was not angry at her at all as she was here with her since last week his father was on war and today she must be in her kaksh resting.

Rajkumarimanvjyoti's kaksh

It is the most beautiful part of this mahal as from one side of this huge room was visible the entrance of their kingdom and other side at the sunset making the most beautiful view in her room by engrossing all rays together. And on the back side there is a hugeee garden well decorated with all types of flowers and plants the most peaceful and beautiful place and she loves to be here. In the middle of room there is a huge king size round bed which was decorated with red princess style sheets and fresh flowers whole kaksh was covers with malmal's mat {most soft piece of cloth} not to hurt princess feet. On the one side there was a table with all jewellary and makeupthings. {well she is princess so she is hving all stuff} but still she don't like much these jewellary stuff she loves to be simple.

Nandini came running to her room , "rajkumari..rajkumari maharani gayatri devi aa rahi hai"

But she was nowhere to be seen she searched whole kaksh to find her {rajkumari ka room hai chota thodi na hoga} and then nandini's moind strike where princess could be''''..and she ran to the back of kaksh to find her in garden.

In garden a perfect figure with long hairs till her back wearing a beautiful orange lehnga choli was running in between the trees making chan chan sound with her payal's and other little jewellary. Nandini recognisd her from back and ran to her rajkumari rajkumari'''''.and she turned just to make sun light dim with the shine on her beautiful face, she turned and her long hairs made pattern on her face she took it to side giving a vision to her angelic face her dark black eyes with little kajjal and slightest makeup shining more and her ears with hanging beautiful yet simple earings and her nose having aa nose pin on right side, she stood there cathching her breath..nandini came to her rajkumari dadi saa aa rahi hain

Rajkumari manvjyoti, "nandini holding her aap chinta mat kijiye hum unke aane se pehle waise ban jayenge jaise who hume dekhna chahte hai and she smiled to which nandini gave a smile..

Rajkumari chaliye"

And she was about to leave she hit his forehead with her most beautiful hands , "hum to bhool h gaye and she turned to answers small kids who were waiting for their rajkumari's answer she leaned forward and hum aap k saath kal khelnge aur abhi aap sab jayo and she made a sound by clapping and many servants came in fraction of seconds and she told them in true princess style, "in bachon ko sahi salamat ghar bhej do aur in logon ko khana khila dena" and she left.

Nandini, "rajkumari aap in bachon ko har roz bulati ho aur khana khilato ho aap jante hai agar maharaj ya maharani ya phir dadisa aur kisiko v pata chal gaya to unhe acha nahi lagega ke ek rajkumari ho kar aap garib abchon ke saath khelti hai"

Rajkumari, "hume bachon ke saath maja ata hai aur hum yahan k rajkumari hai kisi ko pata nahi chalega uar chalega v to aap hain humre saath and she winked and ran to her kaksh to welcome her dadisa andnandini ebehind her sambhal ke rajkumari. "

guys leave your honest feedback of u want me to continue this or not

Precap: a veer jodha fighting in jungle
Edited by snehamaanvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow...u r bak with yt anothr virman ff...omg...luv u for dis girly...🤗 well...an entirely entirely different plot...
awsum hun...👏
rajkumari manvjyothi...wz tryin 2 imagine mannu in princess attire...wud luk really pretty 4 sure 😳
n liked how u merged punters to the story...😊
plzz cont soon dear n pm me wen ya update...😊
Edited by alicemath - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oi Di Im really angry with u wheres my PM
For this
Beautiful FF...If I didnt see this post then i would have not read the first part or intro of this FF Very Bad...
But...
Kya concept hai amazing!!!
Aww Manvi as a princess wow and her punters so cute
Cant wait to see Virat
And the intro seemed so interesting so OMG they have to fight for their love oh no but their love is eternal right???
Continue asap and Definately PM me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hs7071

Oi Di Im really angry with u wheres my PM
For this
Beautiful FF...If I didnt see this post then i would have not read the first part or intro of this FF Very Bad...
But...
Kya concept hai amazing!!!
Aww Manvi as a princess wow and her punters so cute
Cant wait to see Virat
And the intro seemed so interesting so OMG they have to fight for their love oh no but their love is eternal right???
Continue asap and Definately PM me!!!



thnku all guys for ur response
and hoor jaani i didn't pm anyone i thought o pm with pyar hai ya saja to all
so i thouoght to pm latter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman



thnku all guys for ur response
and hoor jaani i didn't pm anyone i thought o pm with pyar hai ya saja to all
so i thouoght to pm latter



Achaa theek hai but next tym
It wont work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hs7071



Achaa theek hai but next tym
It wont work



ok sweety this wouldnt happn nxt tme 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting n a different concept which is not seen yet
plz continue
you dint pm this part😒
but next time plz pm
pz dont delay cant wait 2 see our veer jodha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oyeee sneha plzzz cont and PM me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey plz cntinue soon.its awesum...
Superb

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